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Last Online	10/11/2008
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About Myself:

Don't be curious about my name. I'm trying to be original.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
May 6, 2008	The Ghost who loved her	Horror	394
Sep 16, 2008	The Rose Girl	Miscellaneous Stories	256
Jun 22, 2008	Cursed trance	Poetry	219

Comments

Total number of comments: 13

Title article: Snow Day
Date: 2008-09-20 03:44:24

homosexuality
i love stories about homosexuality such as this one! you'd written the story well.

Title article: A Bad Day
Date: 2008-09-19 23:45:53

this poem is creative and it describes well what one feels in a bad day.

Title article: The Rose Girl
Date: 2008-09-18 00:17:59

=)
i already put names for all the characters of this story. pls tell me if there's something ungrammatical there. or anything wrong at all. thank you.

Title article: The Rose Girl
Date: 2008-09-17 21:32:44

maybe i should change that so it won't bother the readers. thank you for your comment.

Title article: The Rose Girl
Date: 2008-09-17 21:30:42

i capitalized she and her to emphasize the character i'm about to introduced. the capitalized she refers to the rose girl and the she that's not capitalized refers to the stepsister.

Title article: The Rose Girl
Date: 2008-09-17 16:55:21

thank you for your comments.

Title article: The Rose Girl
Date: 2008-09-17 05:52:20

thank you vey much for your comment. i'd heed to your advice. i've not read short stories before and i'm sure that explains why my stories suck. i'm gonna read R.E Potter and Darrin Bouley from now on.

Title article: Vanity(from the minds of Zombie Punk & Tarhead Mugwump)
Date: 2008-07-11 04:53:39

i love this story.
i feel happy for roberta. geeks shouldn't be treated badly because of their appearance. for all we know, they all become achievers because of their terrible experiences in school.

Title article: The Exorcism of Oprah Winfrey
Date: 2008-07-10 00:43:50

that was a great story, zombie punk! i also hate oprah to death. i hate all talk shows.

are you sure you're only 15? for a 15 yr.old you've got a great imagination.

Title article: Fairy Tales From Hell Presents: The Three Little Pigs
Date: 2008-06-26 01:13:05

pro, bacon and ham... nice names for the three li'l pigs. your story is funny!

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