If The Sun Didn't Rise

IF THE SUN DIDN'T RISE BY JON STALK...

Secrets of St. Margaret's

In the early hours of a brisk October morning, two...
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About Myself: Discovered the bug for writing after helping my daughter do a homework assignment where she had to write a story of some 1000 words. After I was finished with it(daddy's lil girl)I gave it to her to take to school.

Live on the east coast in the good ol USofA.





I like to read, so I should get around to yours eventually.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Sep 6, 2008Secrets of St. Margaret'sMystery 126
Aug 26, 2008Empty DishMiscellaneous Stories 111
Aug 24, 2008A Truth RecognizedPoetry 98
Aug 20, 2008PunishmentMiscellaneous Stories 253
Aug 20, 2008Nights JourneyMiscellaneous Stories 359
Aug 19, 2008Apparition of JusticeHorror 210
Aug 16, 2008Better Day TomorrowMiscellaneous Stories 110
Aug 15, 2008How FarPoetry 118
Aug 14, 2008A Freak of NatureMiscellaneous Stories 89
Aug 14, 2008A Good Day for a Bad MistakeMiscellaneous Stories 139
Aug 12, 2008Della BridgePoetry 90
Aug 12, 2008An Unfolding NightmarePoetry 142
Aug 9, 2008House DetectiveMystery 245
Aug 6, 2008The Butcher of Barrios (part cuatro)Miscellaneous Stories 123
Aug 5, 2008Racism has a ColorPoetry 174
Aug 5, 2008The Butcher of Barrios (part tres)Miscellaneous Stories 109
Aug 3, 2008The Butcher of Barrios (part dos)Miscellaneous Stories 123
Aug 1, 2008The Butcher of BarriosMiscellaneous Stories 334
Jul 29, 2008Visions of a Tortured MindMiscellaneous Stories 234
Jul 29, 2008A Life CompleteMiscellaneous Stories 185
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Comments

Total number of comments: 415

Title article: A Ghetto Story
Date: 2008-09-06 19:11:55

In my comment above I said take her child...of course it was only if her mother would agree of letting her go.

Title article: A Ghetto Story
Date: 2008-09-06 19:09:03

This story reminds me of so many songs,,,and not even the one 'in the ghetto' by the King Presley. Your story of ghetto living seems right on the money as I understand it in its extreme. So many great children who are never giving a chance to expierience a good life or oppertunities fills my heart with sorrow. I once saw a homeless women sitting in her box with what appeared to be child of only 4 with a sign pleading for help. I continued driving on that day. Reflecting on my uncaring actions, it changed my life. The next day I looked for that women and was going to offer them a hot meal or a bit of cash. As crazy as it sounds I even talked to my wife about asking her If we could take her child and give her a good life. There will always be poor and im truly sorry for that. Your story is very powerful and enjoyed its message.

Title article: is this poetry
Date: 2008-09-06 18:15:15
3 stars for a good attempt
This is not poetry, its pure hatred. I don't really believe you think this way, just looking for reaction. If you ever take time to read the Bible(Some books in the old and new)you will understand why Jesus came to Earth to die. But I don't blame you for not believeing in something that is never there as we see it. That's why faith is such a powerful word.  
 
Are you related to Dr. Lucifer by the way?

Title article: Through Open Eyes
Date: 2008-09-06 18:02:37

This was really good in my opinion. Ya know, my father writes poetry with some selling in stores here on the east coast. He writes poems like this. You have a talent, and even though your poems are filled with sorrow(hence your name)it is a gift you should be proud to own.

Title article: Trained to Kill
Date: 2008-09-06 17:48:48
Hey Pilgrim,,,,nice job
These are poems that I enjoy the most to read,,,easy to understand stuff. You know the poems where your brain doesn't hurt afterwards.  
 
John Wayne is an all American hero, thanks for popping him on the screen for me...now I wanna watch one of his movies.

Title article: Rage
Date: 2008-09-06 17:41:00

This was a good brief straight to the point moment of losing it. So pissed veins begin popping. And she, the victim, feels pity for his infliction. Decent lil quip(just made up a word..i think.)

Title article: Awakening of Minds (Part One)
Date: 2008-09-06 17:33:40

After reading this again im still saying (now thats weird). This was kinda like a story from X files T.V series. Its fun to read an old story again. Good job Sir Dirk.

Title article: Marks On the Wall
Date: 2008-09-06 14:28:37
book em Danno
Agreement with Daren. This for me also read like a CSI on tv type of story. Your character Marks does make his rounds...must be making bundles with all the overtime. You have a great knack at story telling, and one can learn alot from reading your works, I for one.  
 
To produce stories so quickly is a great feat...one that I will never posses.

Title article: Claustrophobia
Date: 2008-09-06 14:14:35
enjoyed
This was a very entertaining piece of writing. What a bummer for Douglas at the end, kinda creepy the way it ended. This seemed to be the perfect length for this story...just long enough to leave you satisfied. 
 
Good job

Title article: Respectability
Date: 2008-09-06 14:01:06
very good
This was well thought out. You seem to have a real gift at poetry. This also for me touched a bit on vanity. How we as a society spend our pay caring for our looks rather then solutions to the worlds problems. But also one needs to respect themselves and be a leader and not a follower

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Christian Wright (The 13th)

Right at the bog and next to the old oak tree.
 Created On: 08/07/2008 14:28:21
So when you gonna put out the marge (sorry forgot name)story. I'm looking for some good material to steal.

David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country texas
 Created On: 07/29/2008 20:08:05
i've gotta say, cause i'm funny that way, i really miss your other stories.

i, as you know, am blessed with adhd - which means that i have a very fast refresh rate. i used to really enjoy popping in on your page and rereading your work.

although your stories now are no doubt very well written and it is very easy to see that you have matured as a writer even in the short time you have been here - i really miss the whimsical side of russell.

i know it's a total pain, believe me, i'm still trying to slide my old stories back on my page - but i sure would love to see your old stuff back here again.

that's all - carry on!

and write on!
Amie Kerlin (lemon)

under the bed
 Created On: 07/21/2008 16:04:12
nice monkey, don't spank him too hard

Michelle Huff (allmine)

 Created On: 07/21/2008 14:25:33
I could say a bad word, but there are minors around!!!

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
 Created On: 07/18/2008 07:10:48
Edited By Philip Neale (philneale1952) On: 07/18/2008 07:12:05
Bloody hell mate, forgot to sign you in.

Got your ticket yet?

Phil
Michelle Huff (allmine)

I know where I want to be...
 Created On: 07/17/2008 06:06:57
What happened to the sexy pic of you? What am I supposed to drool over now?

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 07/09/2008 21:20:27
Oi!

What happened to Punishment?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 07/06/2008 18:00:32
hey! puting bags over your head is a very dangerous habit! even paper like the kind you have on yours. why? well termites live in those things and they might mistake your head as a chunk of wood and have a feast upon your flesh. that was what happened to capone, after all.
Michelle Huff (allmine)

Here and There
 Created On: 07/02/2008 10:50:28
Have to be the first one to leave a comment...It's the law!

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