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Member Since	06/03/2008
Last Online	08/26/2008
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About Myself:

I am a writer but not yet published I want to see how good my work is.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 25, 2008	No Forgiveness	Poetry	65
Aug 25, 2008	No Chivalry	Poetry	52
Aug 24, 2008	As my mind falls apart	Poetry	74
Aug 6, 2008	A Love Poem	Poetry	117
Aug 6, 2008	Memoirs of my Soul	Poetry	75
Jul 13, 2008	Is	Poetry	131
Jul 11, 2008	I'm Losing my Mind	Poetry	112
Jul 10, 2008	Black Tears	Poetry	122
Jul 10, 2008	Daddy what is?	Poetry	137
Jul 10, 2008	Good Morning	Poetry	96
Jul 7, 2008	This World is Cold	Poetry	97
Jul 7, 2008	Thought's of my Soul	Poetry	114
Jul 4, 2008	I'm Sorry / Memoirs of the lost soldier	Poetry	190
Jul 4, 2008	Dual Personality part 3 the conculsion	Poetry	107
Jul 2, 2008	Death	Poetry	146
Jul 2, 2008	Death	Poetry	296
Jul 2, 2008	The Hero's creed/ A Hero's Mistake	Poetry	128
Jun 30, 2008	Thoughts of an Lunatic.	Poetry	168
Jun 29, 2008	Dual Personality part 2	Poetry	442
Jun 28, 2008	Detached	Poetry	159

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Comments

Total number of comments: 218

Title article: The Road Home
Date: 2008-08-25 22:08:15

If this was made by a girl will you marry me.

and if it is a guy then this poem was not that great.

yeah

Title article: The coast
Date: 2008-08-25 22:06:20

I really enjoyed this piece.

yeah

Title article: Too Much Chaos for Me
Date: 2008-08-25 22:04:17

HUH.

NRIS

Title article: Same
Date: 2008-08-25 22:02:42

thinking.

cuu.

NRIS

Title article: It All Seems A Million Miles Away
Date: 2008-08-25 22:01:02

ERRRRR how sweet sorrow really is.

You did man I mean wow.

Title article: Regress
Date: 2008-08-25 21:57:25

I really don't know what was going on in this poem. Maybe it er's I's dids nots get going's ta dem fancy smacy comalogies or schoorls.

NRIS

Title article: A Static Reality
Date: 2008-08-25 21:47:51

I really cant see what the writer was getting at but im sure if she put what she was talking about then I would be like oh yeah thats it so maybe you cold do that. um yeah I like that idea.

Title article: A Static Reality
Date: 2008-08-25 21:44:46

Yeah

Title article: Ode to Chaabuk
Date: 2008-08-25 21:43:41

Meatball cap or better hot sauce hat. no thats not right I guess it should rhyme with the last letter I will give it a try.

NRIS

Title article: Lemon: a Haiku
Date: 2008-08-25 21:36:24

I don't know how much help I could be for I really don't know the format for a haiku.

huh

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07/11/2008 14:33:17	Re:Let's clear the air	Off-Topic	1209
06/28/2008 20:17:16	Re:What is your inspiration?	Off-Topic	281
06/28/2008 20:11:16	Re:Interact with first time authors!	Off-Topic	137
06/28/2008 20:05:48	What is your inspiration?	Off-Topic	281
06/27/2008 23:20:23	Re:What Happened to Storiesville?	Off-Topic	5358
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August Blackwood (June Eclipsis)

Created On: 07/12/2008 08:45:54

Hi. I've been reading some of your poems. I must admit, I was getting pulled along by peer pressure to criticize your poems. But, I have to say that I think your poems are very unique. Sure, there are some improvements that are needed (mine, too), but I think that you have some great ideas and stuff with you.
And, I was thinking that you might want a signing in here.
Keep writing