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Member Since	06/15/2008
Last Online	10/07/2008
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About Myself:

Discovered the bug for writing after helping my daughter do a homework assignment where she had to write a story of some 1000 words. After I was finished with it(daddy's lil girl)I gave it to her to take to school.

Live on the east coast in the good ol USofA.

I like to read, so I should get around to yours eventually.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 4, 2008	The Lottery	Humor	299
Sep 27, 2008	A Healing	Horror	366
Sep 18, 2008	Secrets of St. Margaret's (final)	Mystery	133
Sep 17, 2008	Secrets of St. Margaret's (part 5)	Mystery	149
Sep 13, 2008	Secrets of St. Margaret's (part 4)	Mystery	202
Sep 11, 2008	Secrets of St. Margaret's (part 3)	Mystery	175
Sep 8, 2008	Secrets of St. Margaret's (part 2)	Mystery	211
Sep 6, 2008	Secrets of St. Margaret's	Mystery	662
Aug 26, 2008	Empty Dish	Miscellaneous Stories	157
Aug 24, 2008	A Truth Recognized	Poetry	129
Aug 20, 2008	Punishment	Miscellaneous Stories	334
Aug 20, 2008	Nights Journey	Miscellaneous Stories	463
Aug 19, 2008	Apparition of Justice	Horror	254
Aug 16, 2008	Better Day Tomorrow	Miscellaneous Stories	148
Aug 15, 2008	How Far	Poetry	157
Aug 14, 2008	A Freak of Nature	Miscellaneous Stories	120
Aug 14, 2008	A Good Day for a Bad Mistake	Miscellaneous Stories	187
Aug 12, 2008	Della Bridge	Poetry	125
Aug 12, 2008	An Unfolding Nightmare	Poetry	172
Aug 9, 2008	House Detective	Mystery	305

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Comments

Total number of comments: 547

Title article: An Affair With Darkness
Date: 2008-10-07 06:25:20

what a hoot
Nice story to read while sipping on morning coffee. Every creature is beautiful in its own way and the owl is no exception. Great job of giving the reader a glimpse out your window.

Title article: Alpha and Omega
Date: 2008-10-07 06:16:53

let there be 5 stars
I won't give the ending away with this comment but just tell you this was good. A little confusing however. But then what isnt on this subject but thats a debate for another day. Thought you did a good job of keeping the reader excited to see how it ends. Liked it

Title article: Lily's Gift
Date: 2008-10-06 15:41:16

Every comment is valid. But I thought this was really good and liked it bunches. It seemed the perfect length and was easy to read. You have a talent and I look forward to reading more of your stuff as I find time. Well done.

Title article: DIDN'T KNOW THEN.
Date: 2008-10-06 15:11:29

Sometimes when someone kills them self you see signs before that day. Then sometimes its a complete shock. Nice easy to understand poem you have here.

Title article: Golden Night
Date: 2008-10-06 15:02:56

This was good but it seemed a little forced. Some lines didn't seem to flow as others and threw my rhythem off. But it was decent. All your poems are very well crafted so for me not to really understand one pretty much tells me its me not you.

Title article: The Photograph
Date: 2008-10-06 14:48:57

Not understanding if these friends died or just left town. If they left town with no word then they must not be good friends,,,if they dropped dead like flies,,,,why?

So many questions so little time. Cool lil poem though

Title article: If Only
Date: 2008-10-06 14:41:36

I agree with the other commentors that this kind of poem is so played and also the the word coz seems out of place,,maybe cuz would be better...dunno. But having said that I really liked your version of 'what if' Good job and keep getting it.

Title article: Mr. Mom To The Rescue.
Date: 2008-10-06 06:04:04

I liked this but I also feel that this should have been longer. So much could have been added to the routine of Mr. Mom. Having said that...this was your story and a grand one at that.

Title article: Fly beyond the boundaries
Date: 2008-10-06 05:59:54

liked it
Liked it but it seemed to be missing a word in line 5 and 6. 'A' 'the"...anyway, regardless, this was simple and straight forward and was easily interpreted.

Title article: The Lottery
Date: 2008-10-05 12:50:56

lol
What is so hard to figure out what this was about. Neal got slighted in the agreement and was so pissed he went after his so called friend. Down to his last dime he caught up with him enjoying a cruise. The very last line tells you that Neal got the short end again...geez.

Every beginning word is capped. So what,,its a poem.

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Forum

Last 10 Forum Posts

Date	Subject	Category	Hits
10/06/2008 15:22:46	Re:The Music Video Thread	Off-Topic	298
09/28/2008 09:56:48	Re:I need laughter	Off-Topic	539
09/26/2008 16:24:28	Re:Intellectual property theft	Off-Topic	247
09/26/2008 16:10:15	Re:Intellectual property theft	Off-Topic	247
09/13/2008 21:00:17	Re:Name That Hero...	Off-Topic	792
08/30/2008 17:04:09	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	308525
08/30/2008 16:25:23	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	308525
08/30/2008 12:50:55	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	308525
08/28/2008 12:53:51	Re:THATS IT!! I CALL Shenanigans	Off-Topic	5233
08/26/2008 19:54:14	Re:Punishment	Off-Topic	8655

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JJ Tyler (JJtyler)

Michelle Huff (allmine)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Michelle Huff (allmine) In delusionville	Created On: 10/01/2008 11:44:02 Since you said hey to me, I say hey back!
Michelle Huff (allmine) hmmmmm	Created On: 09/25/2008 09:08:40 Cause I felt like dropping in to say HI!!!
Gone (So long!) Warwick, RI	Created On: 09/11/2008 17:29:48 What's up Potter? Hey, thanks for the comment on Jennie's Storm. You had me rollin'! Oh, and concerning "Bitten," I wasn't going to go any further with it. When both you and Phil wrote that you were looking for more, I was tempted to add a new chapter. But this was something I wrote about twelve years ago. I think I'll let it rest. I'm going to go check out the "secret" at St. Margaret's now. Later!
Christian Wright (The 13th) Right at the bog and next to the old oak tree.	Created On: 08/07/2008 14:28:21 So when you gonna put out the marge (sorry forgot name)story. I'm looking for some good material to steal.
David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump) hill country texas	Created On: 07/29/2008 20:08:05 i've gotta say, cause i'm funny that way, i really miss your other stories. i, as you know, am blessed with adhd - which means that i have a very fast refresh rate. i used to really enjoy popping in on your page and rereading your work. although your stories now are no doubt very well written and it is very easy to see that you have matured as a writer even in the short time you have been here - i really miss the whimsical side of russell. i know it's a total pain, believe me, i'm still trying to slide my old stories back on my page - but i sure would love to see your old stuff back here again. that's all - carry on! and write on!
Amie Kerlin (lemon) under the bed	Created On: 07/21/2008 16:04:12 nice monkey, don't spank him too hard
Michelle Huff (allmine)	Created On: 07/21/2008 14:25:33 I could say a bad word, but there are minors around!!!
Philip Neale (philneale1952) Derbyshire, England	Created On: 07/18/2008 07:10:48 Edited By Philip Neale (philneale1952) On: 07/18/2008 07:12:05 Bloody hell mate, forgot to sign you in. Got your ticket yet? Phil
Michelle Huff (allmine) I know where I want to be...	Created On: 07/17/2008 06:06:57 What happened to the sexy pic of you? What am I supposed to drool over now?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/09/2008 21:20:27 Oi! What happened to Punishment?