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Cody OBryant (Lifeless)
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Website/Blog: myspace.com/lost_my_rhythm
About Myself: Yo, my name's Cody, I'm officially a junior in high school, and I believe that waking up to see Michael Jackson staring in at you thru your window is the scariest thing in the universe; next to waking up and seeing the king from the burger king commercials staring at you thru you window, of course. I write whenever something pops into my head. My genre is horror, but not gross out, more of a spooky/ suspenseful kinda thing. Every now and then though, I may write something that is not for people with easily upset stomachs. And then, sometimes I try my hand at other types of stories, and the results are never good. I develop my skills through writing and hearing criticism. Also, I'm not great at spelling or grammar, so if you see something wrong, go ahead point it out. My idols are: Stephen King and Dean Koontz. Lets see...that's all someone slighted interested enough to read this should need to know. Hope you enjoy my stories!

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Jun 2, 2008RunHorror 161
May 29, 2008Khalahua Chronicles: pt2 : The History of DeathHorror 76
May 27, 2008Lock InHorror 101
May 10, 2008Khalahua Chronicles: pt.1: Welcome to KhalahuaHorror 100

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Total number of comments: 13

Title article: What Kind Of God?
Date: 2008-06-10 20:55:00
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Really good job! 
The story griped me at the beginning, and still hasn't let go. It was powerful in all ways, and in the end, I felt empathy for Adam. 
 
Also, nice use of the biblical names! 
 
Finally, I too am curious about this object in the sky. Will you shed some light, or maybe keep it a mystery; leave it's grip on us. Hmm? I assume it is an meteor, but who knows? 
 
Excellent. 
5/5

Title article: Run
Date: 2008-06-07 08:40:17
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A hypnotic induction? That's the first time I've heard of any thing of mine called that. It makes me feel all warm and tingly... 
 
Really though, thanks for the comments all, and the ratings!!

Title article: Demon Seeds
Date: 2008-06-03 20:51:40
Amazing
Excellent. 
The suspense built through the story was perfect. The creepiness factor is perfect. I am really freaked out, something that doesn't happen quite often, especially when I'm reading.  
This story is of a rare breed. Nowadays, the horror genre has become lost from where it started. (Where'd it start?-- check out Hitchcock) We no longer have suspense filled, nail biters that give little kids nightmares. Now we have throat slashing, gut spilling "horror" that just makes little kids puke (books and movies alike.) 
To make my point of this: Demon Seeds reminded me of why I got into this horror business. If I have nightmares tonight, or can't sleep, that just makes it better. This story will stay with me for a long time, and is a definite favorite. 
Please keep up the good work. 
FYI: You are officially my new hero! 
5/5

Title article: Pedestrian
Date: 2008-06-03 20:21:44
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Great job. Loved it from the beginning. Great job weaving the suspense through the story. And the creature, damn I'm probably not going to do anything till I figure out what that could be. 
Any hints?

Title article: I am Man
Date: 2008-06-03 19:53:20
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Brilliantly done. 
It was nice and deep, just like I like my poems.

Title article: Run
Date: 2008-06-03 16:52:25

Thanks for the comments everyone! 
 
I am actually working on a revision for this that'll be more suspenseful and involving you a whole lot more (not to give too much away, but anyone ever read R.L. Stein?)

Title article: Khalahua Chronicles: pt2 : The History of Death
Date: 2008-06-03 16:45:57

Thanks! 
 
Tolkien, really?  
 
On a sadder note, I've come to a major construction zone on the highway of this series, unfortunately all lanes are closed into further notice. Hopefully it will be soon...

Title article: Lock In
Date: 2008-05-29 19:28:44
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Thanks. 
 
I understand what your saying, and I'll work on it. What I was aiming for with the disappearances is that they'd come at a completely unexpected time,and I personally think that Albert was the only one that worked out. I even think that after awhile it got repetitive. 
 
Thanks again! And thanks for being the first person to comment on a story of mine!

Title article: The House on Saint Marlboro's Street
Date: 2008-05-27 21:26:57
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great story, just one question, what exactly happens to Danny? Does Rummy get him, even though he made it out of the house? Does he die of blood loss? Does he live (i noticed one of the detectives said attacked not killed) 
 
Please, I need to know!

Title article: Fairy Tales From Hell Presents: The Three Little Pigs
Date: 2008-05-11 18:00:53
Interesting
Nicely done.  
 
Brilliant twist on the wolf's rhyme, by the way. lmao

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