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Member Since	05/18/2008
Last Online	10/08/2008
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About Myself:

Just me. Writing my thoughts. Expressing my reactions to the strength of my emotions

-Kasi, Elaborated.

Project 30 Link...
http://www.storiesville.com/content/view/6048/65/

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 23, 2008	A Static Reality	Poetry	120
Aug 9, 2008	Ramble On	Poetry	195
Jul 28, 2008	A Binding Constraint	Poetry	251
Jul 11, 2008	Personal Evolution	Poetry	325
Jul 7, 2008	The Invention Of Uncertainty, Chapter 2	Adventure	181
Jun 27, 2008	The Broke Busker	Poetry	197
Jun 23, 2008	The Invention Of Uncertainty, Chapter 1	Adventure	297
May 29, 2008	A Musing Impression	Poetry	216
May 27, 2008	Fragmented Sentiment	Poetry	264
May 23, 2008	The Attack	Poetry	547
May 22, 2008	Autumn Mountain Sleep	Poetry	299
May 19, 2008	Our Words	Poetry	275
May 19, 2008	When We Set Foot On Dry Land	Poetry	350

Comments

Total number of comments: 143

Title article: I prefer Mom but I'll settle for Dad
Date: 2008-09-06 12:00:31

Adorable impression. There is always something more special about one parent than the other, but in the end I guess it could even out. Children are great, I think you did very well expressing the notions of a 2 year old.

Title article: No Forgiveness
Date: 2008-08-29 15:33:43

Hmmmmmm
Maybe the fake people are the ones whom do not know themselves in the pit of their addictions, nor can they distinct reality from life, making their own existance a counterfeit copy of what they think is a dream.

Title article: TO INNOCENCE
Date: 2008-08-29 14:50:45

Such an alluring prose, for being your first piece I must inisist that you continue writing. I agree with Mr. Collett, in that it seems old worldly, but not just the one word, all of them.

Title article: Misfire
Date: 2008-08-29 14:39:47

Good rhymes, bad times, unfinished crimes...
I felt that there were two shooters the whole time. For some reason it made me think of an old black and white film.. Except for the red blood flowing into the storm drain. Kudos

Title article: the unfruitful venture for finding
Date: 2008-08-29 14:31:08

A great perspective of man and nature. Very illustrative words, I almost wanted to eat some granola gravel ground myself, well almost. I hope to see more of your poems around here....

Title article: A Static Reality
Date: 2008-08-25 22:14:45

In opinion
To clear up some inquiries... I wirte in a fashion that suits my mood, whether you get it or not really isnt the issue here... It's me expressing my feelings in away that may not make much sense... but it is clear to me, and thats all that really counts... am I right? Thanks for reading it though... and if you really wanted to know you could just im me and ask:)....

Title article: HENPECKED HUSBAND
Date: 2008-08-21 17:22:02

Wow!
I too thought this was quite humorous... Yet I also share the same feelings as everyone else.. But! Keep wriing and eventually you'll find you groove!

Title article: Twelve Step Madness
Date: 2008-08-10 13:58:04

twelve step madness
Great way to visually explain the context here Max... You are wise beyond your years, has anyone ever told you that before? I never thought of it as stepping down, I can see how sobriety leads to negativity.

Title article: GRANDMA SOUNDS
Date: 2008-08-10 13:52:03

This really makes me not want to get old at all... Your rhyming is more in sync in this one, I can tell you put alot of thought into it. Nicely written!

Title article: The Book Cellar
Date: 2008-08-10 13:47:54

Creepy... If I were her I would have just shot the guy and finished the damn story myself... Then burn all the books. I like how you left it open at the end for the reader to draw their own conclusions.. A great and gripping read.

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Connection

Kasi (Kasi Elaborated)'s connections

Ashutosh Ghildiyal (Ashutosh)

Project 30 (Project 30)

Christian Wright (The 13th)

Jon Stalk (JonStalk)

Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Dipankar Dasgupta (d.dasgupta)

Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

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Guestbook

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/07/2008 18:53:39 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/07/2008 19:05:16 Your poems are absolutely magnificant.
Billy (Vango)	Created On: 05/24/2008 16:43:37 I've fell in love with your poems, they're absolutely the best I've ever read. Feedback from Kasi (Kasi Elaborated): Wow! Thanks!