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About Myself:

Alright, what can i say about me?
I have every book i have ever read, even my child hood books, which i used to stay up all night reading with a flashlight under the covers. I made choices that lead me to Parting for the 4th of July on Route 101(on the beach) in Oregon, to debauchery standing at the end of Route 1 in Key west for Fantasy Fest. Also my 25 B-day, what a way to celebrate turning a 1/4 of a century. I'm 30 now living in the Midwest(guess where)taking care of my Grandfathers farm,(every building he built with his hands) I've been a waiter, bartender, construction worker, and lately a poker player, all while keeping books and pages of thoughts, ideas, concepts, snippets of conversations, and I'm starting to combine them into stories for all to enjoy.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 4, 2008	Bar Love	Poetry	63
Oct 4, 2008	Simplest of Instructions	Poetry	58
Oct 1, 2008	Looking	Poetry	75
Oct 1, 2008	Autumn Comes Again	Poetry	75
Sep 26, 2008	Two Flowers	Romance	148
Sep 23, 2008	Two poems about today	Poetry	69
Sep 21, 2008	Before the Show	Miscellaneous Stories	64
Sep 4, 2008	Gabriel Visits	Science Fiction	313
Sep 3, 2008	Hearts Cry Out	Poetry	83
Aug 28, 2008	Nothing Compared	Poetry	110
Aug 27, 2008	2 Poems of Her	Poetry	106
Aug 25, 2008	Lighthouse	Romance	165
Aug 18, 2008	Going Up	Humor	143
Jul 16, 2008	The Wolf	Science Fiction	216
Jul 10, 2008	A View	Poetry	129
Jul 8, 2008	Shepherd	Science Fiction	126
Jul 6, 2008	Vices	Poetry	131
Jul 4, 2008	Birth of the White Buffalo	Romance	391
Jul 1, 2008	A Strange Dirty Doughnut	Humor	229
Jun 26, 2008	Bad Day	Miscellaneous Stories	109

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Title article: You Won't Talk to Me
Date: 2008-09-30 23:48:43

Why won't he talk to you anymore? another women? having his child? how did that happen? sorry, i like the poem, maybe its good it left me questioning

Title article: When I know that you love me
Date: 2008-09-30 23:45:59

The poem is a wonder. Great stuff. I'm not so big on hearing those words. If only because they have been lies too many a time. Your kind acts speak your love louder than you can scream.

Title article: True Love Means
Date: 2008-09-30 23:41:23

Lovely poem about the feeling and actions of love. The flow was superb. On the topic of the toilet seat; I go and put the seat AND lid down. 1. it looks better 2. i can leave surpises 3. and if I got to lift the seat, she can lift the lid.

Title article: TIERCE 1937
Date: 2008-09-30 23:32:50

Great way to age a person, to grow a person before your eyes. Not for the casual reader, but then some things are not. Intrigued me from the get-go, looking for the next.

Title article: PRIME 1927.
Date: 2008-09-30 23:25:41

age brings depth to meaning, her mind is lengthening. she is chained to repetition. So much sighing at submission. She trusts Christ and wishes for him to claim his wife.

Title article: LAUDS 1917.
Date: 2008-09-30 23:17:04

Her innocence lost to the cold for lack of warmth. Questions seep in when prayers fail to fall out. Plato holds Pandora's Box.

I'm just writing what your words seem to tell me.

True death of warmth with her brothers demise. Dead inside these cold hard walls. why not die in warmth beyond these walls.

Title article: MATINS 1907.
Date: 2008-09-30 23:06:30

The brevity of her thoughts make her seem more innocent still. Living in a rough walled world without warmth of flesh, yet she knows there is a reason not to touch and still wants too. Almost needs to.

Title article: Run Katy Run
Date: 2008-09-30 22:51:40

My words are lost like those poor woman and child.

Title article: An Unexamined Life
Date: 2008-09-30 22:45:01

Loved the self revelation after the first few paragraphs. your flow was tight, no wasted words. your characters were real and extremely believable. Loved the ending.

Title article: Reflections on Time
Date: 2008-09-30 22:34:45

I believe the Philosopher did answer, though it wasn't quite mumbo jumbo. Time to me is very simple, it is simply the third greatest gift we have, after our life, and the ability to love. To waste any of them is truly a shame.

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Name	Entry
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/08/2008 10:11:03 what about them?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/07/2008 17:14:54 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/07/2008 17:21:17 She blew my mind, made me become the bad guy, she mad me silly, then i went crazy?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/06/2008 18:09:22 the dictionary? jeeze, why couldnt you get a useful book, like Reading the Dictionary For Dummies?