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Member Since	05/22/2008
Last Online	08/12/2008
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About Myself:

its all about me!
I suck at grammar, spelling, and punctuation. So all critiques (of my story) are welcome.
I know I can be taken wrong so at least know this; I try to be helpful, not hurtful.
Unless you put stuff up that will bring the goodness of this site down, plagiarism, copyright infringement, bad work you know is bad but intentionally put on here anyway, ect.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jul 1, 2008	The Fairy's Retribution	Poetry	199
May 22, 2008	Conners Ghostly Summer	Mystery	714

Comments

Title article: Dream Incorporation
Date: 2008-06-21 00:56:27

cute story
i can't imagine any teachers i had way back when, rockin to zepplin

Title article: Evanescent Truths
Date: 2008-06-21 00:39:14

good story
Honey, your father and are getting older

How many green beer bottled do you think it would take to kill someone? I think it would take around 42, hard ones. I don’t understand this line do you mean from alcohol poisoning, Or from an actual bottle?

I was so embarrassed I ran inside and hid in my room. That's what I would have done if he hadn't had his arms around me. Then he pulled me in and kissed me, passionately.

I got an awful chill run through my spine and finish at my toes.

Title article: The Promise
Date: 2008-06-20 23:57:59

i liked the story
No believed that someone who cared for her daughter could simply abuse her.

She cried, softly so no one can come in to the room. = Is that a question she's asking?

After Sofie told the story, she walked over the woman.
Poor Abby was brusied and ached."

Title article: Sixty-Seven
Date: 2008-06-20 23:22:44

probly me
but i got a little lost.

Title article: Santa, You Suck, from Little Billy
Date: 2008-06-20 22:35:21

i think
it would have been much better with no f words.

Title article: another
Date: 2008-06-20 17:48:55

i don't
like it

Title article: The Long Walk
Date: 2008-06-20 17:12:10

great story
After walking a short distance through a trail that was not as worn as the others they were there.
i wonder if their bodies were ever found, and i wonder what he'll do with his next girl.

Title article: Ranch Violation
Date: 2008-06-20 16:53:49

great story
very funny!

Title article: A Matter of Consequence
Date: 2008-06-20 16:31:39

great story
lol

Title article: I'm the Terrorist
Date: 2008-06-20 16:12:26

great story
i could see it being a good book.

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Name	Entry
D.A. Ross (D.A. Ross) Earth	Created On: 06/24/2008 21:31:03 Sorry, i forgot to rate you
Mike Robinson (MRRobinson) Nowhere, everywhere	Created On: 06/21/2008 19:19:08 Thanks for reading Weed-Killer, it is one of my favorite writes.
D.A. Ross (D.A. Ross) Earth	Created On: 06/20/2008 19:53:18 Im the first!!!! Enjoyed your story, look forward to more.

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