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About Myself:

im 14, an currently working on writing a horror trilogy. id like to share my ideas and stories so that they may be openly criticized and reviewed.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 13, 2008	The Burning Dawn, Chapter 3	Science Fiction	40
Aug 10, 2008	The Burning Dawn, Chapter 2	Science Fiction	39
Aug 7, 2008	The Burning Dawn, Chapter 1	Science Fiction	85
Aug 4, 2008	The Blazing Dawn	Horror	103
Jul 28, 2008	The Questador, Chapter 1	Science Fiction	74
Jul 25, 2008	Bloodsong: Nurturing Murder, Chapter 4	Horror	78
Jul 20, 2008	Bloodsong: Nurturing Murder, Chapter 3	Horror	97
Jul 19, 2008	BloodSong: Nurturing Murder, Chapter 2	Horror	60
Jul 18, 2008	Bloodsong: Nurturing Murder, Chapter 1	Horror	78
Jul 17, 2008	Bloodsong: Awakening, Chapter 3	Horror	80
Jul 17, 2008	Bloodsong: Awakening, Chapter 2	Horror	67
Jul 16, 2008	Bloodsong: Awakening, Chapter 1	Horror	96
Jul 14, 2008	HELL'S MONOPOLY, Chapter -1	Horror	72
Jul 13, 2008	HELL'S MONOPOLY, Chapter 0	Horror	97
Jul 8, 2008	SHADOW OF THE FALLEN, Chapter 1	Horror	95
Jul 7, 2008	THE SHADOW OF THE FALLEN, Chapter 0	Horror	135
Jun 30, 2008	THE SECRET WIND, Chapter 1	Science Fiction	136
Jun 29, 2008	THE FALL OF ABRIA, Chapter 7	Science Fiction	80
Jun 26, 2008	Wolf,bat, and demon, Chapter 2	Horror	74
Jun 26, 2008	Wolf, bat, and demon, Chapter 1	Horror	95

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Comments

Total number of comments: 63

Title article: The Ticking Man
Date: 2008-08-13 18:47:44

i liked it alot, very, serious stuff. i wonder if this guy happens to be from the middle east. just kidding, small joke, no but realy, is he?... kidding still...

Title article: The Dragon
Date: 2008-08-13 18:38:14

this wa realy good. my parents keep telling me im not in chech with reality, but thats a lie. i know who the president is. its george clooney, duh...?

Title article: Your Big Day
Date: 2008-08-10 18:33:39

wow. awkward, my birthday is the second of august. now im realy scared. no, im kidding, it was a good poem, i enjoyed it alot. good job... tell whoever your mad at happy late birthday for me.

Title article: Hey
Date: 2008-08-10 18:29:10

i liked it, especialy seeing the whole hey thing as actualy making since. how you know hey is so simple and anything can come after it. anything like i hate you or i love you or this isnt the right amount of change, etc.

Title article: GRANDMA SOUNDS
Date: 2008-08-10 17:54:00

this was good and funny, i liked it. reminded me of the book about the woman and the fly. it reminds me a little of my grandmother...vaguely though. peace

Title article: BUCK TEETH TWIN BROTHERS
Date: 2008-08-07 18:32:32

this was funny, and i know a lot of buck teeth people. i liked the whole brother's thing. i didnt see anything sad about it, just the humor. but, yeah, it was good.

Title article: A Picture of Waves
Date: 2008-08-07 18:07:47

i liked this alot. i too am questioning my belief in any religion. however it is good to believe in something, its a void that needs to bem filled, and god can fill that void, if that is what your looking for.

Title article: Spider
Date: 2008-08-07 18:01:05

i liked this poem, i know some rape victims, it is a terrible thing, like a spider had sucked out there insides. the tragedy is worse than the bruises, its hard to trust anyone after that.

Title article: Never Again
Date: 2008-08-04 19:53:55

i liked this, this was good, and tragic, trust me i know a lot of people who feel this way and do the same thing. do you realy mutilate yourself?... wondering

Title article: The Closing Walls
Date: 2008-08-04 19:47:58

i liked this, i got the theme of clastophobia here, but i sensed more, the feeling of getting older wether it being elderly or becoming an adult or parent.