If The Sun Didn't Rise

IF THE SUN DIDN'T RISE BY JON STALK...

The Peacock Case

When the train doors opened, a blast of sticky air...
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Website/Blog: poetryunderthesun.blogspot.com
About Myself: my name is bayang
that's how i want people call me
I'm a Filipino and I'm only 19.
I'm fond of reading books wether it's
online or real books :)
i love blogging and writing literary poems and i love daydreaming it's my fave hobby :)
if you won't mind dropby on some of my blogs sometimes the link is anywhere in this page :)

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Sep 4, 2008IT'S HARDPoetry 68
Aug 21, 2008POETRY: MY SUICIDAL KISSESPoetry 129
Aug 21, 2008REFLECTIONSNon-Fiction 75
Aug 3, 2008UNFINISHED BUSINESS (reposted)Non-Fiction 117
Jul 31, 2008THE FIREMystery 171
Jul 28, 2008EVERYBODY'S CHANGINGMystery 165
Jul 28, 2008NIGHTMAREMystery 165
Jul 16, 2008TALK: OWN DIMENSIONNon-Fiction 100
Jun 23, 2008SPEAK: HOW DOES IT FEEL?Mystery 149
Jun 16, 2008JUDGEMENTAL: SOMETIMES WE ARENon-Fiction 123
Jun 15, 2008CONFUSION: I WILL NEVER WONDERPoetry 92
Jun 3, 2008MY DIARY (the series), Chapter 3Mystery 120
Jun 2, 2008MY DIARY (the series), Chapter 2Mystery 136
May 30, 2008MY DIARY (the series), Chapter 1Mystery 116
May 29, 2008MY DIARY (the series)Mystery 131
May 29, 2008CONVERSATION: DAPHNE THANKED DERBIERomance 142
May 29, 2008SUICIDAL: IT'S A CHOICEMystery 340
May 29, 2008STARSPoetry 129
May 29, 2008UNTITLEDPoetry 101
May 29, 2008FRIENDSPoetry 102
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Comments

Total number of comments: 62

Title article: The Grey Dawn
Date: 2008-08-21 19:15:35
powerful
your words are very powerful...the imagery makes the poem more picturesque...very deep and i love it...i'll put this on my favorites...nice one buddy..keep posting :)

Title article: A Date with Priya
Date: 2008-08-21 19:00:18

one of the best stories here. I just added your stori in my fave bulks...this is great...you made the story understandable and it's very easy to picture out... the best :)

Title article: UNCLE Limp
Date: 2008-08-21 18:51:24

this is quite humurous chaabuk friend :) 
i love your poems...they're short and easy to access...you know what i mean..easy to read dude.LOL.keep poating :)

Title article: UNCLE Limp
Date: 2008-08-21 18:51:23

this is quite humurous chaabuk friend :) 
i love your poems...they're short and easy to access...you know what i mean..easy to read dude.LOL.keep poating :)

Title article: Before you land
Date: 2008-08-21 18:47:37

I love the ING's.LOL..that was short but indeed very nice...I love poetry I really do appreciate something like this...the rhymes makes it more connected and easy to read...nice one buddy :)

Title article: Punishment
Date: 2008-08-21 18:44:39

I love the story...I can't say more!It's awesome.I love the way how the man realized that he was wrong but it's too late. His life's getting old and he's regrets wont do any good after all.

Title article: He swoops, he scores
Date: 2008-08-21 18:35:11

very short yet very descriptive. 
I like the way you write the whole thing...i was thinking about basketball at first because of the title but in the later part I realized I was wrong. Great quite humurous for me though.LOL :)

Title article: i could have loved no more!
Date: 2008-08-21 18:31:32
SECOND BEST
that's how they call friends. 
remember when we have this friend who happens to be a boy and who happens to be closed to us...at first they treat us so special like were princess but when they found the love of their life they'll just start ignoring us an makes us their second best. 
 
*** 
love the story girl. 
it happens to all of us in some point :)

Title article: UNFINISHED BUSINESS (reposted)
Date: 2008-08-07 16:58:16
REPOSTED
I reposted the short story. It's literally short.LOL.I don't know if you will like it. Sorry for the first hanging lines when I posted this. I wasn't sober at that time.Thanks :)

Title article: THE FIRE
Date: 2008-08-03 05:13:16

thanks for all the dudes who comment on my story I really appreciate it :) 
I'm not really good in this field but it doesn't mean to say that I should stop writing...Idon't see it as a hindrance...

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05/29/2008 11:24:52Re:Hello, I have an important questionOff-Topic362
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