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About Myself:

From Long Island. Love to write short stories. Also love to read them.I always have something cooking in this old noggin.
Please feel free to leave feedback. Good or Bad, I am just honored you would take time to read anything I wrote.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 19, 2008	Bittersweet Soldering	Miscellaneous Stories	396

Comments

Total number of comments: 92

Title article: For as you judge, you will be judged
Date: 2008-09-05 08:39:45

This was very good except this could have really be expanded on. Why is this girl so miserable? Very good story and set up but it left me wanting much more.
Good work

Title article: What Kind Of God?
Date: 2008-09-04 08:25:32

Very intriguing story. I have to agree with garyowen, the bullet count confused me, be I got it in the end. The story was well written and it was a pleasure to read.

Title article: IT'S HARD
Date: 2008-09-04 08:19:20

No offense, but it sounds like you have some issues going on. This sounds more like a cry for help or attention more than a poem. I write things like this alot, but they are usually just to blow off steam. Sorry, but this did not do it for me.

Title article: Life As He Knew It.
Date: 2008-08-25 17:36:59

Sorry, but this was quite boring. Very routine conversations. Never went anywhere.

Title article: The Day We Became Men, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-25 04:14:04

So far, so good. It has my attention. I love the whole idea of paying for a beer and the sound of a velcro wallet opening. It makes me laugh. Can't wait for the next.

Title article: Postcard
Date: 2008-08-24 04:23:29

The way this was written provided imagery that was fantactic. It was very sad. This is one of those pieces that will probably stick in my haed for the rest of the dead. Good work.

Title article: Walking Along the Shore
Date: 2008-08-21 07:01:41

What a great poem. I love the beach and there is nothing like the solace of walking alone the beach alone. It is so peaceful and it is such a great reflective time. This captures it perfectly.

Title article: SECOND SEX.
Date: 2008-08-20 08:11:50

I enjoyed this very much. Sultry poem that really makes a person think.....Also, I have always found the word copulate "dirty" in that sense. Weird huh?

Title article: The Cautionary Tale of Bert
Date: 2008-08-15 04:50:45

I thougt this was funny. I enjoyed this very much. Maybe because I could not get the vision of Bert from Sesame Street out of my head. (Hey I have a three year old. I am forced to watch it.
Thanks for a light hearted story this morning.

Title article: bottled UP
Date: 2008-08-15 04:40:53

I really enjoyed this. I love the style and how it irregular format works. It brings the emotions sliding down with the feelings that eminate from this poem. Good job.