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A Ticket to Tewkesbury by Philip Neale, writing as...

Vianne stood outside and stared at the flat tire on...

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About Myself:

31 Years old, male from the far reaches of space...actually, New Jersey. I Enjoy writing and reading horror, suspense, mystery...

Please read my stories, and please comment. Your input helps a great deal. Thank you!!!

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 21, 2008	The People From The Sky III: The Dead Don't Tremble	Horror	165
Aug 6, 2008	Hallowed Be Thy Name	Horror	401
Jul 24, 2008	The People From The Sky II: Fire On The Lake	Horror	215
Jul 23, 2008	If The Sun Didn't Rise	Horror	726
Jul 13, 2008	The People From The Sky I: Man On The Moon	Horror	439
Jun 9, 2008	What Kind Of God?	Horror	535
Jun 3, 2008	Demon Seeds	Horror	216
Apr 25, 2008	Pedestrian	Horror	346

Comments

Title article: Clock
Date: 2008-08-22 22:27:05

Definitely my kind of story, with the 'X-files' feel that is what I tend to look for whether I'm reading or writing. I've always been intrigued by anything extraterrestrial, and (aside from my own writing) I've yet to find anything about it on here. That is, until tonight. Nice story.

Title article: bottled UP
Date: 2008-08-22 21:30:52

Definitely something different, and as far as creativity goes, it's perfect. As a poem, it's nicely written, and openly personal. I'd like to see more poetry formatted this way. It's a nice marriage of word and image.

Title article: My Present
Date: 2008-08-22 21:26:13

As a horror fan I tend to lean toward darker stuff, but it's nice to read something like this every so often...like a breath of fresh air or a ray of sun...nicely done

Title article: Darkening, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-22 21:23:45

As fast paced as an action thriller! I could feel my heart thumping as I read. I don't fully understand what is really going on, but I have a feeling it's supposed to be that way. Definitely waiting for the next installment!!

Title article: Darkening, Chapter 0
Date: 2008-08-22 21:16:24

Nice start. It was Short, sweet and to the point. It left me looking for the next installment. Not sure what to expect, but I have a feeling it's going to be damned good!!!!

Title article: Hoping The Sun Doesn't Rise
Date: 2008-08-22 21:11:59

Wow!!!
Speechless for a moment. Your straightforwardness is bold, to say the least. I loved the first line, and as I read along I felt like I'd been punched in the face. But that's a good thing. I felt what you were conveying; I've been there before, as many have, I'm sure, and you know something? When someone out there is going through some kind of pain, and to read about it in a work like this, there is no greater catharsis. Nice poem!!!

Title article: The Invention Of Uncertainty, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-08-22 21:07:00

Story seems to be picking up, and the narrative has a really nice flow to it, not to mention how your description flows so nicely. I am curious, as all writers are, I think, as to where the idea came from and the setting. It's a really nice story so far; Looking forward to the next installment. Keep up the nice work.

Title article: The Invention Of Uncertainty, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-22 20:57:26

Well Written
I enjoy your poems, and this story is no different. It seems you have something bigger to say, which I believe is the key to any good story. Your writing is fantastic; the description, dialogue and the inner thoughts of the characters. The only thing I would change is that I would put the dialogue in their own paragraphs. I'll be reading part 2 shortly ")

Title article: Ramble On
Date: 2008-08-10 19:52:28

A painting of words
Reminds me of a painting, something you'd hang on the wall in your living room. The language is calming, yet I'm unnerved by the situation I'm interpreting. It seems the narrator is in some sort of emotional transgression or bind, maybe. I absolutely love the line 'Acoustic lips that smile through poetic rhyme'...I've never read such a nice description. Great job, as always!!!

Title article: Battle Royal - A Survival Strategy
Date: 2008-08-04 07:42:36

It made me laugh at the end, because I have two children and I can see how caught up they can get in some games. Your language here is a nice flowing narrative that's smart but not impossible, and until the last paragraph I never had any idea what was 'really' going on. Nice Story.

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