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About Myself: I am a writer but not yet published I want to see how good my work is.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 10, 2008The World We LivePoetry 39
Oct 10, 2008"Please! Don't GoPoetry 37
Oct 2, 2008Would you listen?Poetry 85
Oct 1, 2008The headlinePoetry 81
Sep 30, 2008Not one tearPoetry 92
Sep 28, 2008OppositePoetry 101
Sep 28, 2008Wish ( Her lullyaby)Poetry 194
Sep 26, 2008Lost Without YouPoetry 80
Sep 26, 2008Women CheatPoetry 138
Sep 24, 2008Mental BlockPoetry 103
Sep 24, 2008Brown PoisonPoetry 127
Sep 24, 2008Old SoldierPoetry 83
Aug 25, 2008No ForgivenessPoetry 109
Aug 25, 2008No ChivalryPoetry 102
Aug 24, 2008As my mind falls apartPoetry 107
Aug 6, 2008A Love PoemPoetry 200
Aug 6, 2008Memoirs of my SoulPoetry 122
Jul 13, 2008IsPoetry 156
Jul 11, 2008I'm Losing my MindPoetry 144
Jul 10, 2008Black TearsPoetry 151
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Total number of comments: 295

Title article: Eyes Open
Date: 2008-10-02 22:06:46

I think this haiku is talking about waking up or it could be walking out of a cave. You know the kids from serira leon. Not sure if it is the spelling and to lazy to check.

Title article: Resurgence
Date: 2008-10-02 22:02:09

Wow I need to read more. I see beauty in every one of your poems but at the same time I can't understand with out a dictionary. But when I get it, it all hits me another wonderfully written poem.

Title article: The Malefic House, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-10-02 19:04:46

Wow creepy fell like some one is standing behind me. And side note I know this is not the place but does anyone know the song that the men in the car are singing to the king on the snickers commercial. If any one does send me a message.

Title article: The Fall of Babylon, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-10-02 19:00:35

I guess I should have read the other story before I read this one because I was kinda lost. But the story was pretty good from what I have read so far.

Title article: The Crunch
Date: 2008-10-02 17:34:23

The poem takes an interesting position. The rich getting richer. While the poor getting poorer. It is all around us but what can we do. Take for example the banks if you have alot of money you get more. But if you have a little money which most people in America has, they take it. Or look at minimum wage. The way the economy is you can't even make rent in a single bedroom in a decent neighbor hood. How's that for advancement.

Title article: Taking a Pet
Date: 2008-10-02 12:21:37

tee-hee-hee

Title article: You Want What?
Date: 2008-10-02 12:20:42

funny

Title article: college magazine articles
Date: 2008-10-02 12:19:25

funny

Title article: college magazine articles
Date: 2008-10-02 12:18:05

funny

Title article: Poppy Appeal
Date: 2008-10-02 12:16:46

funny

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August Blackwood (June Eclipsis)

 Created On: 07/12/2008 08:45:54
Hi. I've been reading some of your poems. I must admit, I was getting pulled along by peer pressure to criticize your poems. But, I have to say that I think your poems are very unique. Sure, there are some improvements that are needed (mine, too), but I think that you have some great ideas and stuff with you.
And, I was thinking that you might want a signing in here.
Keep writing

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