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About Myself: I am a writer but not yet published I want to see how good my work is.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 22, 2008Who Am IPoetry 154
Oct 21, 2008Happy NothingnessPoetry 95
Oct 20, 2008Lost Love On Trail Of DarknessPoetry 113
Oct 19, 2008I Miss My DaddyPoetry 218
Oct 17, 2008Hostage: Pull or ReleasePoetry 71
Oct 17, 2008Last LetterPoetry 73
Oct 13, 2008River Of PainPoetry 160
Oct 10, 2008The World We LivePoetry 157
Oct 10, 2008"Please! Don't GoPoetry 131
Oct 2, 2008Would you listen?Poetry 123
Oct 1, 2008The headlinePoetry 114
Sep 30, 2008Not one tearPoetry 124
Sep 28, 2008OppositePoetry 143
Sep 28, 2008Wish ( Her lullyaby)Poetry 241
Sep 26, 2008Lost Without YouPoetry 127
Sep 26, 2008Women CheatPoetry 213
Sep 24, 2008Mental BlockPoetry 146
Sep 24, 2008Brown PoisonPoetry 211
Sep 24, 2008Old SoldierPoetry 119
Aug 25, 2008No ForgivenessPoetry 142
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Title article: A Confused Heart
Date: 2008-10-21 20:41:39

I am no the wall about this one.  
I did like how it was written.

Title article: Lost Love On Trail Of Darkness
Date: 2008-10-20 18:56:24

A resist if there are any errors that you see please point them out for me.

Title article: Until The Day
Date: 2008-10-20 18:34:58

I have seen you write some good poems and then I see something like this. Uh you might need to go back to the drawing board and re-cook this poem into something better.

Title article: Bogeyman
Date: 2008-10-19 22:07:24

This was very good man gotta read it again.  
 
yeah

Title article: Because I loved you
Date: 2008-10-19 22:03:39

This poem was very creative good work writer.  
 
yeah

Title article: I Dream Of Screams
Date: 2008-10-19 21:57:12

This was one of your better poems

Title article: Brown Poison
Date: 2008-10-19 21:55:25

I have to applaud you this was very good, not better then mine but good.  
 
yeah

Title article: Kiss of Departure
Date: 2008-10-19 21:53:14

I thought this was good.  
 
yeah

Title article: SOME FOOLS (like me) NEVER LEARN
Date: 2008-10-17 21:04:57

HA HA this one was really funny had me laughing. And do not get down when people give you a bad rating. Thats just their hating getting the better of them.

Title article: mullinsgirl to mullindeath
Date: 2008-10-17 21:00:11

This was extremely long but nice. I liked how you wanted someone to wake you up.  
 
yeah

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06/28/2008 20:17:16Re:What is your inspiration?Off-Topic485
06/28/2008 20:11:16Re:Interact with first time authors!Off-Topic295
06/28/2008 20:05:48What is your inspiration?Off-Topic485
06/27/2008 23:20:23Re:What Happened to Storiesville?Off-Topic8150
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August Blackwood (June Eclipsis)

 Created On: 07/12/2008 08:45:54
Hi. I've been reading some of your poems. I must admit, I was getting pulled along by peer pressure to criticize your poems. But, I have to say that I think your poems are very unique. Sure, there are some improvements that are needed (mine, too), but I think that you have some great ideas and stuff with you.
And, I was thinking that you might want a signing in here.
Keep writing

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