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Primal Need - Chapter 1 Blood. The metallic...

A Ticket to Tewkesbury by Philip Neale, writing as...

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About Myself:

31 Years old, male from the far reaches of space...actually, New Jersey. I Enjoy writing and reading horror, suspense, mystery...

Please read my stories, and please comment. Your input helps a great deal. Thank you!!!

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 21, 2008	The People From The Sky III: The Dead Don't Tremble	Horror	165
Aug 6, 2008	Hallowed Be Thy Name	Horror	401
Jul 24, 2008	The People From The Sky II: Fire On The Lake	Horror	215
Jul 23, 2008	If The Sun Didn't Rise	Horror	726
Jul 13, 2008	The People From The Sky I: Man On The Moon	Horror	439
Jun 9, 2008	What Kind Of God?	Horror	535
Jun 3, 2008	Demon Seeds	Horror	216
Apr 25, 2008	Pedestrian	Horror	346

Comments

Title article: A cruel passion
Date: 2008-07-13 10:33:08

Interesting and well written. I could both understand and feel Sophie's pain. I didn't understand exactly why Malcom seemed so eager to humiliate her, then is trying to save her. Maybe it's something that can be revealed in a second part? Overall it's a good story, good protagonist, well written.

Title article: The Hecatomb, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-13 08:19:41

Really nice read! I can see this as a 1st issue comic book -- actually see the sketches with your words etched in tiny boxes and dialogue baloons. Nicely written. Is this an intro to a longer saga?

Title article: Conners Ghostly Summer
Date: 2008-06-22 16:31:45

Great story! I really had no idea what was going on until the very end. It gave me a hallow feeling in my stomach...great job!!!!! Aside from the few grammatical errors (a few missing periods and commas is about it) this story is very powerful!!!!!

Title article: What Kind Of God?
Date: 2008-06-11 03:47:33

In the first draft it was a comet - still is, I'm guessing. I figured ambiguity would be more suspenseful. For myself, I am always more afraid of what I'm not sure of. I hope that readers will be, too. Thank you for commenting, and thanks most of all for reading!!!

Title article: Run
Date: 2008-06-04 14:33:30

Really gets deep into you, sort of like a hypnotic induction. I can imagine it being read out loud, eyes closed...and at the end you open your eyes and find you are shivering, dripping with fear. Well done!!

Title article: Pedestrian
Date: 2008-04-26 05:15:07

Re: Pedestrian
Thanks for the comment. This is exactly why (as a new writer) I'm trying this sort of forum for some work. Good advice is priceless, especially in this line of work. Thanks again :)

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