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Online Status	ONLINE
Member Since	04/20/2008
Last Online	09/05/2008
Connections	16
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About Myself:

I write a self-published, photo copied zine, called Something Indecent. It has stories and comics, false ads, along with fake news. Original? Impossible. It's nothing new but it's a good way to help forget about how much MONEY I owe the gov't. $8K!! Ooooohhhh why does debt have to sting so bad? Why can't we all be happy to owe large sums of money to multiple parties? 'Debt makes you dance.' That should be the truth. Well, maybe if I dance my debt will turn into fiction while reality hands me a new pair of shoes.

So yeah I made a myspace page awhile back but haven't done anything with it in months. I don't have internet at home anymore since I moved so I can't update it at work but if anyone is interested the url is: myspace.com/somethingindecent (i think)

I made the audio stories when I was drunk so they're not as uuuhhh lets say intelligible as they could be. But it was definately fun at the time. Oh yeah. Get a friend to play guitar and read a story into a microphone with a cigarette pinched between your fingers and a beer in the adjacent hand and you will have a good time. Seriously, you should try it.

But yes, once I have the ability to resuscitate the site I'm going to do more of those (possibly a bit more sober) and try to liven' the thing up. And by that time I'll have been able to post stories on here again. Sooooo yeah, check it out if you want to hear a drunk man babbling.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Aug 28, 2008	Befitting the Undead	Poetry	97
Aug 24, 2008	From Stagnant Water	Humor	259
Aug 23, 2008	Brown Back River	Humor	100
Aug 3, 2008	Continuing Stagnation	Poetry	124
Jul 31, 2008	The Graveyard Greens	Humor	451
Jul 26, 2008	Peanut Butter and Doom	Humor	609
Jul 12, 2008	Repugnant Disjointment	Poetry	146
Jul 11, 2008	Something Gross	Humor	144
Jul 9, 2008	Me Interrupted.	Humor	137
Jul 5, 2008	Testing My Pencil	Humor	187
Jun 28, 2008	A Something Indecent Interview	Humor	168
Jun 28, 2008	A Short Morning	Miscellaneous Stories	152
Jun 25, 2008	Something Cat	Humor	347
Jun 22, 2008	How To Lose Weight And Make Friends With Proper Diet.	Humor	547
Jun 22, 2008	Good Deeds Part 4/4	Humor	114
Jun 19, 2008	Good Deeds 3/4	Humor	139
Jun 16, 2008	Good Deeds Part 2/4	Humor	115
Jun 14, 2008	Good Deeds Part 1/4	Humor	134
Jun 9, 2008	Ranch Violation	Humor	225
Jun 4, 2008	The Day After Betty (A Rude Awakening)	Non-Fiction	221

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Comments

Title article: dark surrender
Date: 2008-06-22 17:35:08

I agree. This was a truly gripping story. It kept me captivated the entire time. You did a really good job of writing this.

Title article: The Doberman
Date: 2008-06-22 17:23:54

Those things are scary as shit! But yes nice description of the dobermans loyalty and ferocity.

Title article: When I'm Alone...
Date: 2008-06-22 17:20:46

How would anybody notice him in a shed? Get that hobo out on the streets for some pity lovin! But yeah you should try to develope this some more. And explain why he has no family just because of booze and gambling. Maybe he stole from them and they disowned him.

Title article: Cracktor part 1, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-06-22 17:17:56

You should read this out loud so you can fix some of the wording mistakes. I don't get what you're going at with this but that doesn't really matter I guess. 17 year old pedophile huh? He's starten' early.

Title article: Death
Date: 2008-06-22 17:13:06

-There are some words misspelled from typing too fast.

+I liked the description you use for death and dying. That was a nice build up at the end.

Title article: Happiness at Last
Date: 2008-06-22 17:08:00

Nicely put. It flows beautifully.

Title article: Singapore
Date: 2008-06-22 17:02:19

-Could be cleaned up a little. Should be a little longer to make it a fuller story.

+I really liked it when he bit down on her trachea. Opening with a severed arm in his mouth was awesome. So was the end with the contamination.

Title article: The Ridge
Date: 2008-06-22 16:57:42

Crazy
-You need to reread this and fix some of the errors in sentences.

+The writing was really good and the story kept me on the edge. The animal carcasses was a good touch. Nice twist ending with the infection. Good work.

Title article: When Hell Freezes, Chapter 0
Date: 2008-06-22 16:44:26

-You should reread this and fix the words that need past participles. It's also confusing and jumpy.

+The descriptions and thoughts of the characters are well written and intriguing.

I think a rewrite would make this story better.

Title article: Suicide
Date: 2008-06-22 16:24:10

I also think you meant to put "And so it ends not WITH a bang,"

I liked it. It was straight forward, dark, and short.

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Connection

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)'s connections

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Anna DeVine (Sad Sara)

Daniel (thickblueline)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/05/2008 22:34:57 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 09/05/2008 22:35:44 oh and what is this something else? spill it. nope, my mom is watching bad boys on hbo. also, i have no fucking clue on what space ghost is.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/05/2008 22:19:55 well just go down to the office covered in crack sores and exclaim "gimmie some welfare or i'm gonna eat my baby!" they can't refuse, man. Nope, i forgot. i'll do it in the morning, though. I'm done with downloading tonight. how's that script coming along?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/05/2008 21:53:34 Yeah, they're certainly up there. Yep. Well, if I planned everything out correctly than there should be three chapters left of the story to write. Haha, yeah okay maybe I will. Crack is a terrific way to get on welfare. They just can't turn you down!
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/05/2008 21:26:58 Gee ... I wonder how you plan on doing that I've been on a Bad Religion binge the past two hours
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/05/2008 21:03:49 Are you implying that I'm stupid? Something weird, actually. I was carrying a bag of garbage down stairs to dump it in the dumpster and I tripped and tumbled down an entire set of stairs. When i looked up there was this bald dude with a biker jacket on staring at me. "Fuckin niggers, man. What are ya gonna do about them?" he asked me, and went on his way. I was left on the carpet, covered with some kind of repulsive liquid from the trash, dumbfounded. People are fucking out there.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/05/2008 20:40:33 She quit because her boss's name was Bob? Well, I suppose people have quit for stranger reasons. Now why would you want to go and do something crazy like that?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/04/2008 22:09:47 I hate you.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/04/2008 20:03:15 Hey, man, don't blame that shit on me, alright? Dogs fucked the pope, it is NOT my fault. Now ... where the hell are those golf shoes?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/04/2008 19:53:10 You what??? When the hell did this happen? Why didn't I know about it? What the hell are you trying to pull, man? Huh? I'll sick the fucking leaches on you. One by one they'll suck your blood you son of a bitch!
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/04/2008 19:45:38 I knew you wanted me to know before you wanted me to know. I know, Jason. I know.