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Member Since	05/22/2008
Last Online	08/12/2008
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About Myself:

its all about me!
I suck at grammar, spelling, and punctuation. So all critiques (of my story) are welcome.
I know I can be taken wrong so at least know this; I try to be helpful, not hurtful.
Unless you put stuff up that will bring the goodness of this site down, plagiarism, copyright infringement, bad work you know is bad but intentionally put on here anyway, ect.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jul 1, 2008	The Fairy's Retribution	Poetry	153
May 22, 2008	Conners Ghostly Summer	Mystery	682

Comments

Total number of comments: 93

Title article: The Fairy's Retribution
Date: 2008-07-01 00:46:28

thanks zombie
nigh = near the hat says come near but yes i rhyme all the time. and to all this was suppose to be a short story but i'm lazy so i rhymed it. someone on yahoo answers asked for people to write a short story with a fairy who can't fly, a witch, a talking leather hat, a broken wand in a forest or on a beach. i wrote it in two hours and liked it. hey this could work for contests too i read the forums just havn't talked on them. anyway give items that have to be in the story then we write and get points. if this is good you may put it on the forum. yes i talk alot, get use to it.

Title article: Pedestrian
Date: 2008-06-25 00:39:02

it was ok but
Why did it take so long for the yuppie to cross the street ?
I would have liked a description of the thing he was running from.

Title article: [untitled] part two
Date: 2008-06-22 13:18:14

great story
can't wait for more

Title article: Untitled story [introduction]
Date: 2008-06-22 13:02:31

Good beginning
I don’t know who he is , but if he knows her I would think he’s prepared for what she might do.

Title article: Church Agenda
Date: 2008-06-22 12:31:20

i didn't get why he thought
the preist was gonna get him.

Title article: The Rolling Stone & Wicked Annabelle, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-06-21 17:36:33

good story
didn't expect him to kill the innocent indian.

Title article: The Executioner
Date: 2008-06-21 17:12:07

don't like it
having a kid kill someone, then using the child to promote the death penalty

Title article: Traffic Jammed
Date: 2008-06-21 17:02:17

great story
very well written. i wonder if the guy lived they don't bring out the copter around here unless the person is close to death.

Title article: A Story Part II
Date: 2008-06-21 14:57:05

very good
her parents wondered if you might know of he whereabouts,

Eden sot off orders very sternly, = I looked up sot in the dictionary = habitual drunkard.
Swinging it open, he let the heavy wood his the hard stone wall

I felt like there was something missing this time when you change scenes.

Title article: A Story Part I
Date: 2008-06-21 14:16:21

Great beginning
very well written.
I blame the site, not the writings, on it being a bit confusing when you switched characters.

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Name	Entry
D.A. Ross (D.A. Ross) Earth	Created On: 06/24/2008 21:31:03 Sorry, i forgot to rate you
Mike Robinson (MRRobinson) Nowhere, everywhere	Created On: 06/21/2008 19:19:08 Thanks for reading Weed-Killer, it is one of my favorite writes.
D.A. Ross (D.A. Ross) Earth	Created On: 06/20/2008 19:53:18 Im the first!!!! Enjoyed your story, look forward to more.

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