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About Myself: I am a writer but not yet published I want to see how good my work is.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 10, 2008The World We LivePoetry 75
Oct 10, 2008"Please! Don't GoPoetry 65
Oct 2, 2008Would you listen?Poetry 89
Oct 1, 2008The headlinePoetry 83
Sep 30, 2008Not one tearPoetry 94
Sep 28, 2008OppositePoetry 102
Sep 28, 2008Wish ( Her lullyaby)Poetry 196
Sep 26, 2008Lost Without YouPoetry 81
Sep 26, 2008Women CheatPoetry 139
Sep 24, 2008Mental BlockPoetry 104
Sep 24, 2008Brown PoisonPoetry 128
Sep 24, 2008Old SoldierPoetry 85
Aug 25, 2008No ForgivenessPoetry 110
Aug 25, 2008No ChivalryPoetry 103
Aug 24, 2008As my mind falls apartPoetry 108
Aug 6, 2008A Love PoemPoetry 202
Aug 6, 2008Memoirs of my SoulPoetry 123
Jul 13, 2008IsPoetry 157
Jul 11, 2008I'm Losing my MindPoetry 145
Jul 10, 2008Black TearsPoetry 153
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Total number of comments: 297

Title article: The World We Live
Date: 2008-10-11 21:33:10

Well I got a double foam cup pass the hater-ade to the left. 
 
And sorry I must have messed up the time line but recently you have been jocking my work harder then the cheer leaders for the NFL. Ha metaphors are fun.  
 
And if my eyes are right and mind is set to the right channel you haven't liked any poems that I posted after my hiatus.  
 
And as a poet to another I don't want nice people just giving me five stars but give credit where its due. And this poem is like a book loaned to a fourteen year kid. Over Due

Title article: The World We Live
Date: 2008-10-11 18:11:37

Wow resist whatever you need to get off my writings. I mean if everything I write you don't like, why are you always reading it. 
 
Think ya might need to stop sippin on that hater-ade and put it back in the fridge.

Title article: Eyes Open
Date: 2008-10-02 22:06:46

I think this haiku is talking about waking up or it could be walking out of a cave. You know the kids from serira leon. Not sure if it is the spelling and to lazy to check.

Title article: Resurgence
Date: 2008-10-02 22:02:09

Wow I need to read more. I see beauty in every one of your poems but at the same time I can't understand with out a dictionary. But when I get it, it all hits me another wonderfully written poem.

Title article: The Malefic House, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-10-02 19:04:46

Wow creepy fell like some one is standing behind me. And side note I know this is not the place but does anyone know the song that the men in the car are singing to the king on the snickers commercial. If any one does send me a message.

Title article: The Fall of Babylon, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-10-02 19:00:35

I guess I should have read the other story before I read this one because I was kinda lost. But the story was pretty good from what I have read so far.

Title article: The Crunch
Date: 2008-10-02 17:34:23

The poem takes an interesting position. The rich getting richer. While the poor getting poorer. It is all around us but what can we do. Take for example the banks if you have alot of money you get more. But if you have a little money which most people in America has, they take it. Or look at minimum wage. The way the economy is you can't even make rent in a single bedroom in a decent neighbor hood. How's that for advancement.

Title article: Taking a Pet
Date: 2008-10-02 12:21:37

tee-hee-hee

Title article: You Want What?
Date: 2008-10-02 12:20:42

funny

Title article: college magazine articles
Date: 2008-10-02 12:19:25

funny

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10/02/2008 19:16:32Re:Poems and writersOff-Topic208
07/11/2008 14:33:17Re:Let's clear the airOff-Topic1608
06/28/2008 20:17:16Re:What is your inspiration?Off-Topic382
06/28/2008 20:11:16Re:Interact with first time authors!Off-Topic195
06/28/2008 20:05:48What is your inspiration?Off-Topic382
06/27/2008 23:20:23Re:What Happened to Storiesville?Off-Topic7572
06/27/2008 22:19:40Re:Anywhere in the WorldOff-Topic1715

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August Blackwood (June Eclipsis)

 Created On: 07/12/2008 08:45:54
Hi. I've been reading some of your poems. I must admit, I was getting pulled along by peer pressure to criticize your poems. But, I have to say that I think your poems are very unique. Sure, there are some improvements that are needed (mine, too), but I think that you have some great ideas and stuff with you.
And, I was thinking that you might want a signing in here.
Keep writing

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