Population:200, Chapter 2

Another creature had joined the first at the door now....

While You Were Sleeping

The sun sets and night begins. For some...
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About Myself: I'm just a kid in high school. I try to find time to write in between school work, after school activities, working a part time job, and having a school life. Pretty much the average life of the average American teenager. Hopefully I'll find the time to be back here more often, and I'll eventually get around to reading your stuff.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 23, 2008Land of the FreePoetry 77
Oct 16, 2008Slave to the World, Chapter 3Horror 95
Oct 6, 2008Slave to the World, Chapter 2Horror 133
Sep 28, 2008Slave to the World, Chapter 1Horror 178
Sep 27, 2008Losing HimRomance 468
Sep 17, 2008Slave to the World, Chapter 0Horror 375
Sep 5, 2008Things aren't always as they appearNon-Fiction 262
Sep 4, 2008BREAKING through the SuRfAcEPoetry 117
Aug 22, 2008missingMystery 164
Aug 11, 2008bottled UPPoetry 334
Jul 22, 2008heaven won't let me inPoetry 230
Jul 3, 2008ThE sToRmPoetry 241
Jul 1, 2008I Am the FailurePoetry 359
Jun 13, 2008Falling to Pieces, Chapter 2Adventure 117
Jun 11, 2008The Last of the FearsNon-Fiction 251
May 27, 2008Falling to Pieces, Chapter 1Adventure 175
May 18, 2008The Undreadful MondayNon-Fiction 649
May 8, 2008I shall not live in vainMiscellaneous Stories 388

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Total number of comments: 249

Title article: My Enemy
Date: 2008-11-12 15:04:14

it was interesting. i liked the story, but i also found that the punctuation made it difficult to read. i think that was your whole point in making it differnet though. i did like the lower case letters and the he said and she said lines without the quotations. ive seen the quotations done like that before in the short story "the things they carried." good story though

Title article: Vengeance
Date: 2008-11-12 12:42:33

ya this was pretty good. i like the prison stuff too and prison break was one of the few tv shows that i whatched. you had very good detailed descriptions and it was an intersting story although i wish i would have provided more background information like why he was in prison and why the people wanted to harm his family etc., cause it just left me with a lot of questions at the end.

Title article: Vengeance
Date: 2008-11-12 12:42:31

ya this was pretty good. i like the prison stuff too and prison break was one of the few tv shows that i whatched. you had very good detailed descriptions and it was an intersting story although i wish i would have provided more background information like why he was in prison and why the people wanted to harm his family etc., cause it just left me with a lot of questions at the end.

Title article: The True Nature of Reality
Date: 2008-11-09 12:11:25

i really liked this, i thought it had a great ending too although i wanted to know what he replied to the doctor whether he said no or if he slipped and then was readmitted into the hospital. good story though and interesting perception of the world

Title article: The StoriesVille Prophecy, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-11-08 17:26:31

haha bubblehead and all the lol's and smiley faces. i thought it was great how after she eats robbie she just says lol (with the wink face). great stuff max, i cant wait to read more i love it so much.

Title article: LIMELIGHT.
Date: 2008-11-08 17:12:13

this was really good. i liked how you wrote the whole thing in second person without making it seem awkward. i also liked the whole story and the sense of mystery, like how the reader never really knows if Lilly loves Milly more than a friend. i also liked the last quote that you ended the story with. it was really nice and summed up the whole story.

Title article: The Wine Wins Again
Date: 2008-11-05 15:43:52

i liked the way you've set it up, with only a few words in each stanza. i think it makes it flow nicely. i also liked how there wasnt any puntuation until the end yet it was still easily readable. interesting topic too.

Title article: Taste, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-11-05 15:34:27

ya this was really good. im not normally into the twilight fantasy stuff, but i kinda liked this. i thought it was interesting how you made him a werefore instead of a vampire. i got hooked into the first paragraph. i actually thought that it was going to be based on the Panic! at the Disco song Time to Dance. It kinda reminded me of that for some reason

Title article: The StoriesVille Prophecy, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-11-05 15:22:32

haha this is so good max. i love the whole feeling of it, like a fairy tale, yet theres an underlying sense of humor. im not sure how well a village would operate though with Christian in charge...jk. how can u not like fireworks and be born on the fourth of july? great piece though i love it.

Title article: Halloween, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-11-02 11:57:16

sorry i forgot to rate this

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 09/23/2008 03:35:34
Sometime in the future ...

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

getting the hell out of massachusetts
 Created On: 09/05/2008 19:14:13
Okay, we're leaving. Steve Carell freaks me out ... why does he always have to scream like that? Something's terribly wrong with his soul, it's the only conclusion I've been able to come up with.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Coming for you
 Created On: 09/05/2008 19:03:53
Did you really think I would find that funny?? I find that highly offensive to my Indiana people. You have pissed off an entire state. We're coming for you, Amanda. We have corn n' the cobb with hidden razor blades ... and that's about all Indiana has. Well, it has me and that's priceless.

You've pissed off the wrong tribe.

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

In your head
 Created On: 09/05/2008 18:42:44
sumbitch! *smacks self in the forehead* i knew that, too.

Nope, it's a song by the Rolling Stones called "Jumpin' Jack Flash"

Yes, it did. It does that all the time for me. Damn ghosts and their cruel tricks ... one day i'll make 'em all pay ... with possessed blood thirty purses

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 09/05/2008 18:27:01
Lol i wasn't trying to guess a song. To be honest, i didn't know that thing you quoted was a song. Isn't that a nursery rhyme? shit ... it sounds familiar. Why must you curse me?!
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Dublin
 Created On: 09/05/2008 18:10:26
I was born in a cross-fire hurricane
And I howled at my ma in the driving rain,
But its all right now, in fact, its a gas!
But its all right. Im jumpin jack flash,
Its a gas! gas! gas!

I was raised by a toothless, bearded hag,
I was schooled with a strap right across my back,
But its all right now, in fact, its a gas!
But its all right, Im jumpin jack flash,
Its a gas! gas! gas!

I was drowned, I was washed up and left for dead.
I fell down to my feet and I saw they bled.
I frowned at the crumbs of a crust of bread.
Yeah, yeah, yeah
I was crowned with a spike right thru my head.
But its all right now, in fact, its a gas!
But its all right, Im jumpin jack flash,
Its a gas! gas! gas!

Jumping jack flash, its a gas
Jumping jack flash, its a gas
Jumping jack flash, its a gas
Jumping jack flash, its a gas
Jumping jack flash
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 09/05/2008 17:55:31
Well he needs to learn how we handle things here in the States. No matter how terrifying they may be

I don't understand. My name is Max ... not Jack. Are ... are you smoking the reefer?

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Alaska
 Created On: 09/05/2008 17:39:03
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 09/05/2008 17:39:26
Oh, I see. If he doesn't watch his back I'm gonna sick a purse on his ass. See how he likes that!

any 3's?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 09/05/2008 17:08:34
Do I have a monopoly? What the hell is that supposed to mean?

I'm more of a Go Fish kind of guy

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
 Created On: 08/23/2008 13:07:38
Jeeez it took me like three hours to get to the end of this book.

Does Max have a monopoly?

Anyway, singing in (just the once).

Phil
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