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Matthew Daniel Carter (Pilgrim)
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Member Since 06/25/2008
Last Online 09/06/2008
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About Myself: Truth only exists within an individuals personal experience. If I believe I am a pitcher of orange juice and if you come near me I scream because I think that you will spill me, who are you to tell me I'm wrong? There are many John Wayne's that are locked in insane asylums because they believe they are something that other's say they are not. So my writing is my truth, regardless how insane some of them may be regarded, projected the way I intrepret it. I have travelled the world and have hitchiked across America. I've made my home in tents, drain tunnels, cars, and an occasional apartment. I've been married for seven years, in fact, I met my wife (Scooby on this site) as I was hitchiking down a lone highway in Georgia. But that's another story. Anyway, life is short then we die. I can't change the world, but maybe, just maybe, I can make a difference.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Sep 6, 2008The LighthousePoetry 48
Sep 5, 2008Rendition Of A RosePoetry 116
Sep 4, 2008Wisdom Is For The BirdsMiscellaneous Stories 89
Sep 3, 2008The DegeneratePoetry 62
Sep 2, 2008Approaching StormPoetry 105
Sep 1, 2008At The CrossPoetry 126
Aug 31, 2008Unnerving TranquilityPoetry 152
Aug 28, 2008Trippy TalePoetry 122
Aug 27, 2008MisfirePoetry 103
Jul 15, 2008The Last Supper?Miscellaneous Stories 311
Jul 14, 2008Dare To Be FreePoetry 138
Jul 13, 2008To Whom It May ConcernMiscellaneous Stories 227
Jul 4, 2008Today Is The DayMiscellaneous Stories 260
Jul 3, 2008Death to AmatayoPoetry 261
Jul 1, 2008The JourneyPoetry 196
Jun 30, 2008To Her Whom Cancer TookPoetry 809
Jun 30, 2008The Last WordsMiscellaneous Stories 171
Jun 28, 2008A Dark Poetic Tale of WoePoetry 158
Jun 28, 2008He That Has Ears To Hear Let Him HearMiscellaneous Stories 174
Jun 27, 2008Love EndsMiscellaneous Stories 411
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Comments

Total number of comments: 347

Title article: LIKE A CRAZY BIRD.
Date: 2008-09-06 19:47:58

This was okay.  
The spacing between lines threw me off though I'm assuming you formatted the poem like this for effect. 
All in all. Good job.

Title article: Respectability
Date: 2008-09-06 19:45:33

You brought the message home fairly well. Are you a philospher? You seem to have something deep going on inside. Go with it. It can bring out more creativity. I think you have a masterpiece waiting to be written.

Title article: Through Open Eyes
Date: 2008-09-06 19:42:16

Good imagery.  
You did well to use punctuation for good effect.  
The words flowed well.  
Emotionally charged as usual.  
Good job.

Title article: Rage
Date: 2008-09-06 19:39:18

Very well done.  
You've captured the moment, you've captured the emotions, this makes for a good read.  
The poem flowed very well. 
Good job.

Title article: is this poetry
Date: 2008-09-06 19:25:37

I feel your negative emotion, but the poem wasn't very well written. Everyone is entitled to their truth as they see it. If this what you see, then so it is, to you. Remember, in the beginning those that followed Christ didn't call themselves Christians, they were called Christians because the way the lived was an imitation of a very powerful being. To call yourself a Christian, to me, is to lable yourself under an organized buisness and a standard or code. One person's sin should not reflect the holy one that walked this earth two thousand years ago. Nice try though.

Title article: Regress
Date: 2008-09-05 20:07:58

Good flow and structure.  
Denigrated loyalty's relinquishment of trust? Wow. Is that possible?  
Anyway, this was a good poem.  
Good job.

Title article: Quickened
Date: 2008-09-05 20:01:44

Life spun instead of spent. I like it. Make's life new and unique, for now.  
I enjoy the line, breathing in to breathe within existence for a awhile. 
good job

Title article: Questions and Answers
Date: 2008-09-05 19:34:30

I liked this. You did very well with the questions. I still believe that if we are people of free choices we need the options to choose from. Hate does well to reveal love and vice verca. Without the one we cannot have the other. Someone told me the other day that someone they knew was very ignorant, I said good for him, we need more people like that so we know what not to do.  
GOod job.

Title article: Rendition Of A Rose
Date: 2008-09-05 19:28:39

That's it, it's a rose! Well, on this site it will be a rose, maybe not on Microsoft Word. It does fit. I like it. Oh no, do I have to change the title?

Title article: One cut too many
Date: 2008-09-05 19:09:46

Well, you must have an episode in your life where you cut yourself. This is the second poem I've read by you where there is cutting. Anyway, you use punctution to your advantage and effect. 
Well done.

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Darrin M. Bouley (darrinbouley)

Warwick, Rhode Island
 Created On: 09/02/2008 18:40:59
Matthew,
Good to hear from you. Indeed you can make a difference!
Darrin
Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire
 Created On: 07/04/2008 03:25:36
I'll sign, I'll sign...........Oh bugger, Annie got there first.........

Phil
Amie Kerlin (lemon)

somewhere in time
 Created On: 07/02/2008 20:50:52
hey! you need someone to sign your guestbook.. oh wait.. I just did

keep up the great work with your writing!

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