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A Toothy Tale

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Jessie Masoner (Behind_the_Mask)
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About Myself: Will they... Will they talk about me this way if I die, too? I was this and that. Using past tense, saying whatever they want? So this is what death is all about... ...Not for me. I won't have it!!!


Amidst the eternal waves of time
From a ripple of change shall the storm rise
Out of the abyss peer the eyes of a demon
Behold the Razgriz, its wings of black sheath
The demon soars through dark skies
Fear and death trail in its shadow beneath
Until men united wield a hallowed sabre
In final reckoning, the beast is slain
As the demon sleeps man turns on man
His blood and madness soon cover the earth
From the depths of despair awaken the Razgriz
Its black wings ablaze in majestic light

Focus. Control. Conviction. Resolve. A true ace lacks none of these attributes. Nothing can deter you from the task at hand except your own fears. This is your sky.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 19, 2008Darkening, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 201
Jul 15, 2008Some Random ThoughtsNon-Fiction 116
Jul 2, 2008A WoW Story, Chapter 3Adventure 138
Jun 23, 2008Darkening, Chapter 0Miscellaneous Stories 147
Jun 19, 2008What really happens in the wilderness.Miscellaneous Stories 150
Jun 6, 2008A WoW Story, Chapter 2Adventure 172
May 22, 2008A WoW Story, Chapter 1Adventure 259
May 20, 2008Without HerRomance 232
May 20, 2008The Three Little Pigs Pt. 4Horror 232
May 12, 2008The Three Little Pigs Pt3Horror 169
May 12, 2008The Three Little Pigs Pt2Horror 159
May 9, 2008Three Little Pigs Pt. 1Horror 161
May 8, 2008Three Little Pigs (Prologue)Horror 252
Apr 29, 2008Prelude to a wow story, Chapter 0Adventure 303

Comments

Title article: the disquiet fall
Date: 2008-08-21 17:17:26
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Perhaps I don’t have the imagination to read most poetry, I spose that is what it is, but then again I cant follow this one so. 
 
Nice try, I’d say its not you its me but then again there are a few other people who would disagree with that statement. 
 
Good luck in your future writings.

Title article: He swoops, he scores
Date: 2008-08-21 17:02:48
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That was great I remember a bird tried to take my lunch before. So I had to bust out the ninja star and attack it, but I missed and hit some kid in the eye, I blamed it on the clown. 
 
Moral of the story don’t be a clown. 
 
Hilarious little poem / story.

Title article: crazytyme
Date: 2008-08-21 16:02:40
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A look into the mind of a psychopathic killer. This is indeed something different at first I thought it was one of max booths novels because of all of the curse words, but then I realized it wasn’t and it moved a bit slow and it was over saturated with details. 
 
But it told a good story in the end. 
 
Keep up the good work.

Title article: The Butcher of Barrios
Date: 2008-08-21 14:47:45
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Hmm, once again you have me hooked. 
 
I say young sir that you are indeed an excellent writer. 
 
Perhaps one day you will become a great writer like me. (Hilarious joke I know) 
 
Perhaps I should get your autograph now before it is too late. 
 
Great job. Keep it up.

Title article: i could have loved no more!
Date: 2008-08-21 14:01:01
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I’m pretty glad that this did not have a messed up ending, I know this is coming from me, but yeah I thought that there could have been a few spaces between a few lines to make it a bit easier on the eyes but other than that I didn’t find anything wrong with it. It was appropriately descriptive and after all it was well written. 
 
Keep up the good work.

Title article: bottled UP
Date: 2008-08-21 13:52:19
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Normally something like this would mess with my eyes but because the words flowed together easily it didn’t. I found the format actually quite clever. 
 
Good job on the poem, keep up the great work, I hope to see more formatted like this from you in the future.

Title article: Before you land
Date: 2008-08-21 13:46:56
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This was great, one of the few poems I didn’t struggle to get though. 
 
Poetry just isn’t my thing. 
 
But!!! This held my attention.  
 
And I’m sure that everyone has had the dream when they are falling and they wake up like OH CRAP I WAS FALLING!!! 
 
Oh phew I’m safe. 
 
Good job.

Title article: A Reccuring Past
Date: 2008-08-21 13:38:38
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Decent story. 
 
I think you can expand on this first story and make a larger story out of it. 
 
You caught the readers’ attention within the first few sections and held it. 
 
It was formatted so that it was not difficult to read that is a bonus in my book. 
 
Well done.

Title article: Punishment
Date: 2008-08-21 12:51:22
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You have a certain way of immersing the reader in the story that only a few authors are able to do. 
 
You did not drown the reader in details that did not matter, but you did not leave the details out. 
 
This was a excellent story. 
 
and it deserves nothing less than 6 out of 5 but i cannot give it a 6 so a 5 must do for now.

Title article: They live amongst us
Date: 2008-08-21 12:36:00
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I thought this story was pretty good, it went a bit slow around the end but then again what can I expect with him standing in a corner for so long. A couple of the conversations could use some work but it’s not that big of a deal. 
 
Keep up the good work.

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 08/12/2008 08:15:16
Didja forget about WoW 4 and What Really Happens in the Wilderness 2?

Come on, Slacker

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

a wasteland
 Created On: 06/12/2008 14:08:16
dude ...

V for Vendetta fucking rules!
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 06/11/2008 12:53:33
Wow, You Got Some Weird Pictures out of nowhere,
next you will have a pic of a flying bear,
or a talking beer,

a bullet flying through a chest,
a skeleton not put to rest,
just remember to say Fuck You to the rest...
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 05/07/2008 14:41:58
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 05/07/2008 14:42:47
The story of yours that i read was really good. You also leave some really good comment on my stories. Thank you.

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