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About Myself:

im 14, an currently working on writing a horror trilogy. id like to share my ideas and stories so that they may be openly criticized and reviewed.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 26, 2008	Facing the storm, Chapter 2	Horror	60
Oct 19, 2008	Facing the strom, Chapter 1	Horror	80
Sep 18, 2008	The Rise of Rikkiesh, Chapter 2	Science Fiction	101
Sep 17, 2008	The Rise of Rikkiesh, Chapter 1	Science Fiction	116
Sep 10, 2008	The Heart's Sin, Chapter 1	Horror	92
Aug 13, 2008	The Burning Dawn, Chapter 3	Science Fiction	111
Aug 10, 2008	The Burning Dawn, Chapter 2	Science Fiction	106
Aug 7, 2008	The Burning Dawn, Chapter 1	Science Fiction	186
Aug 4, 2008	The Blazing Dawn	Horror	209
Jul 28, 2008	The Questador, Chapter 1	Science Fiction	140
Jul 25, 2008	Bloodsong: Nurturing Murder, Chapter 4	Horror	147
Jul 20, 2008	Bloodsong: Nurturing Murder, Chapter 3	Horror	145
Jul 19, 2008	BloodSong: Nurturing Murder, Chapter 2	Horror	120
Jul 18, 2008	Bloodsong: Nurturing Murder, Chapter 1	Horror	133
Jul 17, 2008	Bloodsong: Awakening, Chapter 3	Horror	133
Jul 17, 2008	Bloodsong: Awakening, Chapter 2	Horror	122
Jul 16, 2008	Bloodsong: Awakening, Chapter 1	Horror	148
Jul 14, 2008	HELL'S MONOPOLY, Chapter -1	Horror	134
Jul 13, 2008	HELL'S MONOPOLY, Chapter 0	Horror	145
Jul 8, 2008	SHADOW OF THE FALLEN, Chapter 1	Horror	158

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Comments

Title article: Intimacy
Date: 2008-09-10 20:00:53

this was good, i always get this feeling when im about to see a girl i like, it is very intense, and in ways painful. it gives me a rush of adrenaline too.

Title article: The Ticking Man
Date: 2008-08-13 18:47:44

i liked it alot, very, serious stuff. i wonder if this guy happens to be from the middle east. just kidding, small joke, no but realy, is he?... kidding still...

Title article: The Dragon
Date: 2008-08-13 18:38:14

this wa realy good. my parents keep telling me im not in chech with reality, but thats a lie. i know who the president is. its george clooney, duh...?

Title article: Your Big Day
Date: 2008-08-10 18:33:39

wow. awkward, my birthday is the second of august. now im realy scared. no, im kidding, it was a good poem, i enjoyed it alot. good job... tell whoever your mad at happy late birthday for me.

Title article: Hey
Date: 2008-08-10 18:29:10

i liked it, especialy seeing the whole hey thing as actualy making since. how you know hey is so simple and anything can come after it. anything like i hate you or i love you or this isnt the right amount of change, etc.

Title article: A Picture of Waves
Date: 2008-08-07 18:07:47

i liked this alot. i too am questioning my belief in any religion. however it is good to believe in something, its a void that needs to bem filled, and god can fill that void, if that is what your looking for.

Title article: Spider
Date: 2008-08-07 18:01:05

i liked this poem, i know some rape victims, it is a terrible thing, like a spider had sucked out there insides. the tragedy is worse than the bruises, its hard to trust anyone after that.

Title article: Never Again
Date: 2008-08-04 19:53:55

i liked this, this was good, and tragic, trust me i know a lot of people who feel this way and do the same thing. do you realy mutilate yourself?... wondering

Title article: The Closing Walls
Date: 2008-08-04 19:47:58

i liked this, i got the theme of clastophobia here, but i sensed more, the feeling of getting older wether it being elderly or becoming an adult or parent.

Title article: Scratched
Date: 2008-08-04 17:21:33

i liked this, it was very strong and grabbing, like something they would read while playing moonlight sontana. the whole frustratoin thing is mutual..