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Member Since	06/15/2008
Last Online	11/21/2008
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About Myself:

Discovered the bug for writing after helping my daughter do a homework assignment where she had to write a story of some 1000 words. After I was finished with it(daddy's lil girl)I gave it to her to take to school.

Live on the east coast in the good ol USofA.

I like to read, so I should get around to yours eventually.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Nov 10, 2008	Invasion©- chapter 1	Miscellaneous Stories	284
Oct 30, 2008	A Final Goodbye	Poetry	171
Oct 10, 2008	Through the Eyes of Death ©	Miscellaneous Stories	1045
Oct 4, 2008	The Lottery	Humor	1324
Sep 27, 2008	A Healing ©	Horror	619
Sep 18, 2008	Secrets of St. Margaret's (final)	Mystery	209
Sep 17, 2008	Secrets of St. Margaret's (part 5)	Mystery	189
Sep 13, 2008	Secrets of St. Margaret's (part 4)	Mystery	273
Sep 11, 2008	Secrets of St. Margaret's (part 3)	Mystery	246
Sep 8, 2008	Secrets of St. Margaret's (part 2)	Mystery	259
Sep 6, 2008	Secrets of St. Margaret's ©	Mystery	737
Aug 26, 2008	Empty Dish	Miscellaneous Stories	219
Aug 24, 2008	A Truth Recognized ©	Poetry	185
Aug 20, 2008	Punishment ©	Miscellaneous Stories	414
Aug 20, 2008	Nights Journey ©	Miscellaneous Stories	534
Aug 19, 2008	Apparition of Justice ©	Horror	309
Aug 16, 2008	Better Day Tomorrow ©	Miscellaneous Stories	212
Aug 15, 2008	How Far ©	Poetry	208
Aug 14, 2008	A Freak of Nature ©	Miscellaneous Stories	183
Aug 14, 2008	A Good Day for a Bad Mistake ©	Miscellaneous Stories	258

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Comments

Title article: I Am the Moon
Date: 2008-10-30 14:32:50

The moon shares my lonliness
I am the walrus, coo coo ca chu. What I got out of this was that the moon symbolizes a person and the sun God. Im sure im wrong(since im wrong most the time)hey, thats between me and you,,,my wife must never know. Good poem.

Title article: I HATE TO KILL A MAN WHILE HE'S EATING
Date: 2008-10-30 14:24:12

grrrrr ...speghetti
I was lost with this. First I thought you were talking bout a homeless gent bathing on the heat grate. So not sure if your a hit man or just whacking the husband of the women your smacking. But yes, Italian sounds fine...you buying.

Title article: The Children I Never Had, Nor Wanted.
Date: 2008-10-30 14:15:40

Mr. Darcy...tear down this wall.

Breaking it up might help the dragging feel of this story. Also, there are some very long sentences in this piece and way to many commas. Not sure what the parenthsis were in there for either.

The good news is that this wasn't that bad...strange story but not bad.

Tweek it a bit and it would be better.

Title article: Crystal Ball
Date: 2008-10-30 14:05:57

I just use the magic 8 ball for answers
This wasn't bad but it left me kinda unsatisfied. To begin, I didn't see why she was so terrified by this man. He seemed pleasant enough for her to act the way she did. A Jesus freak,,no biggie. But maybe being a psychic she saw something in him the reader didn't. I like serial killer stuff so this is a story I could stay with if you continue. Thats why I guess im left unsatisfied...I need a final conclusion.

Title article: Taste, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-10-29 14:50:28

My Soul Mate
The taste of a kiss...how I long for that high school feeling again. This was very well written and you really had me going until the damn tree spoiled things. Haven't figured out what went on when they kissed, but being a guy, I can only imagine what was going on in his head. I need to catch up with the previous chapters cause this part was excellent. I usually stay away from chapters so now im mad at you for hooking me. Off to part 1.

Title article: The pain of a dying woman
Date: 2008-10-29 12:48:52

good premise
This was hard to get through with the words used and punctuations used to often. So in a way it was just like death...hard to get through.

