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Member Since	05/30/2008
Last Online	11/18/2008
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About Myself:

From Long Island. Love to write short stories. Also love to read them.I always have something cooking in this old noggin.
Please feel free to leave feedback. Good or Bad, I am just honored you would take time to read anything I wrote.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 17, 2008	Pennies, Chapter 6	Miscellaneous Stories	108
Oct 9, 2008	Pennies, Chapter 5	Miscellaneous Stories	96
Oct 8, 2008	Pennies, Chapter 4	Miscellaneous Stories	84
Oct 7, 2008	Pennies, Chapter 3	Miscellaneous Stories	192
Oct 6, 2008	Pennies, Chapter 2	Miscellaneous Stories	115
Oct 6, 2008	Pennies, Chapter 1	Miscellaneous Stories	131

Comments

Total number of comments: 114

Title article: Audible Morrison
Date: 2008-11-12 05:26:24

This was pretty good. I really liked it, Except for the part of the reptile, it did not seem to Jim Morrison(ish) at all. I have read lot of Jim Morrison, he books and of course the albums, Not much of a connection. Still a good poem.

Title article: A Storiesville Wedding
Date: 2008-10-29 06:00:43

Very good poem. Funny for considering for this little communithy we have going. I am also bummed that I was also not on the list.
Good stuff

Title article: Pennies, Chapter 6
Date: 2008-10-28 05:14:45

I do have more. I am trying to clean it up. The next one is going to be longer. There is alot going on in the next person's life

Title article: It's a Matter of Importance
Date: 2008-10-18 18:45:47

Jimney Crickets....you....I don't know what to say. Extremely well written.
You make sex sound so classy.
Thanks for a great read. Sometimes it is great not to read anything so serious.

Title article: Pennies, Chapter 6
Date: 2008-10-17 08:04:55

I cannot even keep track of my own characters. Fixed now. To be honest, I wrote it a 3am.....
Thanks Allmine

Title article: Secret British Body Shop
Date: 2008-10-17 05:50:41

Not bad. I think it is sad but telling story of how society is today. As mentioned, objectifiation of women is terrible and it seems to have have rum rampant in out society.
Good Job.

Title article: Library Diaries
Date: 2008-10-15 10:53:10

I also hate to give out fair ratings, especially when it may be my fault because I may be ignorant of...something.
I am sorry, I don't get this. The point or anything else.

Title article: Cold December
Date: 2008-10-15 07:25:53

Good poem. Lots of imgaery that allows you to SHOW what you are trying to say and not TELL.
Topic is very sad. I did not feel to good after reading this, which is good, because the goal is to convey the sadness.
Good job

Title article: Vylet
Date: 2008-10-15 05:36:51

Whoa....I have to say. Alot of imagery in this that lead you to think about many other issues. Very well done. In poetry it is important to show and not tell. This was all show.
Great stuff

Title article: Mind Over Matter
Date: 2008-10-13 19:38:35

I have to say I found this story very intriguing.
Well written. I do not normally like stories with monters and all that, but this was really good.