Primal Need, Chapter 1

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About Myself: I'm just a kid in high school. I try to find time to write in between school work, after school activities, working a part time job, and having a school life. Pretty much the average life of the average American teenager. Hopefully I'll find the time to be back here more often, and I'll eventually get around to reading your stuff.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 23, 2008Land of the FreePoetry 77
Oct 16, 2008Slave to the World, Chapter 3Horror 95
Oct 6, 2008Slave to the World, Chapter 2Horror 133
Sep 28, 2008Slave to the World, Chapter 1Horror 178
Sep 27, 2008Losing HimRomance 468
Sep 17, 2008Slave to the World, Chapter 0Horror 375
Sep 5, 2008Things aren't always as they appearNon-Fiction 262
Sep 4, 2008BREAKING through the SuRfAcEPoetry 117
Aug 22, 2008missingMystery 164
Aug 11, 2008bottled UPPoetry 334
Jul 22, 2008heaven won't let me inPoetry 230
Jul 3, 2008ThE sToRmPoetry 241
Jul 1, 2008I Am the FailurePoetry 359
Jun 13, 2008Falling to Pieces, Chapter 2Adventure 117
Jun 11, 2008The Last of the FearsNon-Fiction 251
May 27, 2008Falling to Pieces, Chapter 1Adventure 175
May 18, 2008The Undreadful MondayNon-Fiction 649
May 8, 2008I shall not live in vainMiscellaneous Stories 388

Comments

Title article: Thoughts of a prisoner
Date: 2008-06-25 12:24:30

i thought it was a decent poem, a little on the short side though. i thought that the whole poem could be taken as an extended metaphor, where the person is a prisoner of themself rather than an actual prisoner. and Xena's comment makes absolutley no sense, but that isnt surprising. sorry to hear that someone is messing with your ratings

Title article: A Story for Hannah
Date: 2008-06-25 09:18:19

interesting... i found some of the humor to be kinda little kidish. i liked the end though, about the restraining order. i thought that was funny. i also thought that you had a good style though, there was a nice flow to the story. but i thought that the story itself was a bit strnage.

Title article: How To Lose Weight And Make Friends With Proper Diet.
Date: 2008-06-24 21:17:56

all of your pieces have a twisted side to them but they're wicked hilarious and i always look for them. this is a great piece of comedy. i also love the title "How to lose weight and make friends"

Title article: TRUE LOVE IS??
Date: 2008-06-15 22:15:19

it seems strange to me that you tell someone that their poem isnt a good as in your words "rhymer" and your poem doesnt rhyme at all. just something to think about. 
 
i dont really get the last line. the impression that i got was that it was your idea of comedy because you dont believe in true love and you think that this girl is like on drugs or something. but poetry's not really my thing so i dont really know. i was hoping that you could clarify it a little for me.

Title article: "FATHER"S DAY"
Date: 2008-06-15 21:53:38

wow, nice poem. i loved it, it really made me think about how much time i spent with my dad today, which really wasnt much becuase I had more "important" things to do.

Title article: Last Chance with a Friend
Date: 2008-06-15 21:01:07

beautiful. lovely descriptions. i could kind of relate to it becuase I had a really close friend from summer camp last year who's now in Europe. We keep contact for a while via facebook but i dont really talk to him anymore. anyways nice story about the sadness of losing a friend

Title article: Velocity.
Date: 2008-06-15 20:32:25

okay, im definately not cookingwines "buddy." if you want any proof just look at my last review to him because i said that his last story was quite confusing. and to stickfigure, i was also going to say the same thing that it doesn't really have a plot, but its a psycological (i know i just killed that word) short like that short by James Joyce that i cant remember the name of now, but its about a kid who wants to go to a carnival. the ending is about a character having an epiphany and a realization, which is similar to how the main character notices that his girlfriend takes all of the adventure and excitement around her for granted, hence the last line. i kinda took the last line as being the characters epiphany. 
 
Just wondering... im guessing that hes in New York because starbucks always uses the tall instead of the medium and Starbucks is huge in New York. Am i right? i could be completely wrong though.

Title article: Your Love is Like a Battery
Date: 2008-06-15 20:17:02

i agree with the last two comments. lovely poem

Title article: Velocity.
Date: 2008-06-14 20:33:30

loved it. classic story of the country boy going to the city. nice descriptions. I also really liked the last line and the paragraph before that. i thought that they were wonderfully written.

Title article: The Evil
Date: 2008-06-13 21:01:14

nope tilth isnt in my websters. did you mean like terf by any chance? nice poem though and I give you credit for making up a word. hey somebodys gotta make up words or else we woudlnt have any.

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 09/23/2008 03:35:34
Sometime in the future ...

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

getting the hell out of massachusetts
 Created On: 09/05/2008 19:14:13
Okay, we're leaving. Steve Carell freaks me out ... why does he always have to scream like that? Something's terribly wrong with his soul, it's the only conclusion I've been able to come up with.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Coming for you
 Created On: 09/05/2008 19:03:53
Did you really think I would find that funny?? I find that highly offensive to my Indiana people. You have pissed off an entire state. We're coming for you, Amanda. We have corn n' the cobb with hidden razor blades ... and that's about all Indiana has. Well, it has me and that's priceless.

You've pissed off the wrong tribe.

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

In your head
 Created On: 09/05/2008 18:42:44
sumbitch! *smacks self in the forehead* i knew that, too.

Nope, it's a song by the Rolling Stones called "Jumpin' Jack Flash"

Yes, it did. It does that all the time for me. Damn ghosts and their cruel tricks ... one day i'll make 'em all pay ... with possessed blood thirty purses

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 09/05/2008 18:27:01
Lol i wasn't trying to guess a song. To be honest, i didn't know that thing you quoted was a song. Isn't that a nursery rhyme? shit ... it sounds familiar. Why must you curse me?!
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Dublin
 Created On: 09/05/2008 18:10:26
I was born in a cross-fire hurricane
And I howled at my ma in the driving rain,
But its all right now, in fact, its a gas!
But its all right. Im jumpin jack flash,
Its a gas! gas! gas!

I was raised by a toothless, bearded hag,
I was schooled with a strap right across my back,
But its all right now, in fact, its a gas!
But its all right, Im jumpin jack flash,
Its a gas! gas! gas!

I was drowned, I was washed up and left for dead.
I fell down to my feet and I saw they bled.
I frowned at the crumbs of a crust of bread.
Yeah, yeah, yeah
I was crowned with a spike right thru my head.
But its all right now, in fact, its a gas!
But its all right, Im jumpin jack flash,
Its a gas! gas! gas!

Jumping jack flash, its a gas
Jumping jack flash, its a gas
Jumping jack flash, its a gas
Jumping jack flash, its a gas
Jumping jack flash
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 09/05/2008 17:55:31
Well he needs to learn how we handle things here in the States. No matter how terrifying they may be

I don't understand. My name is Max ... not Jack. Are ... are you smoking the reefer?

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Alaska
 Created On: 09/05/2008 17:39:03
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 09/05/2008 17:39:26
Oh, I see. If he doesn't watch his back I'm gonna sick a purse on his ass. See how he likes that!

any 3's?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 09/05/2008 17:08:34
Do I have a monopoly? What the hell is that supposed to mean?

I'm more of a Go Fish kind of guy

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
 Created On: 08/23/2008 13:07:38
Jeeez it took me like three hours to get to the end of this book.

Does Max have a monopoly?

Anyway, singing in (just the once).

Phil
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