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Matthew Daniel Carter (Pilgrim)
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Member Since 06/25/2008
Last Online 10/28/2008
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Website/Blog: www.myspace.com/myjourneyneverends
About Myself: Truth only exists within an individuals personal experience. If I believe I am a pitcher of orange juice and if you come near me I scream because I think that you will spill me, who are you to tell me I'm wrong? There are many John Wayne's that are locked in insane asylums because they believe they are something that other's say they are not. So my writing is my truth, regardless how insane some of them may be regarded, projected the way I intrepret it. I have travelled the world and have hitchiked across America. I've made my home in tents, drain tunnels, cars, and an occasional apartment. I've been married for seven years, in fact, I met my wife (Scooby on this site) as I was hitchiking down a lone highway in Georgia. But that's another story. Anyway, life is short then we die. I can't change the world, but maybe, just maybe, I can make a difference.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 10, 2008Feast Of Worms, Chapter 7Horror 262
Oct 8, 2008Feast Of Worms, Chapter 6Horror 264
Oct 7, 2008Feast Of Worms, Chapter 5Horror 264
Oct 5, 2008Feast Of Worms, Chapter 4Horror 315
Oct 4, 2008Feast Of Worms, Chapter 3Horror 306
Oct 3, 2008Feast Of Worms, Chapter 2Horror 311
Oct 3, 2008Feast Of Worms, Chapter 1Horror 449
Sep 24, 2008Why, Daddy?Poetry 323
Sep 22, 2008Please, Come Home. Please.Miscellaneous Stories 348
Sep 21, 2008Run Katy RunMiscellaneous Stories 730
Sep 20, 2008An Undeniable TruthNon-Fiction 528
Sep 13, 2008What Goes Around. . . Well, You Know The RestMiscellaneous Stories 834
Sep 12, 2008Comforting MemoriesPoetry 312
Sep 11, 2008The DescentPoetry 146
Sep 9, 2008A Faithful SailPoetry 246
Sep 8, 2008Two Profound WordsNon-Fiction 366
Sep 8, 2008A Haiku MysteryPoetry 267
Sep 6, 2008The LighthousePoetry 248
Sep 5, 2008Rendition Of A RosePoetry 298
Sep 4, 2008Wisdom Is For The BirdsMiscellaneous Stories 586
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Comments

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-10-05 22:47:25

Tweaked the vauge parts you mentioned. Another good find. Very observant.

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-10-05 22:37:18

Good catch Synchronicity. This is what I've been looking for in healthy criticism. Changed a bit in the first paragraph, you were right about too many Samuel's.

Title article: Chalk, Chapter 5
Date: 2008-10-04 14:30:18

Not bad.  
I felt like I had to climb a few steps up a hill. Somehow, this chapter didn't flow downward as the rest of them, maybe it was the childhood reverie. Something didn't seem to fit.  
Keep up the good work.

Title article: Chalk, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-10-04 14:24:28

Interesting turn of events. From tragedy to strategy- now begins the mental challenge.  
You're still doing a good job. The flow is smooth and the chapters are easy to read.

Title article: Chalk, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-10-04 14:17:53

The momentum seems to still be flowing in a downward direction. The story brings to mind a Stephen King book. Your doing a good job keeping the interest intact. Well done.

Title article: Chalk, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-10-04 14:09:38

Pretty good.  
You're keeping the momentum going, like beginning a run from the top of the hill, when you start it becomes difficult to stop.

Title article: Chalk, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-10-04 14:01:42

Not bad.  
You've built up the character and created an air of suspense that brings the reader's curiosity to the next chapter.  
Good job.

Title article: Wisdom Is For The Birds
Date: 2008-10-04 12:14:15

Thank-you for all the feedback. The story holds many interpretations and hidden meanings, I guess, as a parable should.

Title article: A Healing ©
Date: 2008-10-04 11:46:59

Pretty good. Fun read all the way to the end.  
Interesting ending, almost comical.  
Another good read. 
Well done.

Title article: Slave to the World, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-10-04 11:34:08

This was okay.  
I noticed a few spelling errors. The girl's character seemed like a simple child at first with the unquestionable belief in Jesus, yet she seems complicated at the end. Transition of circumstances? Who knows. Not a bad start.

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OFFLINE Roy Hahne (Synchronicity)
OFFLINE Dipankar Dasgupta (d.dasgupta)
OFFLINE Michelle Huff (allmine)
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Name Entry
Michelle Huff (allmine)

In the bathroom
 Created On: 10/06/2008 10:12:08
Thanks for that picture..now I have no reason to want to eat lunch

Amy Carter (scooby)

 Created On: 10/04/2008 14:43:37
Hey babe, I guess I will sign your guestbook now. Love ya

Michelle Huff (allmine)

Right here...
 Created On: 09/25/2008 09:36:44
You owe me a box of Kleenex. That and my make-up is running...
Gone (So long!)

Warwick, Rhode Island
 Created On: 09/02/2008 18:40:59
Matthew,
Good to hear from you. Indeed you can make a difference!
Darrin
Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire
 Created On: 07/04/2008 03:25:36
I'll sign, I'll sign...........Oh bugger, Annie got there first.........

Phil
Amie Kerlin (lemon)

somewhere in time
 Created On: 07/02/2008 20:50:52
hey! you need someone to sign your guestbook.. oh wait.. I just did

keep up the great work with your writing!

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