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About Myself:

From Long Island. Love to write short stories. Also love to read them.I always have something cooking in this old noggin.
Please feel free to leave feedback. Good or Bad, I am just honored you would take time to read anything I wrote.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 9, 2008	Pennies, Chapter 5	Miscellaneous Stories	25
Oct 8, 2008	Pennies, Chapter 4	Miscellaneous Stories	41
Oct 7, 2008	Pennies, Chapter 3	Miscellaneous Stories	58
Oct 6, 2008	Pennies, Chapter 2	Miscellaneous Stories	61
Oct 6, 2008	Pennies, Chapter 1	Miscellaneous Stories	65
Aug 19, 2008	Bittersweet Soldering	Miscellaneous Stories	464

Comments

Total number of comments: 102

Title article: The Photograph
Date: 2008-10-07 11:44:58

I like this. Everybody is trying to figure out if the friend died or skeedadadled on out of life.
I think it is one of those poems that should br left up to interpretation.
Good Job

Title article: To all the Young Lovers
Date: 2008-10-07 06:34:50

I loved the style this poem is written in. Carefree feeling. Like Phil, it brought me make make to my youngER days. The last line about the outer world is killer.

Title article: Internet Love
Date: 2008-10-07 06:30:30

What I like best about this is the truth that is told in it. I cannot believe a person can be the exact same person once they leave the realm of the relationship they have and enter into a new one.
Also, I think this was well written.

Title article: Misery
Date: 2008-10-06 10:23:46

Short and to the point. By the shortness of it, you can tell it was written "in the moment".
As for the hugs, I'd love to help out, but my arms are not long enought to reach you , and I am not stecth arm strong. J/K
Never a big Meallica fan....do think it was a little messed up that they dimed all their fans in during the napster deal.

Title article: Acorns Don't Fall Far
Date: 2008-10-06 06:05:21

Intetresting story. I like the ending. Very bizarre one. I would think the women with the the "mans man" would be scared of this brute. To have her wink is classic.

Title article: Run Katy Run
Date: 2008-10-06 05:24:30

This was really one great story. Very sad shocking ending. I was actually floored by this. This is one of those stories that will stick with you for awhile. I will be thinking about this one all day.

Title article: Things aren't always as they appear
Date: 2008-09-09 07:47:33

Very good. good writing.
Not the best thing you have written, (no offense), but still very good.

Title article: The Gift
Date: 2008-09-09 07:08:33

I enjoyed this story and it was very easy to visualize. I also agree with Harmattan, I would expand on this. It has so much more to offer. It left me wondering.

Title article: For as you judge, you will be judged
Date: 2008-09-05 08:39:45

This was very good except this could have really be expanded on. Why is this girl so miserable? Very good story and set up but it left me wanting much more.
Good work

Title article: What Kind Of God?
Date: 2008-09-04 08:25:32

Very intriguing story. I have to agree with garyowen, the bullet count confused me, be I got it in the end. The story was well written and it was a pleasure to read.