STORIES FROM CAMP 6, Chapter 1

THE RED HAT ( Dedicated to W.J.Martin)...

While You Were Sleeping

The sun sets and night begins. For some...
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About Myself: A writer who one day believes he will be the next 'so you think you can dance star'... also believes that pigs can fly... if dropped from a really high building that is.

One day will put theory to test.

One day will submit a story. For now, will just browse around for inspriation.

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Total number of comments: 109

Title article: Echoes of the Brave
Date: 2008-11-13 11:43:57

I have good news for the heros that serve this country..(Obama)...lets hope he makes the right decisions regarding war. Hate to wake up to a nuke exploding in DC...my alarm clock is bad enough. But as for the poem, didn't have that rhyming flow that I look for in a poem. But not bad.

Title article: Secret British Body Shop
Date: 2008-10-25 13:17:43

lol

Title article: Land of the Free
Date: 2008-10-24 16:23:07

Last week I spent $100 on assorted lottery tickets. 3 of them hit. One was for $20, another was for $25, and the last was for $10. Is this a great country or what!!! Off to the market again,,,hope it is another winning week.

Title article: Bogeyman
Date: 2008-10-24 16:05:13
Metalica would be proud
Well your wrong about one thing here. When you grow up you don't lose your wandering imagination, it only grows stronger. This poem was good. I got through it ok and knew what you were saying. Power and money...hmmm, throw in sex and most men can relate also.

Title article: Secret British Body Shop
Date: 2008-10-24 15:53:52
my blood runs cold mybaby isa centerfold
These pinup girls aren't driving your men into adultry my dear. Only 2 things will do that. Get fat and stay fat. Listen, not much you can do about a face, but I trust yours is cute enough. A lil discipline and hard work and you can be the one adoring the front cover. But to be fair, TV and everything else these days doesn't help.

Title article: The Fault is Mine
Date: 2008-10-24 15:43:57

You had me after the first two lines, but then all hell broke loose. You have too many punctuations in here. (,;.)You keep posting poems like this and you will drive us away also. Just kidding, but this was wierd.

Title article: my poem
Date: 2008-10-24 15:38:01
Just do it
Hey,,its only awkward (after) you break. Was this suppose to rhyme? This is a diary entry not a poem. And yes, it will feel like cloud nine. Just stay away from that cloud 60 over.

Title article: My Present
Date: 2008-09-05 15:16:24

Its hard to be whimsical with all these tears streaming down my wood. Ah gee whiz, look what cha done gone did...im a sapping mess.

Title article: Rendition Of A Rose
Date: 2008-09-05 14:59:00

Maybe its just me, but I just don't understand what the hell ..ooops sorry...you are saying here...and is that suppose to resemble an egg? Just not sure what your pursuit or purpose is. This poem has made me hungry.

Title article: Jeans
Date: 2008-09-05 14:48:28

Oh what could have been. My advice would be to keep the very last line and throw away the rest and rewrite something intelligent to build around the last line for a comedic reward. Bottom line,,this made no sense.

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jesse (jesse2008)

 Created On: 06/22/2008 20:31:11
Edited By jesse (jesse2008) On: 06/22/2008 21:09:50
Ah, you made a comment. Thanks.

Michelle Huff (allmine)

 Created On: 06/02/2008 09:21:34
Hey So You think You Can Dance is my favorite show dangit....

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