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Member Since	04/25/2008
Last Online	11/20/2008
Connections	13
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Website/Blog:

www.myspace.com/djstuffisenough

About Myself:

Will they... Will they talk about me this way if I die, too? I was this and that. Using past tense, saying whatever they want? So this is what death is all about... ...Not for me. I won't have it!!!

Amidst the eternal waves of time
From a ripple of change shall the storm rise
Out of the abyss peer the eyes of a demon
Behold the Razgriz, its wings of black sheath
The demon soars through dark skies
Fear and death trail in its shadow beneath
Until men united wield a hallowed sabre
In final reckoning, the beast is slain
As the demon sleeps man turns on man
His blood and madness soon cover the earth
From the depths of despair awaken the Razgriz
Its black wings ablaze in majestic light

Focus. Control. Conviction. Resolve. A true ace lacks none of these attributes. Nothing can deter you from the task at hand except your own fears. This is your sky.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 3, 2008	Frozen Wounds, Chapter 1	Miscellaneous Stories	1161
Sep 14, 2008	Killswitch	Mystery	557
Sep 2, 2008	There Is No Me Without You	Romance	1088
Aug 19, 2008	Darkening, Chapter 1	Miscellaneous Stories	322
Jul 15, 2008	Some Random Thoughts	Non-Fiction	201
Jul 2, 2008	A WoW Story, Chapter 3	Adventure	220
Jun 23, 2008	Darkening, Chapter 0	Miscellaneous Stories	234
Jun 19, 2008	What really happens in the wilderness.	Miscellaneous Stories	241
Jun 6, 2008	A WoW Story, Chapter 2	Adventure	230
May 22, 2008	A WoW Story, Chapter 1	Adventure	320
May 20, 2008	Without Her	Romance	326
May 20, 2008	The Three Little Pigs Pt. 4	Horror	415
May 12, 2008	The Three Little Pigs Pt3	Horror	251
May 12, 2008	The Three Little Pigs Pt2	Horror	260
May 9, 2008	Three Little Pigs Pt. 1	Horror	309
May 8, 2008	Three Little Pigs (Prologue)	Horror	360
Apr 29, 2008	Prelude to a wow story, Chapter 0	Adventure	385

Comments

Title article: DOLL.
Date: 2008-08-20 14:02:20

!
I too thought it was going to be another story about a doll coming to life and killing everyone, but I have to say that what the doll was witness to was far worse that murder.

I have to agree with Phil about the layout, the single paragraph style made it a bit difficult to read at first but I soon forgot about it and was consumed by the story.

Very well done.
Keep up the great work.

Title article: in your eyes *short*
Date: 2008-08-20 13:20:00

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Hmmm, I wonder?

I don't really know what to think about this one.

As a poem its rhyming scheme is decent.

But as something that is trying to convey a message it is unclear.

perhaps the message is for you to understand.

oh well.

Decent job.

Title article: Orcs
Date: 2008-08-20 13:15:45

hmmm
Unless i'm mistaken each side was refereing to the other as orcs.

oh well.

It was a great story either way.

Not too descriptive but not too bland.

I think it ended properly but i'd also like to see more of it.

great job

Title article: Going Home
Date: 2008-08-20 12:54:09

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Loved it,

The entire story was well written and it immersed you into it.

Just flat out brilliant, there aren’t many non-zombie / horror stories that I say are brilliant but this is most defiantly with out a doubt one of the best stories I’ve read in a while.

Title article: The Necromancer
Date: 2008-08-20 12:25:55

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It was a decent story I believe it ended too soon, but it was straight and to the point and ended where in reality it would have ended.

You were descriptive enough to give the necessary details and at the same time you didn’t drown the reader in details.

It’s a good look at how some indigenous peoples of far off places (not that many now) may look at what we think is common practice.

Good work.

Title article: The Necromancer
Date: 2008-08-20 12:25:50

Title article: Suburban Hell
Date: 2008-08-20 12:06:00

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Hmmm,

I loved it; at first I was like what does Max have planned with this one? As it went along I was so hooked that I forgot that you a one demented son of a, person. The ending was the icing on the cake for me. If you decide to write more on this one I would definitely read it.

Keep up the great work.

PS. The gun with the bang flag was hilarious. I’d watch this show.

Title article: Darkening, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-19 18:38:48

@Darrin!or who ever
Its a spiritual sequel to my story Darkening.

Title article: Darkening, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-19 13:37:24

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That is the plan, i'm going to work on my WoW chapter 4, and then i believe i'll work on this and a book, it all depends.

Title article: Project 30, Chapter 21
Date: 2008-08-18 20:34:44

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WOW!!!

I had no idea.

well then again i did. last couple of chapters i was like hmmm.

GREAT WORK EVERYONE!

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Last 10 Forum Posts

Date	Subject	Category	Hits
11/20/2008 11:53:49	Re:BLAH DE DA!!!	Off-Topic	211
11/18/2008 23:38:24	Re:BLAH DE DA!!!	Off-Topic	211
11/17/2008 22:51:43	Re:BLAH DE DA!!!	Off-Topic	211
11/17/2008 22:31:11	BLAH DE DA!!!	Off-Topic	211
11/17/2008 22:17:10	Re:Allmine is great	Off-Topic	341
11/17/2008 21:58:43	Re:Allmine is great	Off-Topic	341
11/17/2008 21:55:20	Re:Need an opinion	Off-Topic	233
11/17/2008 21:54:06	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	339491
11/17/2008 21:49:45	Re:Allmine is great	Off-Topic	341
11/17/2008 21:47:19	Re:Ninjas stole my X-Box	Off-Topic	462

Connection

Jessie Masoner (Behind_the_Mask)'s connections

Amy Carter (scooby)

Matthew Daniel Carter (Pilgrim)

Michelle Huff (allmine)

Cyraus Foldger (Cyraus Foldger)

Lisa (antheerr)

Project 30 (Project 30)

Mark (Zombieman)

Edwin (Eddo36)

Billy (Vango)

Rams (Rams117)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Michelle Huff (allmine) You decide	Created On: 10/14/2008 11:10:29 Happy Birthday!!!!!!
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon) missouri	Created On: 10/01/2008 13:41:04 FYI, finally finished and posted the second chapter to "The Fall of Babylon."
Michelle Huff (allmine) Not where I wanna be	Created On: 09/16/2008 06:25:21 Edited By Michelle Huff (allmine) On: 10/01/2008 14:22:39 Yeah, I for sure know what I am thinking...what about you? Apparently not what I thought you were thinking....and apparently I am wrong.
Michelle Huff (allmine) where I should be	Created On: 09/12/2008 13:24:26 Mmm...you know what I'm thinking.....
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/12/2008 08:15:16 Didja forget about WoW 4 and What Really Happens in the Wilderness 2? Come on, Slacker
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 06/12/2008 14:08:16 dude ... V for Vendetta fucking rules!
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 06/11/2008 12:53:33 Wow, You Got Some Weird Pictures out of nowhere, next you will have a pic of a flying bear, or a talking beer, a bullet flying through a chest, a skeleton not put to rest, just remember to say Fuck You to the rest...
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 05/07/2008 14:41:58 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 05/07/2008 14:42:47 The story of yours that i read was really good. You also leave some really good comment on my stories. Thank you.