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Member Since	05/18/2008
Last Online	11/10/2008
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About Myself:

Just me. Writing my thoughts.

-Kasi, Elaborated.

Project 30 Link...
http://www.storiesville.com/content/view/6048/65/

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jul 7, 2008	The Invention Of Uncertainty, Chapter 2	Adventure	197
Jun 23, 2008	The Invention Of Uncertainty, Chapter 1	Adventure	311
Aug 9, 2008	Ramble On	Poetry	241
Jul 28, 2008	A Binding Constraint	Poetry	296
Jul 11, 2008	Personal Evolution	Poetry	343
Jun 27, 2008	The Broke Busker	Poetry	216
May 29, 2008	A Musing Impression	Poetry	238
May 27, 2008	Fragmented Sentiment	Poetry	292
May 23, 2008	The Attack	Poetry	577
May 22, 2008	Autumn Mountain Sleep	Poetry	345
May 19, 2008	Our Words	Poetry	296
May 19, 2008	When We Set Foot On Dry Land	Poetry	380

Comments

Total number of comments: 143

Title article: I prefer Mom but I'll settle for Dad
Date: 2008-09-06 12:00:31

Adorable impression. There is always something more special about one parent than the other, but in the end I guess it could even out. Children are great, I think you did very well expressing the notions of a 2 year old.

Title article: No Forgiveness
Date: 2008-08-29 15:33:43

Hmmmmmm
Maybe the fake people are the ones whom do not know themselves in the pit of their addictions, nor can they distinct reality from life, making their own existance a counterfeit copy of what they think is a dream.

Title article: Misfire
Date: 2008-08-29 14:39:47

Good rhymes, bad times, unfinished crimes...
I felt that there were two shooters the whole time. For some reason it made me think of an old black and white film.. Except for the red blood flowing into the storm drain. Kudos

Title article: the unfruitful venture for finding
Date: 2008-08-29 14:31:08

A great perspective of man and nature. Very illustrative words, I almost wanted to eat some granola gravel ground myself, well almost. I hope to see more of your poems around here....

Title article: Twelve Step Madness
Date: 2008-08-10 13:58:04

twelve step madness
Great way to visually explain the context here Max... You are wise beyond your years, has anyone ever told you that before? I never thought of it as stepping down, I can see how sobriety leads to negativity.

Title article: Passion
Date: 2008-08-09 20:15:51

Man, whatever happened to dinner and a movie... Very stimulating to say the least.

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 21
Date: 2008-08-08 20:08:30

All cleared up now...
From a pawns point of veiw... Well written I should have seen the whole clique thing coming. It twas fun.

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 6
Date: 2008-08-08 19:42:23

Thanks! I had a hard time with this, being a complete procrastinator didn't help at all.. But I finished it. At first I was going to save the Admin.. but I thought that might be too predictable..

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 5
Date: 2008-08-08 19:32:54

I was waiting for a drunk to show up... completely inebriated by 9pm, damn you move fast! I could literaly see and smell the vomit..

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-08-08 19:20:32

Haha Stephen King, that makes complete sense.. I too liked the format! Different and easy to follow.

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Connection

Kasi (Kasi Elaborated)'s connections

Ashutosh Ghildiyal (Ashutosh)

Project 30 (Project 30)

Christian Wright (The 13th)

Jon Stalk (JonStalk)

Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Dipankar Dasgupta (d.dasgupta)

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/07/2008 18:53:39 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/07/2008 19:05:16 Your poems are absolutely magnificant.
Billy (Vango)	Created On: 05/24/2008 16:43:37 I've fell in love with your poems, they're absolutely the best I've ever read. Feedback from Kasi (Kasi Elaborated): Wow! Thanks!