There Is Only One Star, Chapter 3

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About Myself: hello im 37 and i love to tell stories im not a writer. so please overlook my lack of good writing skills and just grade me on the story itself. but feel free to comment!!!!

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Jul 7, 2008TROUBLE IS A BREWING PT 8Mystery 77
Jun 21, 2008Trouble is a brewing pt 7Mystery 86
Jun 15, 2008"FATHER"S DAY"Poetry 89
Jun 6, 2008TROUBLE IS A BREWING PT6Mystery 106
Jun 4, 2008"FLOWER"S"Poetry 343
Jun 1, 2008TROUBLE IS A BREWING PART 5Mystery 113
May 31, 2008LIFE IN THIS WORLD TODAYPoetry 76
May 31, 2008TROUBLE IS A BREWING PART4Mystery 142
May 30, 2008"OPEN DESTINY"Poetry 91
May 30, 2008TROUBLE IS A BREWING PART 3Mystery 119
May 29, 2008TROUBLE IS A BREWING PART 2Mystery 113
May 28, 2008Trouble is a brewing PART 1Mystery 137

Comments

Total number of comments: 11

Title article: Grapes and Wrath
Date: 2008-07-08 06:02:16
ok ok you can write
I like your writing you might have what it takes to be a serious writer. You should try writing a book might make a movie one day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Title article: Enterprising Problems
Date: 2008-07-08 05:56:48
It was ok
I have keep up with star trek all my life and I've never heard of a gear shift on the enterprise. BUT HEY IT'S YOUR STORY SO WRITE ON. iT'S MISSING SO BAD LANGUAGE lol

Title article: THE SECRET WIND, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-07 10:36:04
both good and bad
Lets see it wasn't that bad but the  
caps haft to stop. it was a start of something but it didn't feel finished there just wasn't enough meat to the story it was like a bunch of stories thrown into one. get better and keep writing.

Title article: No Pressures
Date: 2008-07-07 09:26:53
good job
This one I liked because nobody died in it[lol] I like your writing  
you write on both sided of the spectrum you can be sugar and spice and you can be darker than night! write on!!!!!

Title article: The Article
Date: 2008-07-07 09:21:43
Good job
It's hard to believe you can write so dark I just hope these are just stories. I like it alot but sometimes you scare me. You write stuff nightmares are made of. All in all wright on!!!!!!!

Title article: Sheep in a Slaughter House
Date: 2008-07-07 09:13:09
WoW!!!!!
It was a powerful poem I just hope there is a lighter side to you than just pain and darkness, But I have to confess I been in dark places before myself good poem keep writeing

Title article: What Am I?
Date: 2008-06-06 09:09:10

Good job! now tell me what you think of flowers. again well done!

Title article: THE FALL OF ABRIA, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-06-06 05:45:06

it's ok it's no trouble is a brewing but it will do lol. listen to lemon and learn young padawon.

Title article: THE FALL OF ABRIA, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-06-06 05:42:39

as always lemon is right less is more. cole wouldn't be happy lol

Title article: THE FALL OF ABRIA, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-06-06 05:38:05

It was good but for goodness sake  
learn to spell

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