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jake (colemoriss)
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Member Since 05/24/2008
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About Myself: im 14, an currently working on writing a horror trilogy. id like to share my ideas and stories so that they may be openly criticized and reviewed.

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 26, 2008Facing the storm, Chapter 2Horror 58
Oct 19, 2008Facing the strom, Chapter 1Horror 76
Sep 18, 2008The Rise of Rikkiesh, Chapter 2Science Fiction 99
Sep 17, 2008The Rise of Rikkiesh, Chapter 1Science Fiction 115
Sep 10, 2008The Heart's Sin, Chapter 1Horror 91
Aug 13, 2008The Burning Dawn, Chapter 3Science Fiction 108
Aug 10, 2008The Burning Dawn, Chapter 2Science Fiction 104
Aug 7, 2008The Burning Dawn, Chapter 1Science Fiction 174
Aug 4, 2008The Blazing DawnHorror 194
Jul 28, 2008The Questador, Chapter 1Science Fiction 139
Jul 25, 2008Bloodsong: Nurturing Murder, Chapter 4Horror 147
Jul 20, 2008Bloodsong: Nurturing Murder, Chapter 3Horror 143
Jul 19, 2008BloodSong: Nurturing Murder, Chapter 2Horror 116
Jul 18, 2008Bloodsong: Nurturing Murder, Chapter 1Horror 133
Jul 17, 2008Bloodsong: Awakening, Chapter 3Horror 133
Jul 17, 2008Bloodsong: Awakening, Chapter 2Horror 122
Jul 16, 2008Bloodsong: Awakening, Chapter 1Horror 147
Jul 14, 2008HELL'S MONOPOLY, Chapter -1Horror 132
Jul 13, 2008HELL'S MONOPOLY, Chapter 0Horror 145
Jul 8, 2008SHADOW OF THE FALLEN, Chapter 1Horror 157
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Title article: Vices
Date: 2008-07-08 23:45:41

this was poem. it was deep and true. i must admit,most poems people write are sad. it realy is sad that the world is that depressing. its,wow,terrible. i myself am a deep person. i am also a very depresing writer. i like the poem thought,keep going, your doing well.

Title article: This World is Cold
Date: 2008-07-08 22:57:03

this was a realy good poem.sad, as expected. i wrote a poem similar to this when i was in school. it was titled, life through cold eyes. it was similar. not the same words or anything, but the same emmotion. like i said, this was realy good.

Title article: Shepherd
Date: 2008-07-08 22:52:54

wow.good.i can sense you being the next george lucas. kepp going.cant wait for fight scenes. i recommend there should lightsaber like weapons, laser swords. and maybe a battling starfleet. just my opinion. thanks for your time.

Title article: THE SECRET WIND, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-08 22:46:42

this was used to explain why some humans believe in magic, but why there is no proof of it. it also explains why christianity would lie.

Title article: HIS DARK MAGESTY PART 2
Date: 2008-07-08 22:42:54

wow. im posting a comment on my own story because im lazy. i just need more credits. please dont be made at me peoples, im sorrry, but you know thats why you all post comments on stories, i know im right. oh well,ive sunken to a new low. who cares.peace.

Title article: Pulled Apart
Date: 2008-07-08 22:39:00

this was really good. i liked it, it was a very interesting poem. dark, like most of the poems posted on this website. i mean, is anyone happy?like at all. some of thes people need like, idk, a puppy or something, youknow.

Title article: O What A Symphony
Date: 2008-07-07 12:57:10

good poem. its one of the first happy ones.i used to be in band, so the feeling is mutual. i like it that you enjoy classic music like i do. keep posting. music is the light of the world! yayaayayaya-

Title article: Legend of the Maņana, Chapter 11
Date: 2008-07-07 12:02:33

huh. i liked it, it was good. i like how it is in a different period of time. trust me i know how difficult it is to write in different time periods. you did well, and what time period was it exactly.i thought it was good. keep going. and if your wondering, im a pirates of the caribbean fan.

Title article: Strength To Say Goodbye
Date: 2008-07-07 11:53:52

it was good. dramatic, and i know how you feel. or what the poem is describing. very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Title article: TROUBLE IS A BREWING PT 8
Date: 2008-07-07 11:49:08

you did a great job. i love that you show al more, and include his interaction with the goons. i think there should be kitty, though, like

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