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David Relic (David Relic)
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Member Since 06/03/2008
Last Online 09/05/2008
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Website/Blog: whatsablogdog?
About Myself: ...and through the darkness my love shines...

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jul 10, 2008First KillAdventure 167
Jul 8, 2008Open Your EyesAdventure 166
Jun 14, 2008The Lullaby Man, Chapter 2Mystery 97
Jun 14, 2008The Lullaby Man, Chapter 1Mystery 120
Jun 3, 2008Operation ROCOHumor 132

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Total number of comments: 30

Title article: The Grey Dawn
Date: 2008-08-21 10:46:24

I liked it a lot. very well written and the structure was cool. Read it multiple times and liked it better every time. 
 
Soldiers never had it easy, did they?

Title article: The Lullaby Man, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-25 02:35:24

do you take pleasure in writing stories as stupid as your face?  
I see....no comment...

Title article: Dear Diary
Date: 2008-07-25 02:29:46

Its not easy walking up to the plate and gripping the bat up. Poetry fucking scares me. Id rather write a story about scratching my ass in public. Anyway...Poetry is not easy (as I said above) but you came out here and laid it down. I think this is solid. Poems dont have to rhyme. they never did...

Title article: Miracles
Date: 2008-07-25 02:20:16

It was well written. A bit too biblical for me, but you spun a fine story. I read the whole thing(which is more important than you might think.) I enjoyed it. I want to hear more of your work. Short stories dont need names, or connections...but if you'd like to give me some, I'd read on...

Title article: Unwanted Praise
Date: 2008-07-22 22:21:24

I liked it. very good. Damn...there are some deliciously vicious comments left here for this one. I think you inspired other poets to leave poetic comments. not easy...

Title article: Stars in The Night Sky
Date: 2008-07-22 22:17:08

hey, I think this was a relly good story. very well written and laid out. The message was solid, and I enjoyed it very much. Well done!  
interested in reading more of your work.

Title article: All Liquid Diet
Date: 2008-07-22 22:14:16

totally good. It was like going scuba diving inside the mind of someone with an eating disorder. Who cares if you can guess the ending before you get there? I thought it was great.

Title article: heaven won't let me in
Date: 2008-07-22 22:07:53

Hallo Amanda. This was really good! I liked it a lot. I especially like the last part, about how the poem was written on the wall of the cell. Very cool. Keep it up!

Title article: Wall of Hate
Date: 2008-07-22 22:03:42

wow. That was really good. Great flow. It thought you did a real great job with this! I hope you have some more ont he way. This was really well written.

Title article: Heavan Sent, chapter 2/4
Date: 2008-07-22 11:42:25

Wow. I thought this was really good. The descripions were right on, and I thought it was very well written. Keep up the good work! I'd like to read more...

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