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Last Online	11/18/2008
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About Myself:

From Long Island. Love to write short stories. Also love to read them.I always have something cooking in this old noggin.
Please feel free to leave feedback. Good or Bad, I am just honored you would take time to read anything I wrote.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 17, 2008	Pennies, Chapter 6	Miscellaneous Stories	108
Oct 9, 2008	Pennies, Chapter 5	Miscellaneous Stories	96
Oct 8, 2008	Pennies, Chapter 4	Miscellaneous Stories	84
Oct 7, 2008	Pennies, Chapter 3	Miscellaneous Stories	192
Oct 6, 2008	Pennies, Chapter 2	Miscellaneous Stories	115
Oct 6, 2008	Pennies, Chapter 1	Miscellaneous Stories	131

Comments

Title article: IT'S HARD
Date: 2008-09-04 08:19:20

No offense, but it sounds like you have some issues going on. This sounds more like a cry for help or attention more than a poem. I write things like this alot, but they are usually just to blow off steam. Sorry, but this did not do it for me.

Title article: Life As He Knew It.
Date: 2008-08-25 17:36:59

Sorry, but this was quite boring. Very routine conversations. Never went anywhere.

Title article: The Day We Became Men, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-25 04:14:04

So far, so good. It has my attention. I love the whole idea of paying for a beer and the sound of a velcro wallet opening. It makes me laugh. Can't wait for the next.

Title article: Postcard
Date: 2008-08-24 04:23:29

The way this was written provided imagery that was fantactic. It was very sad. This is one of those pieces that will probably stick in my haed for the rest of the dead. Good work.

Title article: Walking Along the Shore
Date: 2008-08-21 07:01:41

What a great poem. I love the beach and there is nothing like the solace of walking alone the beach alone. It is so peaceful and it is such a great reflective time. This captures it perfectly.

Title article: SECOND SEX.
Date: 2008-08-20 08:11:50

I enjoyed this very much. Sultry poem that really makes a person think.....Also, I have always found the word copulate "dirty" in that sense. Weird huh?

Title article: The Cautionary Tale of Bert
Date: 2008-08-15 04:50:45

I thougt this was funny. I enjoyed this very much. Maybe because I could not get the vision of Bert from Sesame Street out of my head. (Hey I have a three year old. I am forced to watch it.
Thanks for a light hearted story this morning.

Title article: bottled UP
Date: 2008-08-15 04:40:53

I really enjoyed this. I love the style and how it irregular format works. It brings the emotions sliding down with the feelings that eminate from this poem. Good job.

Title article: Attraction
Date: 2008-08-13 08:26:54

Pretty deep and kind of dark. I liked it. It does show the desperate side of love. The feeling of no way out. Well done. Thanks for a great read

Title article: Save Our Bacon
Date: 2008-08-12 11:56:19

I loved this story. Funny, but also shows the sad state society is in. I can't wait to find my face in a potato, that way I can save 10 dollars developing film. (Yes some of us have not gone to a digital camera yet).