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About Myself:

Will they... Will they talk about me this way if I die, too? I was this and that. Using past tense, saying whatever they want? So this is what death is all about... ...Not for me. I won't have it!!!

Amidst the eternal waves of time
From a ripple of change shall the storm rise
Out of the abyss peer the eyes of a demon
Behold the Razgriz, its wings of black sheath
The demon soars through dark skies
Fear and death trail in its shadow beneath
Until men united wield a hallowed sabre
In final reckoning, the beast is slain
As the demon sleeps man turns on man
His blood and madness soon cover the earth
From the depths of despair awaken the Razgriz
Its black wings ablaze in majestic light

Focus. Control. Conviction. Resolve. A true ace lacks none of these attributes. Nothing can deter you from the task at hand except your own fears. This is your sky.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 19, 2008	Darkening, Chapter 1	Miscellaneous Stories	201
Jul 15, 2008	Some Random Thoughts	Non-Fiction	116
Jul 2, 2008	A WoW Story, Chapter 3	Adventure	138
Jun 23, 2008	Darkening, Chapter 0	Miscellaneous Stories	147
Jun 19, 2008	What really happens in the wilderness.	Miscellaneous Stories	150
Jun 6, 2008	A WoW Story, Chapter 2	Adventure	172
May 22, 2008	A WoW Story, Chapter 1	Adventure	259
May 20, 2008	Without Her	Romance	232
May 20, 2008	The Three Little Pigs Pt. 4	Horror	232
May 12, 2008	The Three Little Pigs Pt3	Horror	169
May 12, 2008	The Three Little Pigs Pt2	Horror	159
May 9, 2008	Three Little Pigs Pt. 1	Horror	161
May 8, 2008	Three Little Pigs (Prologue)	Horror	252
Apr 29, 2008	Prelude to a wow story, Chapter 0	Adventure	303

Comments

Total number of comments: 378

Title article: Nothing Compared
Date: 2008-08-29 11:56:54

I’m not sure I liked this one too much, sure some people write about being depressed when they are but then again some people write depressing stuff when they aren’t because that’s what they are good at, and telling them to knock it off is sorta like telling you to stop writing about whatever it is that you write about, I don’t know your specialty.

Now with people who are chemically unbalanced, I think that everyone is and not everyone shows it, they should just ignore this because they are going to feel like you just asked them to bend over whilst you take a pinecone and ram it up their ass.

That’s just my opinion.

Title article: ALL SHOOK UP.
Date: 2008-08-29 11:41:43

!!!
It was well written, the subject matter is a bit disturbing to me, but it is what happens to some people, it is hard on the spouse but not nearly as hard as it is on the young woman.

As usual your poetry is grade a, standard.

Title article: Trippy Tale
Date: 2008-08-29 10:55:30

That was pretty cool, i liked it because some of my friends tell me that they do stuff like this when they are high.

Funny and serious at the same time, keep up the good work

Title article: Befitting the Undead
Date: 2008-08-29 10:46:54

DANGIT!!
Here it hought i was going to read some poetry on the undead but nooo, now i'm sad, i want your money back!

No i thought this was pretty well done!.

LOL zombie Porn!

Title article: Enchanted Garden
Date: 2008-08-28 14:22:19

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This was a great entrance for something greater that can happen.

Decent “Love” story standard issue being taken to a “wonderful place” and proposed to.

You wrote it in a unique way, at least to me it was unique.

I like the storm at the end, left room for something bad to happen in the next part.

Keep up the good work.

Title article: Pretty Fly for a Russian Guy
Date: 2008-08-28 12:23:15

!@@#
Hilarious.

Pretty fly for a white guy, hilarious song.

Russian spy for the Olympics, great then he shat his intestines out awesome.

“I’m such a fly guy.” Best line, he is so full of himself.

Or

I’ll but them a bunch of crack and give it out for free.

Hilarious.

Keep up the good work.

Title article: TALESVILLE TERRORS
Date: 2008-08-28 10:55:44

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That was different, but it was great; All of the references that got mashed up along the way hilarious. How we (The reader) took the perspective that he was talking to us about it was great, something I haven’t seen too many times before.

Great job. Keep it up.

Title article: Darkening, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-27 13:06:14

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Thank you for reading the story.

And thank you for your comments.

I have started the next chapter is should be finished within the next few days.

Title article: I Am
Date: 2008-08-26 12:26:25

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That was indeed something different, at first I thought it was an assassin heading to his target, but it turned out to be your cat.

Very tricky of you.

Cats name is reference to Maximums from Gladiator?

Well-played young sir well played.

Title article: Das Babu
Date: 2008-08-26 12:10:25

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Mixed feelings about this, on one hand you have a well-written well-composed story. On the other you have your take on the story about the lover who came back to see his / her darling one last time, before watching over said darling, something that has been done by many people while this is not a negative it is not a positive either.

The details seemed to flow at first then they seemed to dry up and nothing came of them and while I don’t think there should be much added perhaps around the end their conversation should be edited to sound less forced.

Keep up the good work.

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/12/2008 08:15:16 Didja forget about WoW 4 and What Really Happens in the Wilderness 2? Come on, Slacker
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 06/12/2008 14:08:16 dude ... V for Vendetta fucking rules!
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 06/11/2008 12:53:33 Wow, You Got Some Weird Pictures out of nowhere, next you will have a pic of a flying bear, or a talking beer, a bullet flying through a chest, a skeleton not put to rest, just remember to say Fuck You to the rest...
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 05/07/2008 14:41:58 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 05/07/2008 14:42:47 The story of yours that i read was really good. You also leave some really good comment on my stories. Thank you.

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