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About Myself:

Terry Collett has been writing since 1971 and published on and off since 1972. He has written poems, plays, short story and short novels. He is married with eight children and eight grandchildren. His work has been published in magazines and anthologies on-line and off. His main ambition is to have a book of his stories and poems published.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Sep 1, 2008	BABY.	Miscellaneous Stories	79
Aug 31, 2008	ASHES.	Miscellaneous Stories	62
Aug 30, 2008	CRUCIFIX.	Miscellaneous Stories	56
Aug 29, 2008	MARY'S MIXED MEDITATIONS.	Miscellaneous Stories	82
Aug 28, 2008	ALL SHOOK UP.	Poetry	77
Aug 27, 2008	FIRST SEX.	Poetry	96
Aug 26, 2008	EVENING.	Miscellaneous Stories	67
Aug 24, 2008	HE LOVED GRETA GARBO.	Poetry	63
Aug 23, 2008	SHE FOOLED THEM.	Poetry	65
Aug 20, 2008	SECOND SEX.	Poetry	130
Aug 20, 2008	DOLL.	Miscellaneous Stories	139
Aug 8, 2008	HANK & BROADS.	Poetry	92
Aug 7, 2008	SHE LOVED RANDAL	Poetry	90
Jul 31, 2008	THE POLISH DAME.	Poetry	179

Comments

Title article: MY DAUGHTER. (Healer of the world . 2008)
Date: 2008-08-31 14:58:19

This is a well constructed lyrical poem with a theme that holds you and takes you to the conclusion that you had hoped for at the start. The lyical genre held well here, and I am impressed by it all.

Title article: Shadows Inside
Date: 2008-08-30 05:26:26

Yes, Hannah, an impressive poem indeed. so much to get one's teeth into in this poem, depths, inwrd looking gazing, feelings, sense of feeling lost, another there too, taking over, taking your place. good quality poem I'd say.

Title article: freedom floats
Date: 2008-08-30 05:19:58

first impressions: out on a limb, but Stephen Kingish kind of feel. Enjoyed it though, even if I couldn't quite figure out if it was a girl or guy in love with Freedom. I think in the third line or so you use "her" where possibly "she" would be more in line. After all you cannot say as beautiful as her was, but as she was. Nonetheless, good as far as I am concerned.

Title article: Roses
Date: 2008-08-30 05:11:09

Overall I enjoyed the story and the layout of it, it is quite a fine compostion. I would concur with the previous reviewer about the"suddenlys" etc. All in all impressive.

Title article: Heartland
Date: 2008-08-30 05:05:00

I cannot say how good the translation is unless i could read the original which I cannot, but taking this poem on its own merits i am very impressed, both by the quakity if the poem itself and by the images it brings forth in my mind.

Title article: Untitled
Date: 2008-08-30 05:00:44

A dark melanchonic poem which seems could have been written down in blood. Whether fictional or real I have no idea, but it does come over heavy laden with little or no light or hope, but it relates well and tells as it is out there or in there as the case maybe.

Title article: TO A WRITER
Date: 2008-08-30 04:55:51

An intelligent, inventive and impressive poem. The layout was good and well composed, and the theme so well balanced, and insightful. Very good.

Title article: MARY'S MIXED MEDITATIONS.
Date: 2008-08-30 02:21:27

Thank you for feedback Yes, "da" is intentional. The story is set in Eire and "da" is used there instead of dad. I appreciate the difficulties some readers have without the aid of paragraphs, but it was part of the layout I wanted for this particular story and others in this series.

Title article: the unfruitful venture for finding
Date: 2008-08-29 11:04:23

I enjoyed this poem; the layout and the content. The best lines for me were:and man an even smaller speck

that to discover one's Self

is to pluck an atom off an oak tree.

and maybe

when you find your Self,

you might realize

it never belonged to you

in the first place.

yes, love those lines.

Title article: ALL SHOOK UP.
Date: 2008-08-29 10:56:46

Thank you for the feedback.

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Philip Neale (philneale1952) Derbyshire, England	Created On: 08/25/2008 09:18:33 How remiss, didn't sign in.........did now! G'day Phil
r.e.potter (r.e.potter) here	Created On: 08/24/2008 11:04:17 Nice to put a face behind the name. Enjoy your stuff.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/08/2008 11:01:30 Dude, your Poetry rocks!
David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump) hill country texas	Created On: 07/31/2008 18:51:26 i didn't realize until i saw your trademark upper case title that your previous material is missing in action! nice to read you again.
Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3)	Created On: 04/16/2008 02:45:03 I'm not a fan of poetry, but I now find myself looking for yours! Great job.
Tabithah Laenkit (K.Y.)	Created On: 07/26/2007 18:32:15 hey dude whens the next mona and lisa coming out? you rock at writing. keep it up.

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