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Title article: Youtopia, Ch. 12
Date: 2008-04-28 07:43:35

Great job again, Sneh!
It's really amazing how you are doing this. I mean, really, there is actually not toooo much happening here, but still it is so much fun to read, I just like these little crazy comparisons like "It would be an understatement to say she looks more comedically tragic than a four-way car crash". To be honest, I found Em and Derek to be a bit "over-worried" at the end of the story... but we'll see how the story proceeds. Just continue like this, Sneh!

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