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Member Since	04/28/2008
Last Online	08/18/2008
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About Myself:

Alright, what can i say about me?
I have every book i have ever read, even my child hood books, which i used to stay up all night reading with a flashlight under the covers. I made choices that lead me to Parting for the 4th of July on Route 101(on the beach) in Oregon, to debauchery standing at the end of Route 1 in Key west for Fantasy Fest. Also my 25 B-day, what a way to celebrate turning a 1/4 of a century. I'm 30 now living in the Midwest(guess where)taking care of my Grandfathers farm,(every building he built with his hands) I've been a waiter, bartender, construction worker, and lately a poker player, all while keeping books and pages of thoughts, ideas, concepts, snippets of conversations, and I'm starting to combine them into stories for all to enjoy.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 18, 2008	Going Up	Humor	45
Jul 16, 2008	The Wolf	Science Fiction	102
Jul 10, 2008	A View	Poetry	90
Jul 8, 2008	Shepherd	Science Fiction	96
Jul 7, 2008	Gabriel Visits	Miscellaneous Stories	123
Jul 6, 2008	Vices	Poetry	103
Jul 4, 2008	Birth of the White Buffalo	Romance	336
Jul 1, 2008	A Strange Dirty Doughnut	Humor	200
Jun 26, 2008	Bad Day	Miscellaneous Stories	84
Jun 12, 2008	It All Depends	Poetry	78
Jun 9, 2008	The Execution	Science Fiction	155
Jun 6, 2008	What Would You Know	Poetry	178
Jun 6, 2008	Faulty Steps	Poetry	80
Jun 5, 2008	Make Profits not Ethics	Miscellaneous Stories	199
Jun 5, 2008	Could She?	Romance	262
Apr 30, 2008	Love Without Me	Poetry	149
Apr 30, 2008	A Mile Wide	Poetry	127
Apr 28, 2008	Nature Through a Human Heart	Poetry	122

Comments

Title article: Death
Date: 2008-07-07 18:40:03

ahhh, how lovely, a victim of poetic peer pressure! A poem of feeling, but what are you feeling, are you preaching or are you one of the Horsemen? stretch it out, define it more, its a good start

Title article: Sheep in a Slaughter House
Date: 2008-07-07 17:14:21

Well zombie, my my, i hope you have seen to much and not done too much if you know what i mean. Powerful poem, makes me think im standing on the corner watching some S*** go down.

Title article: To Get Back To The Start
Date: 2008-07-07 16:54:29

I think any good poet writes with emotion. trying to express fellings (lol) with scratches on paper or corralled pixels is not easy. rhymes bloody well too with a good flow and rhythm

Title article: Unwanted Praise
Date: 2008-07-06 19:06:34

short, moving poem with good flow and imagery. what else could you ask for. as for all the comments that are off subject; can we not find 150 charactors to critique someones work?

Title article: Clouds
Date: 2008-07-06 17:45:49

I started this commentary after the first paragraph because it was that good.

2nd paragraph: ran through his fascination too quick, expand on it's beginning with another paragraph in my opinion

next few paragraphs: only the worst storms hit the east coast from the ocean, very nice, and the transition is great.

good stuff

Title article: That One Perfect Chord
Date: 2008-07-06 12:26:15

to me it red (LOL) like sentences of metaphysic existentialism broken into pieces, then tried to fit them all together. Look at it like a puzzle with every word a piece, you'll know when they all fit, it shows in your other stuff.

Title article: The exotic tales of a pink skunk and a cucumber, Chapter 76
Date: 2008-07-06 01:54:02

Hallucenogens are bad for kids, people with phobeas, and the overly religious. Thats about everyone yup. Fun wacky story you got here, enjoyed as a break from the norm.

Title article: How To Lose Weight And Make Friends With Proper Diet.
Date: 2008-07-06 01:48:42

Some people don't know what dry humor, or cynical humor is all about. I love it when someone uses his rights of expression to entertain no one but himself. And the few other sick F****R's around here, may we all go to Zombies special hell.

Title article: Building Steam with a Grain of God
Date: 2008-07-06 01:43:12

I'm on the other spectrum of opinion from brandon_scott. i feel in a poem that every new sentence deserves a pause, along with comma's, but i don't like using period's. In my opinion most poems are long streams of conciousness we try to put on paper. I know when im thinking of lines in my head, periods don't enter into my mental picture.

Title article: Today Is The Day
Date: 2008-07-06 01:38:59

Just throwing my two cents in, great concept, good flow. Like Something Indecent said, interesting take on a crucifiction. Great way to change the perspective of the reader.

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07/08/2008 02:22:59	Re:Does anyone write in long hand anymore?	Off-Topic	388
07/08/2008 02:20:12	Re:What If?	Off-Topic	618
07/08/2008 02:04:43	Re:Does anyone write in long hand anymore?	Off-Topic	388

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Name	Entry
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/08/2008 10:11:03 what about them?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/07/2008 17:14:54 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/07/2008 17:21:17 She blew my mind, made me become the bad guy, she mad me silly, then i went crazy?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/06/2008 18:09:22 the dictionary? jeeze, why couldnt you get a useful book, like Reading the Dictionary For Dummies?