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From Stagnant Water

The rain had finally stopped. After two days of...

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About Myself: Terry Collett has been writing since 1971 and published on and off since 1972. He has written poems, plays, short story and short novels. He is married with eight children and eight grandchildren. His work has been published in magazines and anthologies on-line and off. His main ambition is to have a book of his stories and poems published.

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Sep 1, 2008BABY.Miscellaneous Stories 80
Aug 31, 2008ASHES.Miscellaneous Stories 64
Aug 30, 2008CRUCIFIX.Miscellaneous Stories 59
Aug 29, 2008MARY'S MIXED MEDITATIONS.Miscellaneous Stories 82
Aug 28, 2008ALL SHOOK UP.Poetry 78
Aug 27, 2008FIRST SEX.Poetry 99
Aug 26, 2008EVENING.Miscellaneous Stories 68
Aug 24, 2008HE LOVED GRETA GARBO.Poetry 64
Aug 23, 2008SHE FOOLED THEM.Poetry 65
Aug 20, 2008SECOND SEX.Poetry 130
Aug 20, 2008DOLL.Miscellaneous Stories 140
Aug 8, 2008HANK & BROADS.Poetry 92
Aug 7, 2008SHE LOVED RANDALPoetry 90
Jul 31, 2008THE POLISH DAME.Poetry 182

Comments

Title article: Trying to Concentrate on Freedom
Date: 2008-08-29 10:52:46

A short vivid account of what i think is an episode of the holocaust. Well composed and lucid. Enjoyed if that is the right term here.

Title article: To Whom This Concerns
Date: 2008-08-29 10:02:24

You have written well about your situation and have placed the given as pect that you would like most of all to the fore: namely to fit in. How we see things affects how we think of the situation we find ourselves in. The wheelchair may make you different but it ought not make you feel less of a person in your eyes(which you probably do not)or in the eyes of others. You come across in this article as intelligent and aware of the present situation.I think your positveness will or ought to make your presence felt on others.

Title article: The Snowy Afternoon, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-29 09:46:30

I thought this was well composed and conveyed the essence of a sad tale.There is potential(if you wish and have the time) to develop this further and make into a longer story or may novella. Anyway, that aside, i enjoyed this and felt myself there at the scene.

Title article: Befitting the Undead
Date: 2008-08-29 09:40:25

Not my usual genre of poetry, but this carried the day for me, with its fair structure and use of words.

Title article: A Lover's Garden
Date: 2008-08-29 09:37:20

Tender love poem. Good.

Title article: Once Again
Date: 2008-08-28 14:25:37

The simplcity is misleading because this very good poem conveys deeper things than may first appear. The lucidity and good structure make this a good read.

Title article: Love At First Sight
Date: 2008-08-28 14:21:31

Love poems can be pretty trite, but this is amongst those that strike a chord and carry across the feelings and sincerity well. Good poem; lucid and well structured, too.

Title article: INTERNATIONALE RELATIONS (C,1971)
Date: 2008-08-28 14:16:03

I wish to see more of this quality of poetry; you have composed something special here, Stephen, a poem to plaster over the walls and read from wherever one stands. As Oliver Twist, please Sir, can I have some more!

Title article: Panhandling Scum
Date: 2008-08-28 14:05:06

I thought i had read this poem and made a comment, but maybe i just dreamed about doing so. Anyway, I have read it and loved the engaging theme and structure of the poem. Maybe that is what i wrote in the dream. Very good.

Title article: Too Much Chaos for Me
Date: 2008-08-28 13:54:26

A hard hitting punchy poem; makes its point clear. Tidy in structure, lucid in theme. Reality captured with the good use of words.

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Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
Created On: 08/25/2008 09:18:33

How remiss, didn't sign in.........did now!

G'day

Phil

r.e.potter (r.e.potter)

here
Created On: 08/24/2008 11:04:17

Nice to put a face behind the name. Enjoy your stuff.

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Created On: 08/08/2008 11:01:30

Dude, your Poetry rocks!

David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country texas
Created On: 07/31/2008 18:51:26

i didn't realize until i saw your trademark upper case title that your previous material is missing in action!

nice to read you again.

Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3)

Created On: 04/16/2008 02:45:03

I'm not a fan of poetry, but I now find myself looking for yours! Great job.

Tabithah Laenkit (K.Y.)

Created On: 07/26/2007 18:32:15

hey dude whens the next mona and lisa coming out?
you rock at writing.
keep it up.

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