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About Myself:

Alright, what can i say about me?
I have every book i have ever read, even my child hood books, which i used to stay up all night reading with a flashlight under the covers. I made choices that lead me to Parting for the 4th of July on Route 101(on the beach) in Oregon, to debauchery standing at the end of Route 1 in Key west for Fantasy Fest. Also my 25 B-day, what a way to celebrate turning a 1/4 of a century. I'm 30 now living in the Midwest(guess where)taking care of my Grandfathers farm,(every building he built with his hands) I've been a waiter, bartender, construction worker, and lately a poker player, all while keeping books and pages of thoughts, ideas, concepts, snippets of conversations, and I'm starting to combine them into stories for all to enjoy.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 27, 2008	2 Poems of Her	Poetry	130
Apr 30, 2008	A Mile Wide	Poetry	171
Jul 1, 2008	A Strange Dirty Doughnut	Humor	259
Jul 10, 2008	A View	Poetry	177
Oct 1, 2008	Autumn Comes Again	Poetry	151
Jun 26, 2008	Bad Day	Miscellaneous Stories	124
Oct 4, 2008	Bar Love	Poetry	108
Sep 21, 2008	Before the Show	Miscellaneous Stories	93
Jul 4, 2008	Birth of the White Buffalo	Romance	434
Jun 5, 2008	Could She?	Romance	294
Jun 6, 2008	Faulty Steps	Poetry	103
Sep 4, 2008	Gabriel Visits	Science Fiction	373
Aug 18, 2008	Going Up	Humor	174
Sep 3, 2008	Hearts Cry Out	Poetry	121
Jun 12, 2008	It All Depends	Poetry	128
Aug 25, 2008	Lighthouse	Romance	216
Oct 1, 2008	Looking	Poetry	124
Apr 30, 2008	Love Without Me	Poetry	190
Jun 5, 2008	Make Profits not Ethics	Miscellaneous Stories	247
Apr 28, 2008	Nature Through a Human Heart	Poetry	169

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Comments

Total number of comments: 236

Title article: The Call
Date: 2008-11-12 15:54:45

Good descriptions, but you went a little to far with them for me. I like a little more directness with the actions; every line does not need to sound like an epic poem, especially in this short story format. I know i go overboard too, everyone does, you just need to find a balance between being descriptive and leaving some things up to the readers imagination. just my opinion.

Title article: THE BALLAD OF JOHNATHON BRANSON
Date: 2008-11-11 11:28:16

Great word usage. Most here on this site don't fully understand how and why a story sometimes needs its words stretched and tweeked to produce an excellent effect on mood setting and character creation.

Title article: Falling
Date: 2008-10-14 21:27:24

A true poem, to my eyes, that pierces through the layers of what people can see to lay bare emotions. Tiny pixels laid out to make me see and feel a small moment of your world and life.

Title article: Cold December
Date: 2008-10-14 21:22:13

The subject matter is a dark melancholy but i see you bringing color from within. I see the black despair from the start that subtly changes shades to midnight blue. Slowly, like the sun rising, the blue changes to the shade of sky, to reveal a world of blue ice, waiting for warmth to grace its surface once more.

Title article: COMPLINE 1977.
Date: 2008-10-14 21:12:59

The fulfillment of words can be moving and powerful. I remember the first words planted like seeds, and like a skillful gardener of lines, you grew them into a beautiful tree flowering with images and emotions.

Title article: Going Up
Date: 2008-10-06 20:06:22

My actual first attempt at a novella. 12 chapters for 12 famous people, Simon Peter is the first chapter, this short was a conceptual first chap draft.

Title article: Through This Mirror
Date: 2008-10-06 19:51:49

Wow. Really, took me to a different view of you. You've grown, hit a higher level, now you simply just have to do it again. ;p
I still like the other one better, barely, so i guess you did it again

Title article: The Photograph
Date: 2008-10-06 19:36:50

This is why no photographs hang on my wall. Also why i rarely say good bye, simply "see you later", as i am a wanderer of life. Friends come and go and may return as my feet find their path.

Title article: hostage
Date: 2008-10-06 19:31:14

beautiful flow of notions of love and apathy. Life goes on long after love fades and becomes a ritualistic habit of simply not wanting to be alone. Yet we all are alone in the end.

Title article: Reflection
Date: 2008-10-06 19:26:05

The best part about the whole thing, in truth if you look at it, you need not god to feel that way. It is simply an honest, goodly, understanding way to live life.

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/08/2008 10:11:03 what about them?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/07/2008 17:14:54 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/07/2008 17:21:17 She blew my mind, made me become the bad guy, she mad me silly, then i went crazy?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/06/2008 18:09:22 the dictionary? jeeze, why couldnt you get a useful book, like Reading the Dictionary For Dummies?