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The thing on top of your shoulders can be a dangerous place to visit.

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Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Nov 10, 2008	Invasion©- chapter 1	Miscellaneous Stories	457

Comments

Total number of comments: 725

Title article: Kathy and John
Date: 2009-01-08 05:03:52

A hop skip and a jump is all. Love will find a way. And then more than likely you will try and find a way out. Lesson in love: read instructions on maintainance before using. Please don't PM me with a proposition...im not that kind a guy. Ok bit.. but not sure really what the point was.

Title article: Angel of Music
Date: 2009-01-06 07:32:33

killing me softly with his song
A little bit of (soul)mate. Have u found your true love or are u just lost in his music(unclear). But regardless, I thought this was well thought out and put down poetically. Spot on

Title article: Fears of Hurst Pine Forest
Date: 2009-01-06 04:59:06

a cute little bunny story...i think not
Cool story, gripping in detail with tension at every corner. The act that happened could easily take place in a tense situation. I wish we had a happier ending but we can't have everything now can we. My only critique is that we have no idea why or how the son got lost in the woods in the first place. A little background to help build character personality goes along way into making a story more personal to a reader. But great job with this regardless.

Title article: QUEER.
Date: 2009-01-05 04:41:42

u dirty lil cat..I mean dog...nice
This was good and the wording of this story is the style I like. Around 13 to 16 you begin to understand who you are so this is easily sold. Not sure how old she was in the story since you didn't mention it but I suppose thats not to important. Great lil short.

Title article: Early morning rain
Date: 2009-01-04 14:22:16

its not you..its me
Thats a huge matzah ball left out there when you say I love you and she doesn't say it back...um,,so Ive heard. The ending was a wee confusing in that Im not sure of your meaning. Is the word (hope) a significant role player in that? Good story though.

Title article: The Toilet Attendant
Date: 2009-01-02 18:08:39

rating of 5 flushes
a hit man could even be in a santas outfit like the one in California at xmas...no, you never know. Revisiting a cool story. Great job with the suspense build up.

Title article: Quick Draw
Date: 2009-01-02 16:52:35

its not the size of the pistol that coun
My comments are the same as Phils. I can't remember the movie exactly but this has High Noon written all over it. You even referenced noon time. Im there-fore led to believe you knew this going in so I wont take a point away. This was simple but fun to read. My favorite kinds of poems. To deep is not my style. 5 stars

Title article: Sharks and Brothers
Date: 2009-01-02 16:38:39

gonna need a bigger boat
You would be surprised as to what you can eat. Not sure I really understood what your were trying to convey, but your compassion to the defenseless wild has my vote.

Title article: We the People
Date: 2009-01-02 16:29:31

Good
I feel free I must say. I wake, I drink, I eat, I play when I want to. I can't argue the fact that we are controlled in some fascetts or another. But as a world in whole,,we are pretty damn fortunate. Just turn on the news and be glad your not in a battle zone losing family everyday as in the middle east. Great concept with this piece, but alot to debate over.

Title article: A Shot Too Far
Date: 2009-01-02 15:42:39

a shot heard round the community
This was good. A tad confusing in this second chapter as to who was who. I know as the writer you don't see what was confusing but as a reader Im just wondering who the man with the syringe was and his purpose. But over all this was a great tale and I give it 5 stars.

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Name	Entry
Michelle Huff (allmine) Mmmm, guess!	Created On: 01/07/2009 12:02:19 Ooooh show me the stick baby...
Michelle Huff (allmine) hmmm	Created On: 12/31/2008 06:41:03 If I dump Roger, you gonna be there to take up the slack. I am very needy you know....
Michelle Huff (allmine) Hmmm...I could say something naughty	Created On: 12/29/2008 14:19:13 My sexy man picture is back up..whoo hoo!!!
Amie Kerlin (lemon) in your head	Created On: 11/16/2008 18:56:04 Potter you're on crack. I just read the comment you left on my 'affairs end' poem and I've never had a grude with you! what made you think so?
Michelle Huff (allmine) In delusionville	Created On: 10/01/2008 13:44:02 Since you said hey to me, I say hey back!
Michelle Huff (allmine) hmmmmm	Created On: 09/25/2008 11:08:40 Cause I felt like dropping in to say HI!!!
Gone (So long!) Warwick, RI	Created On: 09/11/2008 19:29:48 What's up Potter? Hey, thanks for the comment on Jennie's Storm. You had me rollin'! Oh, and concerning "Bitten," I wasn't going to go any further with it. When both you and Phil wrote that you were looking for more, I was tempted to add a new chapter. But this was something I wrote about twelve years ago. I think I'll let it rest. I'm going to go check out the "secret" at St. Margaret's now. Later!
Christian Wright (FRANTIC) Right at the bog and next to the old oak tree.	Created On: 08/07/2008 16:28:21 So when you gonna put out the marge (sorry forgot name)story. I'm looking for some good material to steal.
David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump) hill country texas	Created On: 07/29/2008 22:08:05 i've gotta say, cause i'm funny that way, i really miss your other stories. i, as you know, am blessed with adhd - which means that i have a very fast refresh rate. i used to really enjoy popping in on your page and rereading your work. although your stories now are no doubt very well written and it is very easy to see that you have matured as a writer even in the short time you have been here - i really miss the whimsical side of russell. i know it's a total pain, believe me, i'm still trying to slide my old stories back on my page - but i sure would love to see your old stuff back here again. that's all - carry on! and write on!
Amie Kerlin (lemon) under the bed	Created On: 07/21/2008 18:04:12 nice monkey, don't spank him too hard