Title article: The Ugly Potato
Date: 2008-10-29 12:42:47

potato or potatoe
this one kinda reminded me of that meatball fella that rolled off the table and out the door when somebody sneezed.(could happen) I think he landed in a garden also. Cute story.

Title article: COUNTING STARS
Date: 2008-10-29 12:07:07

Amen. If this is personal, my heartfelt sympathy.

Title article: Moving On
Date: 2008-10-29 11:59:04

Houdini in da house
hmmm, kinda in line with cat mans comment. This left me scratching. Apparently they travel to other times and places through the basement floor. Unless there is a continuation to explain what is going on,,,im left wondering just what is.
"Thank God you have your fathers good sense"..I tell that same thing to my daughter all the time.

Title article: Attack of the Networked Wireless Plans!
Date: 2008-10-28 09:04:21

Great title..I said… great title…hang on,,let me move over there,,great title…can u hear me now. Thought this was amusing by the way.

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Forum

Last 10 Forum Posts

Date	Subject	Category	Hits
11/17/2008 14:52:52	Allmine is great	Off-Topic	288
11/13/2008 12:32:41	Re:Need an opinion	Off-Topic	211
11/13/2008 12:15:55	Re:Need an opinion	Off-Topic	211
11/03/2008 16:55:23	Re:A looooooooooong ass name	Off-Topic	122
11/03/2008 13:06:11	Re:Couple of things...	Off-Topic	2104
11/02/2008 13:16:11	Re:Deletions?	Off-Topic	468
10/28/2008 07:41:46	Re:There is a leg on my deck	Off-Topic	812
10/28/2008 07:14:40	Re:There is a leg on my deck	Off-Topic	812
10/27/2008 16:47:18	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	336813
10/24/2008 14:51:48	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	336813

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David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

JJ Tyler (JJtyler)

Michelle Huff (allmine)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Amie Kerlin (lemon) in your head	Created On: 11/16/2008 16:56:04 Potter you're on crack. I just read the comment you left on my 'affairs end' poem and I've never had a grude with you! what made you think so?
Michelle Huff (allmine) In delusionville	Created On: 10/01/2008 11:44:02 Since you said hey to me, I say hey back!
Michelle Huff (allmine) hmmmmm	Created On: 09/25/2008 09:08:40 Cause I felt like dropping in to say HI!!!
Gone (So long!) Warwick, RI	Created On: 09/11/2008 17:29:48 What's up Potter? Hey, thanks for the comment on Jennie's Storm. You had me rollin'! Oh, and concerning "Bitten," I wasn't going to go any further with it. When both you and Phil wrote that you were looking for more, I was tempted to add a new chapter. But this was something I wrote about twelve years ago. I think I'll let it rest. I'm going to go check out the "secret" at St. Margaret's now. Later!
Christian Wright (The 13th) Right at the bog and next to the old oak tree.	Created On: 08/07/2008 14:28:21 So when you gonna put out the marge (sorry forgot name)story. I'm looking for some good material to steal.
David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump) hill country texas	Created On: 07/29/2008 20:08:05 i've gotta say, cause i'm funny that way, i really miss your other stories. i, as you know, am blessed with adhd - which means that i have a very fast refresh rate. i used to really enjoy popping in on your page and rereading your work. although your stories now are no doubt very well written and it is very easy to see that you have matured as a writer even in the short time you have been here - i really miss the whimsical side of russell. i know it's a total pain, believe me, i'm still trying to slide my old stories back on my page - but i sure would love to see your old stuff back here again. that's all - carry on! and write on!
Amie Kerlin (lemon) under the bed	Created On: 07/21/2008 16:04:12 nice monkey, don't spank him too hard
Michelle Huff (allmine)	Created On: 07/21/2008 14:25:33 I could say a bad word, but there are minors around!!!
Philip Neale (philneale1952) Derbyshire, England	Created On: 07/18/2008 07:10:48 Edited By Philip Neale (philneale1952) On: 07/18/2008 07:12:05 Bloody hell mate, forgot to sign you in. Got your ticket yet? Phil
Michelle Huff (allmine) I know where I want to be...	Created On: 07/17/2008 06:06:57 What happened to the sexy pic of you? What am I supposed to drool over now?