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About Myself: I am a writer but not yet published I want to see how good my work is.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 22, 2008Who Am IPoetry 154
Oct 21, 2008Happy NothingnessPoetry 95
Oct 20, 2008Lost Love On Trail Of DarknessPoetry 113
Oct 19, 2008I Miss My DaddyPoetry 218
Oct 17, 2008Hostage: Pull or ReleasePoetry 71
Oct 17, 2008Last LetterPoetry 73
Oct 13, 2008River Of PainPoetry 160
Oct 10, 2008The World We LivePoetry 157
Oct 10, 2008"Please! Don't GoPoetry 131
Oct 2, 2008Would you listen?Poetry 123
Oct 1, 2008The headlinePoetry 114
Sep 30, 2008Not one tearPoetry 124
Sep 28, 2008OppositePoetry 143
Sep 28, 2008Wish ( Her lullyaby)Poetry 241
Sep 26, 2008Lost Without YouPoetry 127
Sep 26, 2008Women CheatPoetry 213
Sep 24, 2008Mental BlockPoetry 146
Sep 24, 2008Brown PoisonPoetry 211
Sep 24, 2008Old SoldierPoetry 119
Aug 25, 2008No ForgivenessPoetry 142
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Total number of comments: 326

Title article: A Storiesville Wedding
Date: 2008-10-22 20:17:35

Wow I was not invited. So this is how it feels to be a loser. (Bu hoo)Hay who did the seating chart and left Ama out? Really I should get married to just not invite them. So I must morn I the ones who did not make the list. 
 
Amatayo 
A.T.M.O 
DarcKnyt 
r.e.potter 
Ashutosh 
allmine 
prithwish 
simplerminded 
Amie Kerlin 
Candee Ivy 
Nathan Weaver 
Jonathan 
 
and all the others that I could not type because there are like a thousand peps up in this piece.

Title article: The Cheat
Date: 2008-10-22 20:04:21

I can't rate this for I could not read this.  
 
 
so uhh don't know what to say.

Title article: SPAM (the good kind! yes there is a good kind)
Date: 2008-10-22 20:02:19

Really this was good no lie.  
 
yeah

Title article: Happy Nothingness
Date: 2008-10-21 21:56:43

A real talk atom is acting gay. I mean I have never really been one to put importance on points but when the same person keeps giving low scores because they are jealous is ridicules. If anyone agrees with me speak up or do you agree with atom.

Title article: Fighting For Life
Date: 2008-10-21 21:42:50

First baby

Title article: Secrets of the heart
Date: 2008-10-21 21:40:31

Ashutosh you bastered you stole my points. now im second and third.  
 
 
god dang

Title article: Secrets of the heart
Date: 2008-10-21 21:37:29

First  
 
yeah

Title article: Happy Nothingness
Date: 2008-10-21 21:34:43

grammar errors really can you please point them out. thx

Title article: This World Of Ours
Date: 2008-10-21 20:54:06

IT DOES SEEM THAT YOUR GETTING BETTER.  
 
YEAH 
 
GUESS IM RUBBING OFF ON YOU.

Title article: I Watched the World Die to Winter
Date: 2008-10-21 20:45:57

I really don't understand what was going on with this poem. At first I was hanging on but then you said something about the color of blood which I did not get.

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DateSubjectCategoryHits
10/02/2008 19:16:32Re:Poems and writersOff-Topic322
07/11/2008 14:33:17Re:Let's clear the airOff-Topic1915
06/28/2008 20:17:16Re:What is your inspiration?Off-Topic485
06/28/2008 20:11:16Re:Interact with first time authors!Off-Topic295
06/28/2008 20:05:48What is your inspiration?Off-Topic485
06/27/2008 23:20:23Re:What Happened to Storiesville?Off-Topic8150
06/27/2008 22:19:40Re:Anywhere in the WorldOff-Topic1954

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August Blackwood (June Eclipsis)

 Created On: 07/12/2008 08:45:54
Hi. I've been reading some of your poems. I must admit, I was getting pulled along by peer pressure to criticize your poems. But, I have to say that I think your poems are very unique. Sure, there are some improvements that are needed (mine, too), but I think that you have some great ideas and stuff with you.
And, I was thinking that you might want a signing in here.
Keep writing

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