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The People From The Sky I: Man On The Moon

THE PEOPLE FROM THE SKY PART I:...

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Will they... Will they talk about me this way if I die, too? I was this and that. Using past tense, saying whatever they want? So this is what death is all about... ...Not for me. I won't have it!!!

Amidst the eternal waves of time
From a ripple of change shall the storm rise
Out of the abyss peer the eyes of a demon
Behold the Razgriz, its wings of black sheath
The demon soars through dark skies
Fear and death trail in its shadow beneath
Until men united wield a hallowed sabre
In final reckoning, the beast is slain
As the demon sleeps man turns on man
His blood and madness soon cover the earth
From the depths of despair awaken the Razgriz
Its black wings ablaze in majestic light

Focus. Control. Conviction. Resolve. A true ace lacks none of these attributes. Nothing can deter you from the task at hand except your own fears. This is your sky.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
May 22, 2008	A WoW Story, Chapter 1	Adventure	265
Jun 6, 2008	A WoW Story, Chapter 2	Adventure	179
Jul 2, 2008	A WoW Story, Chapter 3	Adventure	146
Jun 23, 2008	Darkening, Chapter 0	Miscellaneous Stories	167
Aug 19, 2008	Darkening, Chapter 1	Miscellaneous Stories	261
Apr 29, 2008	Prelude to a wow story, Chapter 0	Adventure	310
Jul 15, 2008	Some Random Thoughts	Non-Fiction	135
May 20, 2008	The Three Little Pigs Pt. 4	Horror	249
May 12, 2008	The Three Little Pigs Pt2	Horror	169
May 12, 2008	The Three Little Pigs Pt3	Horror	180
Sep 2, 2008	There Is No Me Without You	Romance	361
May 8, 2008	Three Little Pigs (Prologue)	Horror	261
May 9, 2008	Three Little Pigs Pt. 1	Horror	173
Jun 19, 2008	What really happens in the wilderness.	Miscellaneous Stories	168
May 20, 2008	Without Her	Romance	242

Comments

Total number of comments: 387

Title article: There Is No Me Without You
Date: 2008-09-05 16:31:20

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apparently you didnt read the other comments,

this doesn't have to refere to a person.

Thanks for all of the comments

Title article: There Is No Me Without You
Date: 2008-09-05 13:56:02

o.0
So if I understand you correctly, what your saying is that anyone who you love you should just love and not let your life become obsessed with that person, and that if you are obsessed with said person than that is unhealthy. However the fact that you don’t believe that somebody can have such a lasting affect on your life that if you were to try and define yourself it would bring them up thus proving that whatever you do it will somehow involve them, this is all supposition of course but I’m sure everyone has had someone who has had that lasting affect on them to the point of seeming obsessive while it is just who you are now.

Title article: There Is No Me Without You
Date: 2008-09-05 12:19:18

RE
I can understand where you would think that it is unnecessary, but have you ever passed someone you though was the hottest person in the world from far away, only to later get closer to them and find out that they are not only ugly but they have a piss poor personality. And it you would have just kept on walking and kept their image in your mind you would have been thinking about them for who knows how long.

And after naming what is so great about the person you’ve fallen for don’t you think at least when you were younger that you’d be like yep I’m in love?

But this entire poem is about love and I felt that the ending was necessary, perhaps these words were like the last words of a dieing man about his true love, and “Love Forever” are the last two things he said?

Title article: Jericho, Chapter 12
Date: 2008-09-05 10:12:54

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This was great, ramen revolution!

12345 worst numbers in the world ever I cant believe anyone would actually pick them but I guess everyone has to get lucky sometimes.

Keep up the great work!

Title article: Highly Decorated
Date: 2008-09-03 14:09:44

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I’d have to say I’ve come to enjoy your non-fiction works almost if not more than your fiction mystery works, I know it surprises even me.

I don’t even bother with new shirts anymore, that is to keep my fiancé from killing me if I get anything on the shirt in which she will get my blood on the shirt but it will be my fault in the end.

So my answers to most of her questions/demands are “Yes dear.” But alas I cannot forget to put a smile on my face when I say it otherwise she will think it is sarcasm and I will be killed either way.

Title article: Jericho, Chapter 11
Date: 2008-09-03 12:18:34

!@##$$%
Loved it,

The pop tarts peanut butter and some Pepsi is like my food around the end of the month depending on how much fast food I eat the previous month.

Lol

She slipped on the ice that was great; I can’t wait to read what is going to happen in the next chapter.

Title article: There Is No Me Without You
Date: 2008-09-03 09:23:18

so yeah...
So what your telling me is that you have never been so much in awe of a person a place or even a thing that you cant even describe why you “love” it so much. That is what I’m trying to get across to the readers and if you didn’t get that by my previous comment then you shouldn’t be commenting neh?

And I’m not really big on poetry so perhaps I’m wrong but isn’t the point of “poetry” to convey a message?

Just my opinion and if you don’t like it don’t comment on my works.

Title article: There Is No Me Without You
Date: 2008-09-02 15:42:15

Re: All
What I wanted to convey was the fact that the “Narrator” is so in Love with the person that everything about the other person is on the “Narrators” mind all of the time and at the end there just are no more words to convey because of the sheer admiration of the person. There wouldn’t be anything good enough to describe how the “Narrator” feels about the person.

Title article: Jericho, Chapter 10
Date: 2008-09-02 12:09:58

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This is a great continuation to her story, I’d have to agree that this does seem a bit hurried but the fact of the matter is that they have to hurry so that they can find happiness otherwise they will die as for the violence I believe it is necessary to the story so that the reader sees and feel what the characters are going through just to survive.

I’m interested to see what is going to happen in the next few chapters.

Keep up the great work.

Title article: Nothing Compared
Date: 2008-08-29 11:56:54

I’m not sure I liked this one too much, sure some people write about being depressed when they are but then again some people write depressing stuff when they aren’t because that’s what they are good at, and telling them to knock it off is sorta like telling you to stop writing about whatever it is that you write about, I don’t know your specialty.

Now with people who are chemically unbalanced, I think that everyone is and not everyone shows it, they should just ignore this because they are going to feel like you just asked them to bend over whilst you take a pinecone and ram it up their ass.

That’s just my opinion.

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/12/2008 08:15:16 Didja forget about WoW 4 and What Really Happens in the Wilderness 2? Come on, Slacker
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 06/12/2008 14:08:16 dude ... V for Vendetta fucking rules!
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 06/11/2008 12:53:33 Wow, You Got Some Weird Pictures out of nowhere, next you will have a pic of a flying bear, or a talking beer, a bullet flying through a chest, a skeleton not put to rest, just remember to say Fuck You to the rest...
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 05/07/2008 14:41:58 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 05/07/2008 14:42:47 The story of yours that i read was really good. You also leave some really good comment on my stories. Thank you.