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The Melancholy Death of Anarchy Boy & Punk Rock Girl

"The Melancholy Death of Anarchy...

I cant sleep again. Its like this all the...

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About Myself:

A poet hack

What do i say what do i write
my mind aspires to greater heights
visions come and images go
as i wander into the unknown
i see i hear i touch i feel
yet i know not, what is real
glimpses of truth i do see
my mind playing tricks upon me

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Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jul 4, 2008	Birth of the White Buffalo	Romance	77
Jul 1, 2008	I Can't Eat Doughnuts	Humor	103
Jul 1, 2008	20 some words to move you	Poetry	87
Jun 27, 2008	The Frog	Humor	80
Jun 26, 2008	Bad Day	Miscellaneous Stories	52
Jun 25, 2008	The Nameless	Science Fiction	56
Jun 12, 2008	Old Eyes	Poetry	48
Jun 12, 2008	It All Depends	Poetry	52
Jun 11, 2008	Autumn Comes Again	Poetry	53
Jun 10, 2008	That Fickle Muse	Poetry	46
Jun 10, 2008	Untold Dreams	Poetry	39
Jun 9, 2008	The Execution	Science Fiction	109
Jun 6, 2008	What Would You Know	Poetry	149
Jun 6, 2008	Faulty Steps	Poetry	61
Jun 5, 2008	Make Profits not Ethics	Miscellaneous Stories	161
Jun 5, 2008	Could She?	Romance	204
Apr 30, 2008	Love Without Me	Poetry	108
Apr 30, 2008	A Mile Wide	Poetry	94
Apr 28, 2008	Nature Through a Human Heart	Poetry	90

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Total number of comments: 104

Title article: Which One Would You Quit First?
Date: 2008-07-06 12:47:03

A critique, your sentences need work, is english your second language? and if you didn't know it god created all the vices, and the devil, who's tempting us with said vices. it is a survey, and if it was part of a story, like someone in a bar asked it ect. besides, are not drugs, hookers, and midgets what we all live for?

Title article: That One Perfect Chord
Date: 2008-07-06 12:26:15

to me it red (LOL) like sentences of metaphysic existentialism broken into pieces, then tried to fit them all together. Look at it like a puzzle with every word a piece, you'll know when they all fit, it shows in your other stuff.

Title article: The exotic tales of a pink skunk and a cucumber, Chapter 76
Date: 2008-07-06 01:54:02

Hallucenogens are bad for kids, people with phobeas, and the overly religious. Thats about everyone yup. Fun wacky story you got here, enjoyed as a break from the norm.

Title article: How To Lose Weight And Make Friends With Proper Diet.
Date: 2008-07-06 01:48:42

Some people don't know what dry humor, or cynical humor is all about. I love it when someone uses his rights of expression to entertain no one but himself. And the few other sick F****R's around here, may we all go to Zombies special hell.

Title article: Building Steam with a Grain of God
Date: 2008-07-06 01:43:12

I'm on the other spectrum of opinion from brandon_scott. i feel in a poem that every new sentence deserves a pause, along with comma's, but i don't like using period's. In my opinion most poems are long streams of conciousness we try to put on paper. I know when im thinking of lines in my head, periods don't enter into my mental picture.

Title article: Today Is The Day
Date: 2008-07-06 01:38:59

Just throwing my two cents in, great concept, good flow. Like Something Indecent said, interesting take on a crucifiction. Great way to change the perspective of the reader.

Title article: Last Christmas
Date: 2008-07-06 01:34:37

I believe since Mr. Phil (LOL) is older, and i'm guessing salutes the Union Jack, he's more focused with a wee bit more discipline to actually sit down and work with a story, plot, character's, and the editing process. im guessing though.

Title article: Taking Lives With .45s
Date: 2008-07-06 01:12:52

hookers and psycopaths need a crazy killer monkey as a sidekick. what else could a story ever need? Alright, maybe a midget, with a chainsaw yelling " WHO'S LITTLE NOW MOTHER F****R!"

Title article: Awakening of Minds (part one)
Date: 2008-07-06 01:06:39

Awsome concept. Great ending. I thought your descriptions to be a bit lengthy, be detailed when you need to, like for the object, otherwise let the imagery flow with the words, short and sweet. In my opinion of course.

Title article: The Beast and the Wicked Witch
Date: 2008-07-06 00:58:54

liked the concept, your verb use and grammar got sloppy at the end. what kind of play was it? You could write a short story about each charactor in the play from their point of view.