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Member Since	06/15/2008
Last Online	11/21/2008
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About Myself:

Discovered the bug for writing after helping my daughter do a homework assignment where she had to write a story of some 1000 words. After I was finished with it(daddy's lil girl)I gave it to her to take to school.

Live on the east coast in the good ol USofA.

I like to read, so I should get around to yours eventually.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 4, 2008	The Lottery	Humor	1324
Jul 8, 2008	Days of End (Mans past...Mans future ), Chapter 3	Science Fiction	345
Jun 22, 2008	Days of End (a journey of man)chapter 1 & 2	Science Fiction	605
Sep 18, 2008	Secrets of St. Margaret's (final)	Mystery	209
Sep 17, 2008	Secrets of St. Margaret's (part 5)	Mystery	189
Sep 13, 2008	Secrets of St. Margaret's (part 4)	Mystery	273
Sep 11, 2008	Secrets of St. Margaret's (part 3)	Mystery	246
Sep 8, 2008	Secrets of St. Margaret's (part 2)	Mystery	259
Sep 6, 2008	Secrets of St. Margaret's ©	Mystery	737
Aug 9, 2008	House Detective	Mystery	352
Sep 27, 2008	A Healing ©	Horror	619
Aug 19, 2008	Apparition of Justice ©	Horror	309
Nov 10, 2008	Invasion©- chapter 1	Miscellaneous Stories	284
Oct 10, 2008	Through the Eyes of Death ©	Miscellaneous Stories	1045
Aug 26, 2008	Empty Dish	Miscellaneous Stories	219
Aug 20, 2008	Punishment ©	Miscellaneous Stories	414
Aug 20, 2008	Nights Journey ©	Miscellaneous Stories	534
Aug 16, 2008	Better Day Tomorrow ©	Miscellaneous Stories	212
Aug 14, 2008	A Freak of Nature ©	Miscellaneous Stories	183
Aug 14, 2008	A Good Day for a Bad Mistake ©	Miscellaneous Stories	258

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Comments

Total number of comments: 660

Title article: Mirrored Lies
Date: 2008-11-21 05:45:13

And I thought my stories were strange. Not sure why she wouldn't realize which one was her from the group of women even if she had amnesia or whatever. But it heldmy interest and looking forward to more from you.

Title article: The cut.
Date: 2008-11-17 14:31:45

Seems a bit idiotic to cause pain to relieve it. A cry for attention is what I believe the reason is why young people cut themselves to begin with and to deal with the pain of adolesents. Golly, and I thought having to get up and go to work everyday then come home to my wife and kid bitchin. Then go rake leaves and cut grass, Maybe even have to run my kid everywhere for clothes then have her complain that now she doesent like anything we just bought was stressful...guess I have it easy.

Title article: A small revenge
Date: 2008-11-17 14:21:09

a repost?
Didn't u post this once before on here? Same story I remember. I don't know why I remember this but I remember the ending made no sense then. Seems you cleaned it up a bit but it still left me scratching. I guess she has 4 other sisters to act revenge on.

Title article: Dyfo's Final Duel
Date: 2008-11-17 14:13:06

Good
Ya kno, this wasn't bad, but like the last comment, it's just not my style of reading material. Mystical dragons and such. But it was good regardless. The only thing I didn't care for was the way u broke up the writing to simulate a dying(in this case dragons) last words. Keep it up. To catch my attention(not that thats important by any means)but I like prison stuff and space stuff..or a good murder mystery...now get crackin. :)

Title article: All is Gone
Date: 2008-11-16 11:20:17

This was strange to be honest. So many (i don't understand) moments with this story. Not sure I have anything else to say. Oh yea,,,when I move...the more the marrier is ALWAYS welcomed.

Title article: Resolving Time
Date: 2008-11-16 10:42:42

I finally had some (time) to review
It was hard to make out the image that went with this poem...might be my puter but I had to really look to see that it is horses...anyway, that was pointless. The poem is excellent. Could we expect less. Well done.

