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About Myself:

Alright, what can i say about me?
I have every book i have ever read, even my child hood books, which i used to stay up all night reading with a flashlight under the covers. I made choices that lead me to Parting for the 4th of July on Route 101(on the beach) in Oregon, to debauchery standing at the end of Route 1 in Key west for Fantasy Fest. Also my 25 B-day, what a way to celebrate turning a 1/4 of a century. I'm 30 now living in the Midwest(guess where)taking care of my Grandfathers farm,(every building he built with his hands) I've been a waiter, bartender, construction worker, and lately a poker player, all while keeping books and pages of thoughts, ideas, concepts, snippets of conversations, and I'm starting to combine them into stories for all to enjoy.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Sep 4, 2008	Gabriel Visits	Science Fiction	36
Sep 3, 2008	Hearts Cry Out	Poetry	47
Aug 28, 2008	Nothing Compared	Poetry	78
Aug 27, 2008	2 Poems of Her	Poetry	75
Aug 25, 2008	Lighthouse	Romance	86
Aug 18, 2008	Going Up	Humor	87
Jul 16, 2008	The Wolf	Science Fiction	194
Jul 10, 2008	A View	Poetry	98
Jul 8, 2008	Shepherd	Science Fiction	106
Jul 6, 2008	Vices	Poetry	111
Jul 4, 2008	Birth of the White Buffalo	Romance	354
Jul 1, 2008	A Strange Dirty Doughnut	Humor	207
Jun 26, 2008	Bad Day	Miscellaneous Stories	89
Jun 12, 2008	It All Depends	Poetry	87
Jun 9, 2008	The Execution	Science Fiction	163
Jun 6, 2008	What Would You Know	Poetry	186
Jun 6, 2008	Faulty Steps	Poetry	84
Jun 5, 2008	Make Profits not Ethics	Miscellaneous Stories	206
Jun 5, 2008	Could She?	Romance	269
Apr 30, 2008	Love Without Me	Poetry	160

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Comments

Title article: GHORI
Date: 2008-08-25 09:37:54

I see nothing wrong with this story, but it just doesn't have it. Maybe your too descriptive in the beginning and it just seems drawn out and dry. Could simply be the culture differences. Good friend of mine from india, Ketan Anjarian, introduced me to eastern thinking and food. His mom would cook and the whole street would drool. hmmm, have to write some memories down.

Title article: Ebony Eyes
Date: 2008-08-25 09:27:11

Fantastic. Really. Creating a story around the song is a great test of your imagination. Well written, i was actually expecting a happy ending, but then, being young as i am i don't know the song. I know the group, just not that particular song. Smash up job.

Title article: Lovely Attribute
Date: 2008-08-25 09:20:55

Lovely words from a lazy mind. Like all things in life, excellence comes with work and persistent persiverance. I'd would guess your young, trying to see if your good at something. Hardly anyone is a writing prodigy, you have to train your mind to think, to express. critique: started great, lost your meaning some in the middle, and your ending was decent. could be great if you take the time and put the effort in.

Title article: A Static Reality
Date: 2008-08-25 08:24:42

Great word usage and flow. My critique goes, be careful not to lose the meaning of your words while putting the words together. What i mean is, do you want to words and how they fit to be the center of the poem, more so than the meaning of the poem? Your words fit beautifully from line to line, but the overall picture of them is hazy to me.

Title article: Save Our Bacon
Date: 2008-08-18 15:57:11

I read this awhile back and found it funny then. Good polish. I would love to read more so i will check out your link.

Title article: Bloodsong: Awakening, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-17 00:09:03

setting up a grand tale. Good pace, nice plot set up. You even left the mystery of who and why they're doing such damnable acts of violence against two women.

Title article: Day of Revelation
Date: 2008-07-17 00:04:06

Prime cut right there. Superb flow, almost poetic in its telling.

Title article: On The Mend
Date: 2008-07-16 23:44:41

Trapped in torment. shame people feel these emotions more than happiness. Makes you wonder about the direction of the world. People endure though, keep on trucking.

Title article: Just Let Me Eat You
Date: 2008-07-16 21:59:21

you lost me a little bit in the middle and alot towards the end, but then its late and my eyes are drooping. you didn't make clear to me why they never ate him, so i'm leaving confused.

Title article: War On Earth
Date: 2008-07-16 20:34:34

Your form and flow are changing. This poem seems to me to be flashes of pictures you describe in sequence. People will always have opinions on subject matter. to me your writing longer poems that are better structured and flow well.

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07/08/2008 02:22:59	Re:Does anyone write in long hand anymore?	Off-Topic	449
07/08/2008 02:20:12	Re:What If?	Off-Topic	747
07/08/2008 02:04:43	Re:Does anyone write in long hand anymore?	Off-Topic	449

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/08/2008 10:11:03 what about them?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/07/2008 17:14:54 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/07/2008 17:21:17 She blew my mind, made me become the bad guy, she mad me silly, then i went crazy?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/06/2008 18:09:22 the dictionary? jeeze, why couldnt you get a useful book, like Reading the Dictionary For Dummies?