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Member Since	04/20/2008
Last Online	09/04/2008
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About Myself:

I write a self-published, photo copied zine, called Something Indecent. It has stories and comics, false ads, along with fake news. Original? Impossible. It's nothing new but it's a good way to help forget about how much MONEY I owe the gov't. $8K!! Ooooohhhh why does debt have to sting so bad? Why can't we all be happy to owe large sums of money to multiple parties? 'Debt makes you dance.' That should be the truth. Well, maybe if I dance my debt will turn into fiction while reality hands me a new pair of shoes.

So yeah I made a myspace page awhile back but haven't done anything with it in months. I don't have internet at home anymore since I moved so I can't update it at work but if anyone is interested the url is: myspace.com/somethingindecent (i think)

I made the audio stories when I was drunk so they're not as uuuhhh lets say intelligible as they could be. But it was definately fun at the time. Oh yeah. Get a friend to play guitar and read a story into a microphone with a cigarette pinched between your fingers and a beer in the adjacent hand and you will have a good time. Seriously, you should try it.

But yes, once I have the ability to resuscitate the site I'm going to do more of those (possibly a bit more sober) and try to liven' the thing up. And by that time I'll have been able to post stories on here again. Sooooo yeah, check it out if you want to hear a drunk man babbling.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 28, 2008	Befitting the Undead	Poetry	97
Aug 24, 2008	From Stagnant Water	Humor	242
Aug 23, 2008	Brown Back River	Humor	97
Aug 3, 2008	Continuing Stagnation	Poetry	123
Jul 31, 2008	The Graveyard Greens	Humor	448
Jul 26, 2008	Peanut Butter and Doom	Humor	608
Jul 12, 2008	Repugnant Disjointment	Poetry	145
Jul 11, 2008	Something Gross	Humor	143
Jul 9, 2008	Me Interrupted.	Humor	135
Jul 5, 2008	Testing My Pencil	Humor	186
Jun 28, 2008	A Something Indecent Interview	Humor	166
Jun 28, 2008	A Short Morning	Miscellaneous Stories	150
Jun 25, 2008	Something Cat	Humor	345
Jun 22, 2008	How To Lose Weight And Make Friends With Proper Diet.	Humor	545
Jun 22, 2008	Good Deeds Part 4/4	Humor	113
Jun 19, 2008	Good Deeds 3/4	Humor	137
Jun 16, 2008	Good Deeds Part 2/4	Humor	114
Jun 14, 2008	Good Deeds Part 1/4	Humor	133
Jun 9, 2008	Ranch Violation	Humor	224
Jun 4, 2008	The Day After Betty (A Rude Awakening)	Non-Fiction	219

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Comments

Total number of comments: 586

Title article: Nothing Compared
Date: 2008-09-04 22:09:50

I liked it. I've been depressed and I like reading depressing stories and if it helps for you to write about it then fine, that's great. But I don't think we have to bash someone who is just trying to relate on how they overcame or at least came in control of their struggle.

But yeah I thought that this was a good poem that could also be rewritten as a point of view of someone with less seeing those with more through jaded and unsympathetic eyes. But then again that would probably have to written by someone who comes from this point of view. Anyway what the Hell do I know. I get through my depression through humor. Which I don't advocate claiming it will solve anything. It just works for me. The End. This comment........is over.

Title article: ALL SHOOK UP.
Date: 2008-09-04 21:55:25

This was depressing. And creepy. It was also dark. And dismal. I liked the way you formatted this. It was easy to read and melded line to line. You seemed to have gotten inside this woman's head and really messed her up! What did you do to her Terry!? No but really good poem.

Title article: The Snowy Afternoon
Date: 2008-09-04 21:49:32

Yeah this could be turned into something bigger but as it is it's still an introspective look at this depressed girl who can only find self gratification through mutilation. I've known too many people like that. Good story.

Title article: Trippy Tale
Date: 2008-09-04 21:45:15

HA! Needless to say I enjoyed this quite a bit. It's always nice to get different subject matter in the poetry on here. I didn't find anything particularly wrong with the rhyming or flow. Great ending with a fine build up. Good work sir.

Title article: Highly Decorated
Date: 2008-09-04 21:20:45

Great writing on protraying this article of clothing as a companion rather than a material possession. I like for inanimate objects to come alive in a sense on the page or screen mind you. Very entertaining little fromp Phil. Did I just say fromp? Is that even a word?

That I didn't spell right.

Title article: Sahara We See
Date: 2008-09-04 20:47:04

Man that was different. I liked the crazy but confident way in which you wrote the character. She's fucking crazy, but why shouldn't she be? Just laying on her stomach waiting for answers.....that hopefully don't come from the tiles.

Title article: Refill
Date: 2008-09-04 20:42:22

Nice way of pulling a 180 at the end. Good piece of writing here. The two girls did seem similar but then again......maybe they are. I would've liked this to be longer but then again that's what happens when you like a story and have to see it end.

Title article: The Apocalypse of Blythe
Date: 2008-09-04 20:30:13

Good job on conveying the anger of Blythe. I really wanted her to kill Garron and was happy when it finally happened. In a darker part of my mind I see your ending as having Mala be set up or killed. Which I kind of like since she was so weak. I also wanted the father to suffer but you can't kill 'em all. Good writing.

Title article: Misfire
Date: 2008-09-04 20:00:31

That was pretty sweet. I'm just glad this isn't another poem about self loathing or love. Great use of the words to aid the reader in visualizing the events. Great last line to end on. I could almost see it being zoomed out as if in a movie.

Title article: FIRST SEX.
Date: 2008-09-04 19:56:21

I don't remember the first time I had sex. I just remember waking up and knowing that I had to leave and never see this person again. Not truly romantic in any way except the fling. But then again it's all part of the game. It can be beautiful and it can be ugly. Often with the same person. :)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/04/2008 22:09:47 I hate you.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/04/2008 20:03:15 Hey, man, don't blame that shit on me, alright? Dogs fucked the pope, it is NOT my fault. Now ... where the hell are those golf shoes?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/04/2008 19:53:10 You what??? When the hell did this happen? Why didn't I know about it? What the hell are you trying to pull, man? Huh? I'll sick the fucking leaches on you. One by one they'll suck your blood you son of a bitch!
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/04/2008 19:45:38 I knew you wanted me to know before you wanted me to know. I know, Jason. I know.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/04/2008 19:07:27 Yeah ... that story took a whole different turn that what i thought it'd be about ... Yeah, I need to catch up on the stories on here, too. I haven't any of the new stuff in a couple days.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/04/2008 18:55:22 i know, I'm a blood thirsty psychopath ready to annoy the shit out of you ... beware! hey, I just started that new story posted called Missing and it's really good so far. Not horror or anything but crime. Kind of like that book Gone Baby Gone. Knock knock ... i kill you!
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/04/2008 18:35:30 It's always fun to pick a random name in the phone book and call them like ten times seperated throughout the day. Each time asking for somebody (let's say I'm callin' for Jason). They get so pissed off. "Jason isn't here! There is no fucking Jason that lives here!" Then on the eleventh call make a different voice and say, "Hello? This is Jason. Any messages for me?" Always a fun thing to do when bored.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/04/2008 17:55:40 You get many prank phone calls there?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/04/2008 16:57:49 Fuckin' spicy isn't it?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/04/2008 16:32:03 No matter how tempting back cracking is, there is always those horrid consequences. Goddamn laws of physics.