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About Myself: Discovered the bug for writing after helping my daughter do a homework assignment where she had to write a story of some 1000 words. After I was finished with it(daddy's lil girl)I gave it to her to take to school.

Live on the east coast in the good ol USofA.





I like to read, so I should get around to yours eventually.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 26, 2008Empty DishMiscellaneous Stories 109
Aug 24, 2008A Truth RecognizedPoetry 95
Aug 20, 2008PunishmentMiscellaneous Stories 247
Aug 20, 2008Nights JourneyMiscellaneous Stories 346
Aug 19, 2008Apparition of JusticeHorror 206
Aug 16, 2008Better Day TomorrowMiscellaneous Stories 99
Aug 15, 2008How FarPoetry 118
Aug 14, 2008A Freak of NatureMiscellaneous Stories 86
Aug 14, 2008A Good Day for a Bad MistakeMiscellaneous Stories 137
Aug 12, 2008Della BridgePoetry 89
Aug 12, 2008An Unfolding NightmarePoetry 141
Aug 9, 2008House DetectiveMystery 244
Aug 6, 2008The Butcher of Barrios (part cuatro)Miscellaneous Stories 121
Aug 5, 2008Racism has a ColorPoetry 171
Aug 5, 2008The Butcher of Barrios (part tres)Miscellaneous Stories 106
Aug 3, 2008The Butcher of Barrios (part dos)Miscellaneous Stories 121
Aug 1, 2008The Butcher of BarriosMiscellaneous Stories 331
Jul 29, 2008Visions of a Tortured MindMiscellaneous Stories 232
Jul 29, 2008A Life CompleteMiscellaneous Stories 184
Jul 15, 2008Day of RevelationMiscellaneous Stories 495
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Comments

Total number of comments: 403

Title article: "Snow White"
Date: 2008-09-01 16:24:08

I think the dog was Lassie. Your stories seem to be just stories(nothing that grabs you)not that thats a bad thing. This was a neat story with not much going on. Kids late,kids lost,mysterious dog saves the day. No background or character build up.

Title article: At The Cross
Date: 2008-09-01 16:17:56

Im curious as to how Dr. Lucifer would comment on this. This was simple in nature for the most part. But not a bad lil cross.

Title article: I prefer Mom but I'll settle for Dad
Date: 2008-09-01 16:15:34
wait till your father gets home
I thought this was a neat poem, great idea. Through the eyes of a 2 year old. Dads are always(most of the time)the easy one, the linient one. Most dads also are the pure junk eaters like a kid would be. You had the right idea, and with a few different angles, this would be awesome. Gave it a 4.

Title article: "One Dark Night"
Date: 2008-08-31 07:41:15
quilty as charged
This was long but I had to keep reading to find out what would happen. I was disapointed with the end, I was expecting them to be involved somehow and got away with murder. The story laid out well with all the procedings but it just left me saying...ah man.  
 
This story is (quilty)pun intended, of leaving the reader disapointed for a better ending.

Title article: Birdie and Me
Date: 2008-08-30 17:16:13
ahhhhh
Gosh this was sad. Can I buy you a puppy dog or something...I mean, put your mom on the phone. This was good and I liked it. So short and sweet with a bit of sadness and happiness thrown in. Were all loved and would be missed. Good job.

Title article: those parkview evenings
Date: 2008-08-30 17:10:52

This poem seemed a little force, like almost to deep in meaning. It was hard for me to understand what you were trying to say.(im not a deep guy...love limericks) It probally is really good, but im not sure what your saying.

Title article: MY DAUGHTER. (Healer of the world . 2008)
Date: 2008-08-30 16:34:08
hand me a hankie
Could not imagine being seperated from my daughter. Sometimes children are the glue that hold marraiges together. But then is a forced marriage ever good. This is a wonderful poem of being reunited.

Title article: back home road
Date: 2008-08-30 16:14:36

Are you John Boy? lol. This reminded me of the Waltons. Thought it was a very good poem though. Really well written and I understood its meaning.

Title article: Ode to Innocence
Date: 2008-08-30 14:27:13

To quick on the pad,,meant this to be rated a 5...sorry.

Title article: Ode to Innocence
Date: 2008-08-30 14:24:45

This almost sounded biblical. You seem to have a great talent a poetry and one day sure will see you on the shelfs. Good job.

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08/30/2008 17:04:09Re:Proclaim Your RoyaltyOff-Topic247795
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08/30/2008 12:50:55Re:Proclaim Your RoyaltyOff-Topic247795
08/28/2008 12:53:51Re:THATS IT!! I CALL ShenanigansOff-Topic3934
08/26/2008 19:54:14Re:PunishmentOff-Topic6550
08/26/2008 14:08:46Re:PunishmentOff-Topic6550
08/26/2008 14:05:23Re:PunishmentOff-Topic6550
08/25/2008 18:45:39Re:PunishmentOff-Topic6550
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08/22/2008 14:47:23Re:PunishmentOff-Topic6550

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Name Entry
Christian Wright (The 13th)

Right at the bog and next to the old oak tree.
 Created On: 08/07/2008 14:28:21
So when you gonna put out the marge (sorry forgot name)story. I'm looking for some good material to steal.

David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country texas
 Created On: 07/29/2008 20:08:05
i've gotta say, cause i'm funny that way, i really miss your other stories.

i, as you know, am blessed with adhd - which means that i have a very fast refresh rate. i used to really enjoy popping in on your page and rereading your work.

although your stories now are no doubt very well written and it is very easy to see that you have matured as a writer even in the short time you have been here - i really miss the whimsical side of russell.

i know it's a total pain, believe me, i'm still trying to slide my old stories back on my page - but i sure would love to see your old stuff back here again.

that's all - carry on!

and write on!
Amie Kerlin (lemon)

under the bed
 Created On: 07/21/2008 16:04:12
nice monkey, don't spank him too hard

Michelle Huff (allmine)

 Created On: 07/21/2008 14:25:33
I could say a bad word, but there are minors around!!!

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
 Created On: 07/18/2008 07:10:48
Edited By Philip Neale (philneale1952) On: 07/18/2008 07:12:05
Bloody hell mate, forgot to sign you in.

Got your ticket yet?

Phil
Michelle Huff (allmine)

I know where I want to be...
 Created On: 07/17/2008 06:06:57
What happened to the sexy pic of you? What am I supposed to drool over now?

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 07/09/2008 21:20:27
Oi!

What happened to Punishment?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 07/06/2008 18:00:32
hey! puting bags over your head is a very dangerous habit! even paper like the kind you have on yours. why? well termites live in those things and they might mistake your head as a chunk of wood and have a feast upon your flesh. that was what happened to capone, after all.
Michelle Huff (allmine)

Here and There
 Created On: 07/02/2008 10:50:28
Have to be the first one to leave a comment...It's the law!

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