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About Myself:

Alright, what can i say about me?
I have every book i have ever read, even my child hood books, which i used to stay up all night reading with a flashlight under the covers. I made choices that lead me to Parting for the 4th of July on Route 101(on the beach) in Oregon, to debauchery standing at the end of Route 1 in Key west for Fantasy Fest. Also my 25 B-day, what a way to celebrate turning a 1/4 of a century. I'm 30 now living in the Midwest(guess where)taking care of my Grandfathers farm,(every building he built with his hands) I've been a waiter, bartender, construction worker, and lately a poker player, all while keeping books and pages of thoughts, ideas, concepts, snippets of conversations, and I'm starting to combine them into stories for all to enjoy.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 28, 2008	Nothing Compared	Poetry	51
Aug 27, 2008	2 Poems of Her	Poetry	58
Aug 25, 2008	Lighthouse	Romance	59
Aug 18, 2008	Going Up	Humor	73
Jul 16, 2008	The Wolf	Science Fiction	187
Jul 10, 2008	A View	Poetry	93
Jul 8, 2008	Shepherd	Science Fiction	100
Jul 7, 2008	Gabriel Visits	Miscellaneous Stories	131
Jul 6, 2008	Vices	Poetry	107
Jul 4, 2008	Birth of the White Buffalo	Romance	349
Jul 1, 2008	A Strange Dirty Doughnut	Humor	204
Jun 26, 2008	Bad Day	Miscellaneous Stories	85
Jun 12, 2008	It All Depends	Poetry	81
Jun 9, 2008	The Execution	Science Fiction	160
Jun 6, 2008	What Would You Know	Poetry	179
Jun 6, 2008	Faulty Steps	Poetry	83
Jun 5, 2008	Make Profits not Ethics	Miscellaneous Stories	204
Jun 5, 2008	Could She?	Romance	264
Apr 30, 2008	Love Without Me	Poetry	153
Apr 30, 2008	A Mile Wide	Poetry	130

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Comments

Total number of comments: 173

Title article: Nothing Compared
Date: 2008-08-28 17:44:13

You must look for sleights against you to think what you do. i simply tried to state that a person depressed sitting in a nice home, warm and well fed must simply think of those less fortunate as a base to draw upon happiness, to see how blessed they are to have such comforts. It helps to prioritize the most important things in life. Trust me, I have overcome depression myself, and battle it every day i breathe.

Title article: Sahara We See
Date: 2008-08-28 12:19:36

This is writing.

Title article: Refill
Date: 2008-08-28 12:11:02

2 girls who have, I'm assuming, lived in the same area, went to the same school system, watch the same Mtv, listen to the same music station, and work at the same job, but aren't supposed to sound the same? If anything the chatter between the two is the most realistic. The one who just begins to see the cycle, is suddenly trapped by it. As soon as she thinks about breaking free, it reaches out and captures her. That's my take anyway. very good stuff.

Title article: The Apocalypse of Blythe
Date: 2008-08-28 11:59:01

R.A.Salvatore like in your descriptions of swordplay. Longer than i like to read, but still, very well written. Your characters grabbed me and your mood and environment setting was suburb.

Title article: Enchanted Garden
Date: 2008-08-28 11:34:22

sorry, didn't make it through the first couple of lines with out bringing this up. Are they in the sun? or in the shade? read it all, very nice. Imagery was wonderful, i was expecting something happier from the ending. I personally love dancing in the rain, every drop of water is a small bit of life falling to replenish the earth. in my opinion anyway. And yes, life is harsh, but how else would you know how you want your life to be? You have to see life how you don't want it to be.

Title article: Highly Decorated
Date: 2008-08-28 11:24:18

another good one, but i have to play the critic(ass) a little. Most of the words you put in ( ) i believe you could work into the story itself a little better and remove the ( ). I guess its just a matter of opinion, but I'd work em out. Other than that, I am impressed with your ability to take any ordinary object, and spin a tale around it. I sweater, a song, ect...
little jealous too i guess. Write on, write on, someone has to keep the history books in check.

Title article: Without the Word
Date: 2008-08-26 09:47:45

until we progress to the point, mentally, when we can project the feeling and image of what we want and need into the mind of who we are communicating to, we will never understand each other truly, so we use poor words, some more so than others.

Title article: Without the Word
Date: 2008-08-26 09:45:25

And in a vacuum..... Philosophical pondering is a great exercise of the mind, but we need these flimsy words even in misunderstanding. I could point in the direction of the forest and what would you know of what i wanted without me saying "Food", or "Fire" or "Shelter"

Title article: The Reluctant Lover
Date: 2008-08-26 09:38:33

I liked the story a lot, and as for alfred, anyone remember Elizabeth Smart? Only 18 miles from home and left alone, unchained, for hours? Not everyone is as smart as alfred wishes to be.

Title article: Antz
Date: 2008-08-26 09:10:16

Reminds me of the time my friend couldn't get back into his house because the Raccoon at the back gate wouldn't let him. A Raccoon gate guard right out of Brain Jacques "Redwall" series, but hey, what do expect from a kid who lives across the street from a dairy farm.

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Date	Subject	Category	Hits
07/08/2008 02:22:59	Re:Does anyone write in long hand anymore?	Off-Topic	412
07/08/2008 02:20:12	Re:What If?	Off-Topic	700
07/08/2008 02:04:43	Re:Does anyone write in long hand anymore?	Off-Topic	412

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/08/2008 10:11:03 what about them?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/07/2008 17:14:54 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/07/2008 17:21:17 She blew my mind, made me become the bad guy, she mad me silly, then i went crazy?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/06/2008 18:09:22 the dictionary? jeeze, why couldnt you get a useful book, like Reading the Dictionary For Dummies?