Title article: Affair's End
Date: 2008-11-14 18:50:41

Being a women of faith this type of story seems out of your element. The first time I read this a while back I didn't really like it. But after re-reading it over and over(being a fan of your work) It is growing on me and I kinda dig it now. Its simple with a complicated subject. Ive decided this was good and so I wanted to rate it what you deserve,,a 5. This poem is not your best but worth consideration. Your good and should be proud. What ever grudge you bare with me im hoping we can get past it and be fellow companions on this site again. :o

Title article: Vengeance
Date: 2008-11-11 18:45:56

Ok, I like this. I like prison stuff. My only problem is that it didn't seem real. What he was doing would make all kind of noise. But I do agree that a man possesed is capable of anything. Cuddos to the story.

Title article: THIS ADULT MAY CONTAIN STORY CONTENT
Date: 2008-11-10 20:53:08

I really tried, but I didn't get this at all. Sorry. But Ill give it a 5 since Its probally me.

Title article: The Wrong Crowd, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-11-10 15:28:01

this is good
I usually give books at least 50 pages. If I just aint feeling it by then I put the book down and back away. Don't see it happening yet as this held my interest. Though as one reviewer stated it didn't have that horror feel to it. But then most good things are worth waiting for. Off to chapter 2 when I have a little more time...its dinner time round my parts.

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Last 10 Forum Posts

Date	Subject	Category	Hits
11/17/2008 14:52:52	Allmine is great	Off-Topic	288
11/13/2008 12:32:41	Re:Need an opinion	Off-Topic	211
11/13/2008 12:15:55	Re:Need an opinion	Off-Topic	211
11/03/2008 16:55:23	Re:A looooooooooong ass name	Off-Topic	122
11/03/2008 13:06:11	Re:Couple of things...	Off-Topic	2105
11/02/2008 13:16:11	Re:Deletions?	Off-Topic	468
10/28/2008 07:41:46	Re:There is a leg on my deck	Off-Topic	812
10/28/2008 07:14:40	Re:There is a leg on my deck	Off-Topic	812
10/27/2008 16:47:18	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	336816
10/24/2008 14:51:48	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	336816

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Amie Kerlin (lemon) in your head	Created On: 11/16/2008 16:56:04 Potter you're on crack. I just read the comment you left on my 'affairs end' poem and I've never had a grude with you! what made you think so?
Michelle Huff (allmine) In delusionville	Created On: 10/01/2008 11:44:02 Since you said hey to me, I say hey back!
Michelle Huff (allmine) hmmmmm	Created On: 09/25/2008 09:08:40 Cause I felt like dropping in to say HI!!!
Gone (So long!) Warwick, RI	Created On: 09/11/2008 17:29:48 What's up Potter? Hey, thanks for the comment on Jennie's Storm. You had me rollin'! Oh, and concerning "Bitten," I wasn't going to go any further with it. When both you and Phil wrote that you were looking for more, I was tempted to add a new chapter. But this was something I wrote about twelve years ago. I think I'll let it rest. I'm going to go check out the "secret" at St. Margaret's now. Later!
Christian Wright (The 13th) Right at the bog and next to the old oak tree.	Created On: 08/07/2008 14:28:21 So when you gonna put out the marge (sorry forgot name)story. I'm looking for some good material to steal.
David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump) hill country texas	Created On: 07/29/2008 20:08:05 i've gotta say, cause i'm funny that way, i really miss your other stories. i, as you know, am blessed with adhd - which means that i have a very fast refresh rate. i used to really enjoy popping in on your page and rereading your work. although your stories now are no doubt very well written and it is very easy to see that you have matured as a writer even in the short time you have been here - i really miss the whimsical side of russell. i know it's a total pain, believe me, i'm still trying to slide my old stories back on my page - but i sure would love to see your old stuff back here again. that's all - carry on! and write on!
Amie Kerlin (lemon) under the bed	Created On: 07/21/2008 16:04:12 nice monkey, don't spank him too hard
Michelle Huff (allmine)	Created On: 07/21/2008 14:25:33 I could say a bad word, but there are minors around!!!
Philip Neale (philneale1952) Derbyshire, England	Created On: 07/18/2008 07:10:48 Edited By Philip Neale (philneale1952) On: 07/18/2008 07:12:05 Bloody hell mate, forgot to sign you in. Got your ticket yet? Phil
Michelle Huff (allmine) I know where I want to be...	Created On: 07/17/2008 06:06:57 What happened to the sexy pic of you? What am I supposed to drool over now?