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Member Since	04/25/2008
Last Online	10/08/2008
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Website/Blog:

www.myspace.com/djstuffisenough

About Myself:

Will they... Will they talk about me this way if I die, too? I was this and that. Using past tense, saying whatever they want? So this is what death is all about... ...Not for me. I won't have it!!!

Amidst the eternal waves of time
From a ripple of change shall the storm rise
Out of the abyss peer the eyes of a demon
Behold the Razgriz, its wings of black sheath
The demon soars through dark skies
Fear and death trail in its shadow beneath
Until men united wield a hallowed sabre
In final reckoning, the beast is slain
As the demon sleeps man turns on man
His blood and madness soon cover the earth
From the depths of despair awaken the Razgriz
Its black wings ablaze in majestic light

Focus. Control. Conviction. Resolve. A true ace lacks none of these attributes. Nothing can deter you from the task at hand except your own fears. This is your sky.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 3, 2008	Frozen Wounds, Chapter 1	Miscellaneous Stories	1016
Sep 14, 2008	Killswitch	Mystery	453
Sep 2, 2008	There Is No Me Without You	Romance	991
Aug 19, 2008	Darkening, Chapter 1	Miscellaneous Stories	296
Jul 15, 2008	Some Random Thoughts	Non-Fiction	165
Jul 2, 2008	A WoW Story, Chapter 3	Adventure	182
Jun 23, 2008	Darkening, Chapter 0	Miscellaneous Stories	207
Jun 19, 2008	What really happens in the wilderness.	Miscellaneous Stories	214
Jun 6, 2008	A WoW Story, Chapter 2	Adventure	204
May 22, 2008	A WoW Story, Chapter 1	Adventure	295
May 20, 2008	Without Her	Romance	274
May 20, 2008	The Three Little Pigs Pt. 4	Horror	336
May 12, 2008	The Three Little Pigs Pt3	Horror	212
May 12, 2008	The Three Little Pigs Pt2	Horror	214
May 9, 2008	Three Little Pigs Pt. 1	Horror	217
May 8, 2008	Three Little Pigs (Prologue)	Horror	302
Apr 29, 2008	Prelude to a wow story, Chapter 0	Adventure	344

Comments

Title article: TALESVILLE TERRORS
Date: 2008-08-28 10:55:44

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That was different, but it was great; All of the references that got mashed up along the way hilarious. How we (The reader) took the perspective that he was talking to us about it was great, something I haven’t seen too many times before.

Great job. Keep it up.

Title article: Darkening, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-27 13:06:14

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Thank you for reading the story.

And thank you for your comments.

I have started the next chapter is should be finished within the next few days.

Title article: I Am
Date: 2008-08-26 12:26:25

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That was indeed something different, at first I thought it was an assassin heading to his target, but it turned out to be your cat.

Very tricky of you.

Cats name is reference to Maximums from Gladiator?

Well-played young sir well played.

Title article: Das Babu
Date: 2008-08-26 12:10:25

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Mixed feelings about this, on one hand you have a well-written well-composed story. On the other you have your take on the story about the lover who came back to see his / her darling one last time, before watching over said darling, something that has been done by many people while this is not a negative it is not a positive either.

The details seemed to flow at first then they seemed to dry up and nothing came of them and while I don’t think there should be much added perhaps around the end their conversation should be edited to sound less forced.

Keep up the good work.

Title article: Paranoid/Forget
Date: 2008-08-26 11:49:22

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This was decent, it has the potential to be something more, but then again it doesn’t have to be this extravagant story it is what it’s supposed to be. It conveys the message that the cancer is causing her to lose her memory and that in turn is causing her to be paranoid.

Keep it up.

Title article: No Forgiveness
Date: 2008-08-26 11:11:44

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Liked it.

I thought it was hilarious how he killed the intruder, well who he thought as an intrueder, and then he went to sleep.

Sucks for his wife, that’s gotta be a bad day to say the least.

Nice work.

Keep it up.

Title article: Antz
Date: 2008-08-26 11:03:13

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That was better than what I expected.

The tents and little fires, and a tap on the milk, hilarious visual effects.

Reminder to self: get a night light so the ants wont burn down my house, just imagine having to write yourself a note like that.

Great job.

Title article: Trying to Concentrate on Freedom
Date: 2008-08-26 10:58:46

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I thought it was something completely different than it actually came out to be.

It was well written, better than I could have wrote it at least.

It immersed the reader smoothly into and out of the story.

Left me a bit sad.

Title article: The Chelsea Apartment
Date: 2008-08-26 10:46:12

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That was unusual to say the least.

First I thought she was going to kill him but now I just think she’s just a psycho.

Oh well what can be expected after what her boy friend did to her?

Well written, keep up the good work.

Title article: Stolen Innocence, Childhood Lost
Date: 2008-08-26 10:34:13

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I’m glad you didn’t make it go any further than that, at least in the story.

It had a creepy feel to it.

very very creepy. to say the least.

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Jessie Masoner (Behind_the_Mask)'s connections

Amy Carter (scooby)

Matthew Daniel Carter (Pilgrim)

Michelle Huff (allmine)

Cyraus Foldger (Cyraus Foldger)

Lisa (antheerr)

Project 30 (Project 30)

Mark (Zombieman)

Edwin (Eddo36)

Billy (Vango)

Rams (Rams117)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Nathan Weaver (onyxdragon) missouri	Created On: 10/01/2008 13:41:04 FYI, finally finished and posted the second chapter to "The Fall of Babylon."
Michelle Huff (allmine) Not where I wanna be	Created On: 09/16/2008 06:25:21 Edited By Michelle Huff (allmine) On: 10/01/2008 14:22:39 Yeah, I for sure know what I am thinking...what about you? Apparently not what I thought you were thinking....and apparently I am wrong.
Michelle Huff (allmine) where I should be	Created On: 09/12/2008 13:24:26 Mmm...you know what I'm thinking.....
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/12/2008 08:15:16 Didja forget about WoW 4 and What Really Happens in the Wilderness 2? Come on, Slacker
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 06/12/2008 14:08:16 dude ... V for Vendetta fucking rules!
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 06/11/2008 12:53:33 Wow, You Got Some Weird Pictures out of nowhere, next you will have a pic of a flying bear, or a talking beer, a bullet flying through a chest, a skeleton not put to rest, just remember to say Fuck You to the rest...
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 05/07/2008 14:41:58 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 05/07/2008 14:42:47 The story of yours that i read was really good. You also leave some really good comment on my stories. Thank you.